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Love dil - 10th October 2003, 07:50 PM
DIL MERA LEKAR DIKHA DI HAME MUTTHI KHALI
PHIR KAHA DEKH LIYA HATH SE JANA DIL KA
TIR PAR TIR LAGA KAR VO KAHA KARTE HAI
KYO JI ??? TUM KHEL SAMAJHTE HO LAGANA DIL KA

Meri Ankh ka har aansu, aapke pyar ki nishani hai samjho to moti na samjho to pani hai.
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10th October 2003, 07:57 PM
Jee mein toh samajh gayi hu. Achha laga aapka yeh kalam.
Waise mere khayal meh bohot deeno se aap yeaha nehi aye?
Mein shayed nayi hu yeaha ish liye aapko nehi dekhi pehle.
Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

Teri aankhki aanso pee jau
aisi meri taqdeer kaha.

*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
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Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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13th October 2003, 06:27 PM
hi shimul ji
thanks for reply.
ya mein bahut time se site par nahie aayi, bcaz mere pass time ki bahut shortage hai, jab bhi koi khayal mann mein aata hai to hum is par log in kar lete hai, sabki shyari padh kar kuch sikh bhi lete hai, aur apne dil ki keh bhi dete hai.

thanks again for reply

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... - 13th October 2003, 09:21 PM
Hii,

I loved readin this work, soo much hidden between the lines.....

Good job
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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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good - 13th October 2003, 11:26 PM
hi shagoon

bhut khub likha hai ye sher apne .yuhi likhte rahiye


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14th October 2003, 11:11 AM
Hi Sakhi ji....
kua khoob reply diya hai aapne...
reply ho to aisa....
actually aap koi shayer to likh nahi rahi
is liye maine socha ke aapke reply par he koi reply kar du....
   
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Hi Shagoon ji
bohat achha likha hai....
   
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mohit ji - 29th October 2003, 11:54 AM
hi mohit sorry late reply diyaa is baat ka but abhi aaj hi ye dekha hai meine.

meine ab to do post kar bhi di hai gazals ab to thik hai na
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30th October 2003, 11:57 PM
hi shagoon
ur shayri is good

Meri Ankh ka har aansu, aapke pyar ki nishani hai samjho to moti na samjho to pani hai.
but these lines r so cute n deep,plz keep on writing like this

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those sparkling eyes
A 100 watt smile
the majestic walk
the cheerful talk
truly charming personality
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