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Kabhi unaki khamoshi ki awaaj sunati
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Kabhi unaki khamoshi ki awaaj sunati - 12th May 2007, 03:22 PM

Is rachana me mene mata pita ke pyar or vishvas ko shabdo.n me piroya hai jo ve apne bachho.n se karte hai......magar fir bhi kuchh bachhe ese bhi hote hi jinhe lagta hai ki unake mata pita shayad unaki jindagi me dakhal andaji karte hai....bachhe anjane me unhe bahut dukh bhi pahunchate hai magar fir bhi mata pita kabhi apne bachho.n se shikayat nahi karte......bas kuchh bhavnao.n ko pesh kar rahi hun is ummid ke sath ki shayd kuchh apne mata pita ko samjh sake...ummid karti hun ki aap logo ka sath milega


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Kabhi unaki khamoshi ki awaaj sunati
Kabhi unake sath sagar ki gahrai napti
To kabhi usaki athah seemao.n ko
Ek dayre me kaid karne ki nakam koshish karti
Kabhi sooraj ke nikalne ka swagat karti
To kabhi usake doobane ke dard ko bant ti
Shayad is kadar hi chattan
Anek gum apne me samet kar bhi
Jindagi ki tarah adig rahti

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very beautiful - 14th May 2007, 12:44 PM

u r true.. thanks for sharing it with us ji..
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Is rachana me mene mata pita ke pyar or vishvas ko shabdo.n me piroya hai jo ve apne bachho.n se karte hai......magar fir bhi kuchh bachhe ese bhi hote hi jinhe lagta hai ki unake mata pita shayad unaki jindagi me dakhal andaji karte hai....bachhe anjane me unhe bahut dukh bhi pahunchate hai magar fir bhi mata pita kabhi apne bachho.n se shikayat nahi karte......bas kuchh bhavnao.n ko pesh kar rahi hun is ummid ke sath ki shayd kuchh apne mata pita ko samjh sake...ummid karti hun ki aap logo ka sath milega


Ek chattan
Lahro.n se til til ktati
Aur lahro.n ko panah deti
Kabhi unaki khamoshi ki awaaj sunati
Kabhi unake sath sagar ki gahrai napti
To kabhi usaki athah seemao.n ko
Ek dayre me kaid karne ki nakam koshish karti
Kabhi sooraj ke nikalne ka swagat karti
To kabhi usake doobane ke dard ko bant ti
Shayad is kadar hi chattan
Anek gum apne me samet kar bhi
Jindagi ki tarah adig rahti

medha jain
   
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14th May 2007, 07:38 PM

wah medha ji kya likhti hai aap . kya kaha hai aap naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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16th June 2007, 04:09 PM

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Is rachana me mene mata pita ke pyar or vishvas ko shabdo.n me piroya hai jo ve apne bachho.n se karte hai......magar fir bhi kuchh bachhe ese bhi hote hi jinhe lagta hai ki unake mata pita shayad unaki jindagi me dakhal andaji karte hai....bachhe anjane me unhe bahut dukh bhi pahunchate hai magar fir bhi mata pita kabhi apne bachho.n se shikayat nahi karte......bas kuchh bhavnao.n ko pesh kar rahi hun is ummid ke sath ki shayd kuchh apne mata pita ko samjh sake...ummid karti hun ki aap logo ka sath milega


Ek chattan
Lahro.n se til til ktati
Aur lahro.n ko panah deti
Kabhi unaki khamoshi ki awaaj sunati
Kabhi unake sath sagar ki gahrai napti
To kabhi usaki athah seemao.n ko
Ek dayre me kaid karne ki nakam koshish karti
Kabhi sooraj ke nikalne ka swagat karti
To kabhi usake doobane ke dard ko bant ti
Shayad is kadar hi chattan
Anek gum apne me samet kar bhi
Jindagi ki tarah adig rahti

medha jain
maata pitaa ko chaTTAn ke saath aur bachchoN ke samundra ke lahroN ke saath.. kaafio achchha taalmel hai.. yuuN hii likhate raheN.. daad haazir hai..

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