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2nd November 2011, 01:45 AM
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd November 2011, 07:49 AM
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Waah ! Danny Bhaii ... !
Kyaa Kahne ... Khoob Ashaar Kahe HaiN ...
Sar Se Paa Tak ... Laajawaab Ghazal Huii ...
Umdaa .... BehtreeN Peshkash ...
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad ... !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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2nd November 2011, 11:14 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amanush...
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Ji Bhaut Sunder...........
Ji bhaut sahi kaha aapne waqt hi farebi hota hai aur kuch bhi nahi...
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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2nd November 2011, 08:56 PM
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
Waah chachaajaan... Matle ne hi qatl kar diyaa aage kyaa khaak jaa paaenge... Subhan Allah....
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
behad khoobsurat saa sher kaha hai janaab.. ise padhkar kuch yaad aa raha hai shaayad likhaa tha kabhi...
Wo khat me to Poochaa kareN haal Dil ka,
Mile hain to AankheN Churaane lage hain.
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Waah bahot khoob ... ek ek lafz haqeeqat se labrez hai....
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Masha Allah.... is sher ne to haamaaari Jawaani ke Din yaad dilaa diyaa...
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
Ahhaa.. kya khoob Maqtaa hai.. mazaa aa gaya bhai poori ghazal meiN... itne dino baad aaj aapko padhaa to lagaa ke aapka naaga karnaa wasool ho gaya.. bhai jaldi jaldi aaaya kareN.. faqat itnee si guzaarish...
Shaad...
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3rd November 2011, 08:35 AM
When reality combines with rhythm, one of this kind of piece comes up Lovely yet truly inspiring.
Carry on!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amanush...
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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3rd November 2011, 09:34 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amanush...
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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danny bhaiya,
bahut khoobsurat ghazal hui hai...khaas taur pe matla....
daad dil se haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
aapka,
vikram
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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4th November 2011, 12:28 AM
Apka kalam pasand aya Amanush ji. Har sher lagta hai mehsoos kar ke kaha gaya hai aur irony ka touch bhi bahaut acchha tha. Daad !
QUOTE=Amanush...;432419] YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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4th November 2011, 11:56 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Waah ! Danny Bhaii ... !
Kyaa Kahne ... Khoob Ashaar Kahe HaiN ...
Sar Se Paa Tak ... Laajawaab Ghazal Huii ...
Umdaa .... BehtreeN Peshkash ...
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad ... !!!
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Kaise heiN aap, Naresh Bhaai...? Hamare post par aapka yaha pehle reply ka silsila baDaa pyaara lagta hai...!
Yaha shaayri bhi aap ko pasand houi so hum behad khush houe...!
Tah-e-dil se daad hameiN qubool hai...!
Apna khayaal rakheiN
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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4th November 2011, 04:25 PM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Ji Bhaut Sunder...........
Ji bhaut sahi kaha aapne waqt hi farebi hota hai aur kuch bhi nahi...
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Aap ka bahut shukriyaa , Radhika Ji...!
Kabhi kabhi waqt ko bhi majbooran bewafaa hona parta hai...!
Apna thik se khayaal rakheiN, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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4th November 2011, 05:00 PM
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
bahot khub Chachu
thanks for sharing
bahot dino baad aap se baat ho rahi hai
hope you are well
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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4th November 2011, 06:41 PM
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
bahot bahot khoob..Sir, iss sher ke liya special daad.
god bless u
aapka dost,
Pradhyuman
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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5th November 2011, 01:06 AM
Wonderful Danny Bhai keep writing like this... Loved reading it
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5th November 2011, 01:37 AM
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Wahhhh Danny bhai kya khoobsurat tanz hai kya khoob nasihat hai.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Wahhhh Danny bhai kya khoobsurat tanz hai kya khoob nasihat hai.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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5th November 2011, 03:17 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amanush...
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
bahut sundar .... umda khayal se bhari ghazal ... dil se daad .... radhe radhe ....
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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6th November 2011, 02:50 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
Waah chachaajaan... Matle ne hi qatl kar diyaa aage kyaa khaak jaa paaenge... Subhan Allah....
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
behad khoobsurat saa sher kaha hai janaab.. ise padhkar kuch yaad aa raha hai shaayad likhaa tha kabhi...
Wo khat me to Poochaa kareN haal Dil ka,
Mile hain to AankheN Churaane lage hain.
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Waah bahot khoob ... ek ek lafz haqeeqat se labrez hai....
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Masha Allah.... is sher ne to haamaaari Jawaani ke Din yaad dilaa diyaa...
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
Ahhaa.. kya khoob Maqtaa hai.. mazaa aa gaya bhai poori ghazal meiN... itne dino baad aaj aapko padhaa to lagaa ke aapka naaga karnaa wasool ho gaya.. bhai jaldi jaldi aaaya kareN.. faqat itnee si guzaarish...
Shaad...
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Kaise heiN aap, Chaache ki jaan...?
Shaayri ki itni tareef ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya qabuul karna...!
Saath banaaye rakhna aur apna khayaal rakhaa karo, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th November 2011, 02:53 PM
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Originally Posted by pallavi_here
When reality combines with rhythm, one of this kind of piece comes up Lovely yet truly inspiring.
Carry on!
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Hello Miss Pallo...! Aap ko yahaaN dekhkar behad khushi houi...!
Thanks for reading & appreciating
Take good care, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th November 2011, 03:06 PM
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danny bhaiya,
bahut khoobsurat ghazal hui hai...khaas taur pe matla....
daad dil se haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
aapka,
vikram
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Isse paDne aur saraahne ka bahut dhanyavaad, Vikram Bhaiya...!
Daad sar ankhoN par...!
Thik se apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th November 2011, 04:35 AM
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Originally Posted by zarraa
Apka kalam pasand aya Amanush ji. Har sher lagta hai mehsoos kar ke kaha gaya hai aur irony ka touch bhi bahaut acchha tha. Daad !
QUOTE=Amanush...;432419] YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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Kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye dhanyavaad, Zarraa Ji...! The 2nd part of your comments brought me a large smile...!
Thanks once more and take care, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th November 2011, 04:40 AM
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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25th November 2011, 10:58 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Pradhyuman
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
bahot bahot khoob..Sir, iss sher ke liya special daad.
god bless u
aapka dost,
Pradhyuman
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Isse bhi pasand karne ke liye bahut dhanyavaad, Pradhyuman Ji...!
Daad sar ankhoN par...!
Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th November 2011, 01:10 AM
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Wonderful Danny Bhai keep writing like this... Loved reading it
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Thanks so much for encouraging, Rohin Bhai...! I'm glad that you have liked it...!
Take good care of yourself, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st December 2011, 06:41 PM
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MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Wahhhh Danny bhai kya khoobsurat tanz hai kya khoob nasihat hai.
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Kaise heiN aap, Sajid Bhai...? Zaraa idhar ka rukh bhi kiya kijiye...!
Above mentioned sher ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!
Do keep encouraging & take care of yourself, ok...?
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st December 2011, 08:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Amanush...
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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namaskar amanush jee.bahut acchee ghazal banee hai.ghazal ka matla mujhe bahut-2 pasand aaya.aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbad.
sada khush rahe.
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Tanhaa Raahi
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15th January 2012, 03:48 PM
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namaskar amanush jee.bahut acchee ghazal banee hai.ghazal ka matla mujhe bahut-2 pasand aaya.aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbad.
sada khush rahe.
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Shaayri ko paDne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa, Uffaq Ji...!
YuNhi aate raheiN aur apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th April 2015, 02:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Amanush...
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa
( n.m )
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN
Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN
Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN
Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab
Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN
Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’
WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN
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Danny bhaiyaa.........kaise hai aap ?
har sher tareef ke kabil hai...sabhi ehsaas pasand aaye.
aapki chotti behan
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th April 2015, 02:41 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
Danny bhaiyaa.........kaise hai aap ?
har sher tareef ke kabil hai...sabhi ehsaas pasand aaye.
aapki chotti behan
regards
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Aap ki duaa se hum theek se heiN, Chotti behana...! Aur aap kaise heiN...?
Iss puraani shaayri ko pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...!
Aap apna khayaal acchi tarha se rakheiN, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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