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7th March 2004, 10:52 AM
Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi
Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi
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hi - 11th March 2004, 03:33 AM
anjana rahi....
aap ki soch bohat achi hay...
main slaam karta hun...

magar kiya karain..
yeh waqt ki mara mari hay na yar..kiya kiya jaye...
ham ne bhi bohat kaha,bohat samjhaya...
magar waqt k hathon sabhi majbor hain..hmain bhi hona para..
han chalta hay..bas..
aap apna khiyal rakhiye ga

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17th April 2008, 03:25 PM
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Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi “ Mayank”
Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi
namaskaar mayank jee.............aaj yehi sawaal mere dil ko preshaan kar raha hai ki akhir yeh mahfil etni veeraN kyuN hai ????
jis waqt aapne yeh sab likha hoga shayad tab aapke zehan meiN bhi yehi sab hoga jo ab mere zehan maiN hai.....!
koshish kijiye aap bhi ki yeh mahfil veeraN na rahe...es mahfil mein phele jaise hi ronak laut aaye.....

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17th April 2008, 07:26 PM
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Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi

Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi
waah waah
bahut khoob likha hai aap ne ek dum sahii baat chheri hai janaab..........
aisee hi likhate rahiyega
chalo yeh to maana ki aap ek anjanaa raahi hai..........
magar doosre log kyun anjaan ho agye yeh samajh nahii aa raha........
isi liye shayad yeh mehfill itnii veeraan hai

khair dheere dheere vo sab jane pahechaane ho jayenge yahi duaa hai
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bahut achaa likha hai
dil se dad qubool karna
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Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi
Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi


hey MAYANK,
bahut achi ghazal hai...ye baat shayad sdc ke sare members ke mann me hogi...hai na???....i hope ye viraan mehfil me fir se jaan aa jaye....keep it up...take care....

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Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi
Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi
wah mayank bhai app ne bahut acha likha hai duniya aaj humesha aise hi log hume milte hai jo pal bhar ke liye dost bolte hai fir vahi humare samne khare hote hai
bahut hi achi soch hai apki per ajke din shayad hi ise ko samaj paye

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bhut khub - 27th April 2008, 07:55 PM
janaab mayank sahib ko is nacheez ka adaab.....yahi kahounga....

is ghar ko aag lagg gayii
ghar ke chiraag se........

aapki gazal bhut khub rahi main samjh sakta hoon.....raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi
Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi
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Yeh mehfil aaj itnii viraan kyuN hai?
Kal jo the sabhi apne aaj anjaan kyuN hai?

Jane kahaaN gaye wo aashiyaaN jo the yahaaN
Aaj yun bikhre huai tinkooN ke nishaan kyuN hai?

Woh dost the jo rahte the saath mere mil kar
Abb faasla unn ke mere darmiyaan kyuN hai?

Panchi jo the chahkte iss gulisthan mein
Lag.te sabhi aaj hume bejubaan kyuN hai?

Kal hi to hum.ne sang kheli thi holi
Par ajj yahaaN khun ke nishaan kyuN hai?

-Mayank Ek Anajana Rahi
Ji bas KyuN Hai ka zawaab hi nahi milta zindagi main........Bhaut Sunder.......


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7th April 2012, 03:09 PM
Mayank Jee, Banjara jee..
Kaise hai aap?

Muje yaad bhi nahi kitne saal ho gaye, yaha aaye hue, likhe hue, pade hue!!
Apni jindagi me insan itna ulaj jata hai k khud apne aap ko bhul jata hai.
Priorities kuch is tarah badal jati hai k use ilm tak nahi rehta ki usne list me apne passion ko jagah di hai ki nahi.
Kal jab me kisi ko apna ta-alluq kara rahi thi, tab yaad aaya.. ki jindagi ka ek daur.. yaha bhi gujra hai
Wo waqt, wo dost, wo apna pan aur yaha k dosto se baate karke jo sukun milta tha, uska bhi apna hi maja tha.
Sayad log chehro se anjan hua karte the yaha. Par dilo se nahi.

Aaj itne waqt ke bad fir yaha aa kar jab purane threads padhe to bahot khusi mili. or bahot se log yaad aaye. sayad unko is bat ki khabar kabhi na ho.

Khair, umeed hai aap ache honge. aur agar aur purane dosto se ta-alluq ho to meri yaad jarur dijiye

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