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20th June 2005, 12:23 PM
hello friends....writin some thin on my own after some time...ur valuable suggestions r always welcome...
On a rainy day I met her for the first time That was the most beautiful day of my life Stars shone more than ever before Rain was more beautiful like never before She looked like an angel Who came from heaven to take care of me I love her from deep inside But she was never in my stride I said "I love you" She said "you are my best friend" Should I feel happy that she came in to my life Or sad that she'll never be my wife I really don't know Oh! I love this rain so much It was there with me to share best moments of my life And now when I'm sad It is still with me to share my pain Thanks Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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20th June 2005, 12:29 PM
Hi Karthik Bro,
Well Written buddy... Rain and me..... one of my fav topics... Well If it pains let it rain.. for once it rains away a Rainbow is not far away... Take Care Rohin |
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20th June 2005, 09:33 PM
hello Karthik
Amazingly written rainand me....yes its my fav topic too  truely said by Rohin, Well If it pains let it rain.. for once it rains away a Rainbow is not far away... god bless you Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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20th June 2005, 10:22 PM
Very interesting...Karthik Bhai!
Thanks Danny... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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21st June 2005, 12:47 PM
hey karthik......
wat can i say....!!! very well written.... ................... ................ ........ no words to say/...... keep writing.. bye take care... |
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21st June 2005, 12:58 PM
Karthik ...
intresting, amazing, fantastic, or so touchy ,, i m really enjoying it... keep it up Urs Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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21st June 2005, 01:05 PM
hey karthik dear its very well written buddy.just carry on writing like this.
aapka LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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21st June 2005, 05:16 PM
rohin bhayya....thanks a lot for readin it....nice tht u liked it....
yes it is my fav topic too....as u've said.....i'm desperately waitin for the rainbow.....don no if i'll c it some time ne ways take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st June 2005, 05:18 PM
priya my sis....how r u dear????
felt great readin ur reply.... n yes i'm waitin only for the rainbow now keep comin take care ur bro Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st June 2005, 05:58 PM
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well well all i can say is that man u have the ability to express ur thoughts. gr8. this one was awesome. thx buddy for sending me pm. i read it n dont worry i m back among all of u. was away to chandigarh n just came back. u were worried tht i wont come here anymore but aisa kuch nahi hai. dont worry n smile buddy. this was amazingly well expressed by u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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21st June 2005, 06:06 PM
hello jas.... great to c u back ......well u went to chandigarh n dint even tel tht u were goin to leave .....u cud hav given a mesg naa...
ne ways...happy tht ur back... well...vat ever i rite u appreciate....my pleasure tht u liked the poem take care n come online yaar Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st June 2005, 06:08 PM
danny bhayya.......nice tht u liked the poem.....but
aap amanush se danny kab bane...... take care keep readin Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st June 2005, 06:14 PM
hey mano...
no words????kyun???? i'm there with u when u hav no words to say i'm there with u to help u express urself when ur speechless i'm always there for u  howz it????not so khaas...kya karun yaar on da spot..keep readin great to c ur reply take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st June 2005, 06:16 PM
kunal bhayya....u made my day readin n appreciatin my words....
delighted to c ur reply....keep comin take care bhayya Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st June 2005, 09:47 PM
hello lucky ji.....nice tht u liked it....n yaar ...thanks for the reply.....keep comin this way..
u take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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22nd June 2005, 12:34 AM
hi karthik!
beautifully written once again! or if i wanted to lie...very stupid ...lol....no...you wrote very nicely... and dont worry...once the rain is gone...there is always a rainbow and a sun! dont worry.... just remember....im ur symbol of luck...toh dont worry at all....tumhari "lucky" tumhare saath hai take care bye u kno who this is.... but ill say it anyways your sweet but annoying american desi lucky friend »~:¤.·ş`·.»WARDA«.·´ş·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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22nd June 2005, 09:58 AM
On a rainy day I met her for the first time
That was the most beautiful day of my life Stars shone more than ever before Rain was more beautiful like never before Woww.. really beautifully said!! She looked like an angel Who came from heaven to take care of me I love her from deep inside But she was never in my stride WaaaaaaH... beautiful expression....! I said "I love you" She said "you are my best friend" Should I feel happy that she came in to my life Or sad that she'll never be my wife Hmmmmmm... u shud be happy I really don't know Oh! I love this rain so much It was there with me to share best moments of my life And now when I'm sad It is still with me to share my pain Wow.. really very touchy.. Karthik! Hey Bro! Very sweet expression... Bahut hi pyaar likha hai tumne is baar bhi.. I loved reading it... accept my praises...Take Care.... Keep writing.. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd June 2005, 10:24 AM
Hi karthik,
Very well written.. Keep writing.. Best wishes, Niral |
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22nd June 2005, 10:27 AM
dearest warda........ thanks for ur reply....
felt really nice lookin at ur reply...hmm ur symbol of gud luck.... ven ur with me here ....y will i fear..... take gud care of ur self.....i guess ur done with ur school  ...(jus kiddin)have fun "lucky" ur sweet friend Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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22nd June 2005, 10:30 AM
pulkit bhayya.....its my pleasure tht u liked my poem....i'm really glad......thanks for always encouragin me...n appreciatin me.....
keep readin this way.....u said i shld b happy...so i'm gonna post some thin nice n happy next time around ....for u ok... take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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22nd June 2005, 10:31 AM
hello niral ji.....nice to c ur reply....glad tht u liked it....
thanks a lot keep comin dear take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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23rd June 2005, 01:08 PM
awesome!!!
this is so beautiful.... n also d feelings described sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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23rd June 2005, 09:11 PM
sonal ji....u've always appreciated my works...n i am thankful for tht
glad tht u liked this one...thanks for the reply once again take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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