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The Lost Poet
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Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai -
6th May 2009, 08:35 PM
Doston Ek Poem Pesh Kar Raha hoon, jis maine kuch arsa pehle likha tha, yeh tab ki baat hai, jab maine nayi nayi shayries likhna shuru hi kiya tha.................to pesh-e-khidmat hai janab....
वो अक्सर मद्धम मद्धम सा मुस्कुराया करती है,
शरारत भरी आंखों से मुझे छेड़ जाया करती है,
सताके मुझे जब वो अपना प्यार जताया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
देख के मुझे वो अक्सर मुस्कुराया करती है,
झील सी गहरी आंखों से कुछ कह जाया करती है,
हँसते हँसते जब वो झूठ मूठ का रूठ जाया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
जब कभी वो उदास हो जाया करती है,
अपनी आंखों से मोती बरसाया करती है,
फिर सुनके मेरी कोई बेवकूफी वो हंस जाया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
कभी करती है बातें बड़ों सी और कभी बच्ची बन जाया करती है,
अपनी अदाओं से वो अक्सर मुझे रिझाया करती है,
आंखों में छुपाके मोहोब्बत जब लबों से इंकार कर जाया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
नलिन
Roman Hindi Version ("Buland" Logon Ke Liye)
Woh Aksar Maddham Sa Muskuraya Karti Hai,
Sharart Bhari Aankhon Se Mujhe Ched Jaya Karti Hai,
Satake Mujhe Jab Woh Apna Pyar Jataya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai
Dekh Ke Mujhe Woh Aksar Muskuraya Karti Hai,
Jheel Si Gehri Aankhon Se Kuch Keh Jaya Karti Hai,
Hanste Hanste Jab Woh Jhooth-Mooth Ka Rooth Jaya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai
Jab Kabhi Woh Udaas Ho Jaya Karti Hai,
Apni aankhon Se Moti Barsaya Karti hai,
Phir Sunke Meri Koi Bewakufi Woh Hans Jaya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Usse Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai,
Kabhi Karti Hai Baatein badon Si Aur Kabhi Bacchi Ban Jaya Karti Hai,
Apni Adaon Se Woh Aksar Mujhe Rijahaya Karti Hai,
Aankhon Me Chupake Mohobbat Jab Labon Se Inkaar Kar Jaya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai.
Nalin - The Lost Poet
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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Loquacious Adonis
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6th May 2009, 08:43 PM
Wow............... falling in love with the same person over n over again...
nice feeling to fall again n again
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The Lost Poet
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7th May 2009, 02:46 AM
@ Baqtiar Ji,
Mohobbat ho bas ek martaba yeh zaruri nahi,
Ek se bhi zyada baar pyar ho jaata hai,
Par yeh rehta hai pak aur khubsurat,
jab sirf ek hi shaqs se baar-baar ho jaata hai.........
Bahut Shukriya, apne waqt nikal kar is nacheez ki poem ko pada....
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Originally Posted by Baqtiar
Wow............... falling in love with the same person over n over again...
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Baqtiar
nice feeling to fall again n again
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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7th May 2009, 09:05 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nalinmehra
Doston Ek Poem Pesh Kar Raha hoon, jis maine kuch arsa pehle likha tha, yeh tab ki baat hai, jab maine nayi nayi shayries likhna shuru hi kiya tha.................to pesh-e-khidmat hai janab....
वो अक्सर मद्धम मद्धम सा मुस्कुराया करती है,
शरारत भरी आंखों से मुझे छेड़ जाया करती है,
सताके मुझे जब वो अपना प्यार जताया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
देख के मुझे वो अक्सर मुस्कुराया करती है,
झील सी गहरी आंखों से कुछ कह जाया करती है,
हँसते हँसते जब वो झूठ मूठ का रूठ जाया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
जब कभी वो उदास हो जाया करती है,
अपनी आंखों से मोती बरसाया करती है,
फिर सुनके मेरी कोई बेवकूफी वो हंस जाया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
कभी करती है बातें बड़ों सी और कभी बच्ची बन जाया करती है,
अपनी अदाओं से वो अक्सर मुझे रिझाया करती है,
आंखों में छुपाके मोहोब्बत जब लबों से इंकार कर जाया करती है,
न जाने क्यूँ मुझे उससे मोहोब्बत हो जाया करती है,
नलिन
Roman Hindi Version ("Buland" Logon Ke Liye)
Woh Aksar Maddham Sa Muskuraya Karti Hai,
Sharart Bhari Aankhon Se Mujhe Ched Jaya Karti Hai,
Satake Mujhe Jab Woh Apna Pyar Jataya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai
Dekh Ke Mujhe Woh Aksar Muskuraya Karti Hai,
Jheel Si Gehri Aankhon Se Kuch Keh Jaya Karti Hai,
Hanste Hanste Jab Woh Jhooth-Mooth Ka Rooth Jaya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai
Jab Kabhi Woh Udaas Ho Jaya Karti Hai,
Apni aankhon Se Moti Barsaya Karti hai,
Phir Sunke Meri Koi Bewakufi Woh Hans Jaya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Usse Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai,
Kabhi Karti Hai Baatein badon Si Aur Kabhi Bacchi Ban Jaya Karti Hai,
Apni Adaon Se Woh Aksar Mujhe Rijahaya Karti Hai,
Aankhon Me Chupake Mohobbat Jab Labon Se Inkaar Kar Jaya Karti Hai,
Na Jane Kyun Mujhe Ussay Mohobbat Ho Jaya Karti Hai.
Nalin - The Lost Poet
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nalin ji
aapki ye rachna mohobbat ke darwaze pe dastak deti hai. aap shabdo ke ache shilpkaar hai. aapne apni iss rachna mai piyaar ke sabhi rango ka bahut hi khubsurat dhang se paryog kiya hai. mere mann ko padte waqt bahut gehre tak chhu ke nikal gai.
bahut hi achi hai aapki ye rachna.
aage bhi aap isi tarha khubsurat rachnao se hume nawazte rahenge. shukriya.....
---naresh mehra---
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The Lost Poet
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7th May 2009, 10:11 AM
Naresh Ji,
Bahut Bahut Shukriya, is tareef ke liye...............apne waqt nikal ke hamari nazm ko pada.................. shukriya.........
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nalin ji
aapki ye rachna mohobbat ke darwaze pe dastak deti hai. aap shabdo ke ache shilpkaar hai. aapne apni iss rachna mai piyaar ke sabhi rango ka bahut hi khubsurat dhang se paryog kiya hai. mere mann ko padte waqt bahut gehre tak chhu ke nikal gai.
bahut hi achi hai aapki ye rachna.
aage bhi aap isi tarha khubsurat rachnao se hume nawazte rahenge. shukriya.....
---naresh mehra---
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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7th May 2009, 10:59 AM
Kya baat hai Nalin???
Kisko dedicate karke likha hai???
aap ke ehesaas se bhigi aap ki yeh koshish mujhe acchi lagi...
keep writing
keep smiling
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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The Lost Poet
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7th May 2009, 12:13 PM
He He He,
Purvi Ji, abhi toh bas likha hi hai, aisi koi aayi hi nahi jisey yeh dedicate kar sakoon, bas woh jo bhi hai abhi sirf mere khayalon me hi hain, Dua Kijiye ki ussay mulaqat ho jaaye...
Apne meri nazm padi aur tareef kari, apka bahut bahut shukriya..................
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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The Lost Poet
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7th May 2009, 01:39 PM
Nazneen Ji..................... Bahut Bahut Shukriya, jo apne is nacheez ki poem ko padne ke liye waqt nikala.................. apne isay pada, toh laga jaise hamari nazm ki kismat khul gayi............................
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Hey nalin bht hi romantic poem hai, feelings bht achche hain, keep it up
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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19th August 2009, 07:05 PM
good one
bahot pyara likha hain
waise koi hain kya
he he he
ho to plz bata dena
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20th August 2009, 12:54 PM
thank you for the appreciation....................aisi koi nahi hai...........
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good one
bahot pyara likha hain
waise koi hain kya
he he he
ho to plz bata dena
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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