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~~* Tanhaai ke mausam me *~~ -
29th December 2018, 09:26 PM
Tanhaai ke mausam me jab saath koii na hotaa hai,
Ek chaanNd koii deewaanaa sa pahlu meiN hamaare sotaa hai.
main kaise kahun ke tere bin dil shaad rahaa, aabaad rahaa,
jis din se hue tum mujh se judaa din raat ye paagal rotaa hai.
kuch paar hue kuch haar gaye, ye ishq nahii aasaan sanam,
is jeet haar ke kisse meiN koii paata hai koii khotaa hai.
tujhe yaad kare, fariyaad kare aur khud ko hi barbaad kare,
ye kis darjaa naadaan hai dil ashqon ke haar pirotaa hai.
koi dil ke dard chupaa letaa hai duniyaa ke baazaaron se,
Koi naksh e muhabbat ko ashqon ke sailaaboN se dhotaa hai.
koii laakh duaa kar le rab se ye kahaan muqammal hotaa hai,
ishq dariyaa hai tuufaanoN kaa jo honaa hai wo hotaa hai..!!
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1st January 2019, 11:08 PM
Shaad bhai
Namaste
Kaise ho bhai aap? Bazm Mein aapki ghazal dekh Kar hamesha khushi hotee hay.. Iss baar bhee dilkash ghazal ke saath Bazm Mein aap nazar aayen
Dil se daad aur duaaen
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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3rd January 2019, 11:49 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Tanhaai ke mausam me jab saath koii na hotaa hai,
Ek chaanNd koii deewaanaa sa pahlu meiN hamaare sotaa hai.
main kaise kahun ke tere bin dil shaad rahaa, aabaad rahaa,
jis din se hue tum mujh se judaa din raat ye paagal rotaa hai.
kuch paar hue kuch haar gaye, ye ishq nahii aasaan sanam,
is jeet haar ke kisse meiN koii paata hai koii khotaa hai.
tujhe yaad kare, fariyaad kare aur khud ko hi barbaad kare,
ye kis darjaa naadaan hai dil ashqon ke haar pirotaa hai.
koi dil ke dard chupaa letaa hai duniyaa ke baazaaron se,
Koi naksh e muhabbat ko ashqon ke sailaaboN se dhotaa hai.
koii laakh duaa kar le rab se ye kahaan muqammal hotaa hai,
ishq dariyaa hai tuufaanoN kaa jo honaa hai wo hotaa hai..!!
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Shaab bhai....wahhhh kya khoobsurat likha hai aapne, padne mein jo ravani ban rhi hai...majja aa gya...ehsaas behad umda haiN.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th January 2019, 11:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Shaad bhai
Namaste
Kaise ho bhai aap? Bazm Mein aapki ghazal dekh Kar hamesha khushi hotee hay.. Iss baar bhee dilkash ghazal ke saath Bazm Mein aap nazar aayen
Dil se daad aur duaaen
Aapka
Dhaval
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bahot bahot shukriyaa Dhaval bhai, aap aaye mahfil me bahaar aayee...
aate rahen.... khush raho
Shaad....
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5th January 2019, 11:32 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita thakur
Shaab bhai....wahhhh kya khoobsurat likha hai aapne, padne mein jo ravani ban rhi hai...majja aa gya...ehsaas behad umda haiN.
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aapki pazeeraai aur kalaam ki tareefen sun ke man gadgad ho uthaa dee....
thank you so much ise padhne ke liye... aati rahiyegaa..
Shaad...
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7th January 2019, 07:53 PM
Waaah kamaal k ashaar hain
koi dil ke dard chupaa letaa hai duniyaa ke baazaaron se,
Koi naksh e muhabbat ko ashqon ke sailaaboN se dhotaa hai.
Kya kahne waah waaah!!!!!bahot khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hai shaad sahab dher sari daad aur duaayein...
Khush rahein likhte rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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7th January 2019, 10:25 PM
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Waaah kamaal k ashaar hain
koi dil ke dard chupaa letaa hai duniyaa ke baazaaron se,
Koi naksh e muhabbat ko ashqon ke sailaaboN se dhotaa hai.
Kya kahne waah waaah!!!!!bahot khoobsoorat ghazal pesh ki hai shaad sahab dher sari daad aur duaayein...
Khush rahein likhte rahein..����
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Dheron shukriyaa aapka madhu saahibaa...
Aap aain aur hamko padhaa aur saraaha tahe dil se shukrguzaar hain aapke..
Aati rahen .. salaamat rahe
Shaad...
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1st August 2019, 08:57 PM
shaad bhai aadab,
aapki shayri ke kya kahne, beher aisa ki dil "shayri-e- dard" padh kar bhi zhoom uthta hai. Waaaaaaah bohot khoob.
nacheez ki daad kubul ho
aapka apna
bhushan
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27th August 2019, 09:04 PM
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shaad bhai aadab,
aapki shayri ke kya kahne, beher aisa ki dil "shayri-e- dard" padh kar bhi zhoom uthta hai. Waaaaaaah bohot khoob.
nacheez ki daad kubul ho
aapka apna
bhushan
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Bhushan bhai aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa................................
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15th September 2019, 09:14 PM
Bahut khoob
गुफ्तगू दिलो की धडकन से हो वहा लबो की
बात जरुरी नही
जहाँ खामोशीया बोलती हो वहा
अल्फाज जरुरी नही।
Anil Arora
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
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29th September 2019, 02:51 AM
Abhi kya kahoon........
bas yahi kahunga ki aapko parhna khusnaseebi hai.
विपिन
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29th September 2019, 11:43 AM
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Bahut khoob
गुफ्तगू दिलो की धडकन से हो वहा लबो की
बात जरुरी नही
जहाँ खामोशीया बोलती हो वहा
अल्फाज जरुरी नही।
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bahot bahot shukriyaa anil bhai........................................ aate rahen
Shaad........
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29th September 2019, 11:43 AM
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Abhi kya kahoon........
bas yahi kahunga ki aapko parhna khusnaseebi hai.
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Zarranawaazi hai aapki Vipin bhai............ aate rahen, aur apna khayaal rakkhen
Shaad......
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13th October 2019, 03:53 AM
Shaad miyaaN
Tumhaara sukhan apna apna sa jaan paDta hai aksar. jaise meri rooh ki awaaz ho. Jeete rahiye.
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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19th October 2019, 08:29 AM
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Shaad miyaaN
Tumhaara sukhan apna apna sa jaan paDta hai aksar. jaise meri rooh ki awaaz ho. Jeete rahiye.
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aapki inaayaton aur nazre karam ka tahe dil se shukriyaa bade bhai....
apni duaaon se yoon hi nawaazte rahiye....
Mashkoor hoon......
Shaad....
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29th October 2019, 10:38 AM
Lajawaab ghazal shaad sahab
MashaAllah ek se badhker ek ashaar.
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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Lajawaab ghazal shaad sahab
MashaAllah ek se badhker ek ashaar.
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Behad shukriyaa Zainy saahiba... takheer e haaziri ke liye maazrat khwaah hoon...
aati rahiyega.... shukriyaa
Shaad........
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12th July 2020, 08:49 PM
ek arsey ke baad aap ka koi mukammal kalaam padha hai shaad bhai. ehsaas mein shafqat aur bayaan mein ravaani ... jis khoobi ke hum deevane hain ... bahaut si daad haazir hai
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Tanhaai ke mausam me jab saath koii na hotaa hai,
Ek chaanNd koii deewaanaa sa pahlu meiN hamaare sotaa hai.
main kaise kahun ke tere bin dil shaad rahaa, aabaad rahaa,
jis din se hue tum mujh se judaa din raat ye paagal rotaa hai.
kuch paar hue kuch haar gaye, ye ishq nahii aasaan sanam,
is jeet haar ke kisse meiN koii paata hai koii khotaa hai.
tujhe yaad kare, fariyaad kare aur khud ko hi barbaad kare,
ye kis darjaa naadaan hai dil ashqon ke haar pirotaa hai.
koi dil ke dard chupaa letaa hai duniyaa ke baazaaron se,
Koi naksh e muhabbat ko ashqon ke sailaaboN se dhotaa hai.
koii laakh duaa kar le rab se ye kahaan muqammal hotaa hai,
ishq dariyaa hai tuufaanoN kaa jo honaa hai wo hotaa hai..!!
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maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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18th July 2020, 12:48 AM
Beautiful.
May God give u peace n love.
taqdeer ne kya kam sataya hua tha
jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye
logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main
aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye
-> SaNaM
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