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ghazal -
7th July 2006, 04:38 PM
hi.
gazal kehna aek huner hai jo akser kabhi kabhaar dil sae ubher aati hai .iss martaba Gazal ki zabaan gosh-ae guzaar hai.bus samajhnae wala dil chaahiyae GHAZAL Maera ghum raha hai shaamil,maerae nazm ki zabaan main Marae tarzae guftagoo main,maerae dil kii daastaan main Mujhae chord ker gyaa woh,sare-raah,tanhaa tanhaa Maera dil gaya hai peechae,jo mila hai caarwaan main Rahae jung aur jadel main,yunhi zindagi ganwaatae Tumhaen kuch khaber nahin hai,kae sukoon hai amaan main Jo naheen hai soz pinhaan,wahi shab hai kaali,kaali Kae khalish hai chaand jaesa,marae dil kae aasmaan main Raho door door sab sae,na kisii sae dil lagaaoo Huyae kaamyaab samjhoo,tum her aek imthihaan main Usae kaesae main nikaaloon,kisii aur ghum kii khaatir Jo kae aaj tak raha hai,maerae chotae sae makaan main Gul-e-taar taar kaesae banae wajhhae shaadmaani Usae phaenk dogae kal tum kisii doosrae jahaan main Kahaen RAZ tum sae kaesae,bhalaa baat kya hoyee hai Nahin baat jo hoyee thi,maerae wehm aur gumaan main RAZIA YASMEEN RAZ |
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bhut mubarakbaad -
7th July 2006, 05:01 PM
razia ji is pyari c koshish kay liye bhut mubarak baad.....bhut achi soach hai......or yeh share to bhut pyara hai.....
Rahae jung aur jadel main,yunhi zindagi ganwaatae Tumhaen kuch khaber nahin hai,kae sukoon hai amaan main.... is main thori c tabdeeli ki hai main hai to gustakhi lakin app batana theek hai..... Rahae jung aur jadel main,yunhi zindagi ganwaatae Tumhaen khaber nahi,kae sukoon hai aman amaan main....... mere khyaal main yeh yu hota to behtar thaa.......appka dost raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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6th December 2010, 12:13 PM
Usae kaesae main nikaaloon,kisii aur ghum kii khaatir
Jo kae aaj tak raha hai,maerae chotae sae makaan main Subhan_allah.........tumhari dard bhari batein tumhein bhale takleef deti ho par mujhe to bada maza deti hai. Bohat khoob rahi yeh peshkash. Yeh andaaz ab kam dikhayee deta hai..........thoda short cut me bayaan karne lagi ho dard ko shayed isiliye. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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6th December 2010, 01:13 PM
bahut khoob............................................. ......
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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6th December 2010, 05:03 PM
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aadaab khaalaa jaan mashallah mashallah subhaaanallah subhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanallah aaj aisaa lagaa ki tabiyat wajd me aa gayi ho kal ki khalish ka sadde baab hi nahi huwaa balki waafir miqdaar me dile naadaaN ki rafoo garee ka saamaan bhi paida kiyaa .. aaj is qadar khushi ka ehsaas huwaa ki dil ne chaahaa ki is ghazal ko safaha e qirtaas pe utaarun aor baar baar use choomoo .. aaj pahlee baar alfaaz saath nahi de rahe hain dil me gar che toofaan maojzan hai taaham alfaaz ka lebaadah orhne se mukar rahaa hai .. hotaa hai ki shiddat e jazbaat insaan ki taaqate goyaayi salb kar letee hai aor shaayad yahee kisee ghazal ki meraaj hai ke apne qaaree ko mashoor karke use khud se begaanah banaa de aaj aap is khud se judaa rooh ka salaam qobool karen apne hi dosst ka sher yaad aa gayaa basad hairat mujhe qaatil ne dekhaa main apne jism ke baahar kharaa thaa khaala is angusht e larzeedah mazeed likhne se qaasir hain aaj ye ouqdah bhi waa huwaa ki kabhi kabhi aisaa mor bhi aataa hai ki sab kuchh hote huye bhi insaan tahee daaman ho jaata hai daad nahi dungaa aaj aap meree GOYAAYI hi qabool karlen allaah aap ko aabaad o shaadaab rakkhe apkaa masood hassaas |
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7th December 2010, 12:00 PM
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Boht KHoooob GHazal Kahi Yasmeen Raaz Saheba....! Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai.... Qabool Farmayen.... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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7th December 2010, 01:45 PM
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Mujhae yaad rakhna,iltija hai yehi Shukriya alfaaz sae alfaaz jurdtae hain to aek ghazal ki tashkeel hoti hai ,Jo ghazal dil kae jazbaat ki tarjumani karae wahi ghazal kehlati hai Maeri yehi koshish rahi hai kae main apnae khalam ko burayee aur nafrat kae khilaaf aek hatiyaar bana ker istamaal karoon shayed kabhi maeri koshishaen kabhi rung lae hi aayaen chaand na sahi aek diya hi banoon Jo andhaerae ko door ker sakae, razia |
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7th December 2010, 05:01 PM
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