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……...kuch meri khabar aaye............ -
3rd March 2012, 12:33 PM
Aik Taazah Ghazal Ke Sath Haazir Hun….. Ummid Hai Ke Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Pasand Aaye Gi….……...
KUCH MERI KHABAR AAYE Hum Ishq Ke Darya Me Doobay To Ubhar Aaye Tum Bhi Ho Ajab Aashiq, Tufaan Se Dar Aaye Kuch Rauz Faqeeron Ki Sohbat Me Zara Betho Jeenay Ka Tumhen Shayad Phir Koi Hunar Aaye Hum Ko Rah-e-Ulfat Me Jo Yaar Milay Un Me Kuch Phool Nazar Aaye, Kuch Khaar Nazar Aaye Had Se Hai Siwa Shayad, Ye Mera Junoon Janan Jis Dam Me Tujhay Sochun,Ye Aankh Bhi Bhar Aaye Khud Apnay Ta'aqub Me Kab Se Hun Main Sargarda'an Main Gum Hun Kahan Maula, Kuch Meri Khabar Aaye Kitnay Hee Ameeron Ke Armaan Huay Pooray Par Hum Se Ghareebon Ki Ummid Na Bar Aaye Socha Tha Smaitay Ga AHMAD Hamen Qurb Uska Ye Apna Muqaddar Ke , Hum Or Bikhar Aaye AHMAD ALI SHAKIL Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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3rd March 2012, 01:37 PM
Kuch Rauz Faqeeron Ki Sohbat Me Zara Betho
Jeenay Ka Tumhen Shayad Phir Koi Hunar Aaye Hum Ko Rah-e-Ulfat Me Jo Yaar Milay Un Me Kuch Phool Nazar Aaye, Kuch Khaar Nazar Aaye WaaH ! Shakil Bhai !! Kyaa Kahne .... Bahut Khoob ! BaDhi Soch Ke Saath Saare Ashaa'r Sanwaare HaiN ! Laajawaab Ghazal Huii Janaab ! Asar Angez Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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3rd March 2012, 01:52 PM
aadab shakil bhai kaise hai aap? hamesha kee tarah bahut badiyaa ghazal huyi hai.
sabhee sher lajwaab rahe..............par ik baat ......agar ye ghazal meree hoti to fourth one sher men saani ko main kuch yu kahataa jis dam bhee tujhe sochun ye aankh see bhar aaye aise hee likhte rahiye, khush rahiye.........................take care. |
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5th March 2012, 11:58 AM
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Aap Ki Zarrah-Nawaazi Hai Jo Aap Ne Boht Arsay Baad Is Khaaksaar Ki Bazm Me Haazri Di….. Or Badi Darya-Dili Se DAAD Se Nawaza…….. Aap Ki Hausla-Afzaayi Se Dil Ko Be-Had Khushi Mehsoos Jo Rahi Hai…….. Tah-e-Dil Se Aap ka MAshkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun…….. Sada Khush Rahiye…… Guzarish Hai Ke yunhi Saath Banaye Rakhiye……… Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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6th March 2012, 05:09 PM
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Aap Bazm Me Aaye Or Hausla-Afzaayi Se Nawaza. Is Ke Liye Tah-e-Dil Se Aap ka Mshkoor Hun............ Aap Ne Jis Misra Ke Baray Me Bataya.... Us Ka Pehla Hissa Mujhy Pasand Aaya... Magar Dusray Hissay Me " Aankh See" Theak Nahi Laga.....Aankh Ke Sath SEE Lafz Izaafi Laga...... Aap Ki Raaye Ka Bhi Mashkoor Hun.... Yunhi Sath Banaye Rakhiye....... Sada Khush Rhaiye......... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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6th March 2012, 06:18 PM
Ahmad Bhaaii
salaam! laa-jawaab koShiSh !! waah waah! dil Shaad-Shaad ho gayaa aapki Ghazal paDh kar dil se daad aur duaaeN KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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8th March 2012, 10:37 AM
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Sab Se Pehlay TO Aap ka Is Baat Par Mashkoor Hun , Jo Aap Ne Waqt Nikaal Kar Is Khaksaar Ki Bazm Me Haazri Di........Boht Khushi Hui Aap Ko Apni Bazm Me Dekh Kar Or Aap Ki Daad Paa Kar......... Aap ki Hausla_Afzaayi Ka Boht Boht Shukria........ Sada Khush Rahiye........... Yunhi Sath Banaye Rakhiye......... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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9th March 2012, 10:55 AM
ek bahut hi mature aur behtareen ghazal in my opinion.
likkhe rahiye ,khush rahiye. aapke liye daado ka guldasta regards |
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9th March 2012, 11:14 AM
behtareen peshkash ahmad sahab.....................
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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9th March 2012, 02:33 PM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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10th March 2012, 11:54 AM
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Aap Ka Be-Had Mashkoor hun jo Aap Ne Waqt Nikala Or Is Bazm Ki Raunaq Barhaayi... Aap Ki Daad Or Hausla_Afzaayi Sar Aankhon Par...... Khush Rhaiye Or Yunhi Sath Banaye Rakhiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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10th March 2012, 03:59 PM
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Khush Rahiye....... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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11th March 2012, 07:42 PM
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11th March 2012, 08:48 PM
Kitnay Hee Ameeron Ke Armaan Huay Pooray
Par Hum Se Ghareebon Ki Ummid Na Bar Aaye Socha Tha Smaitay Ga AHMAD Hamen Qurb Uska Ye Apna Muqaddar Ke , Hum Or Bikhar Aaye good lines..... awesome.. |
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12th March 2012, 01:14 PM
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Aap ki Hausla-Afazayi KA Boht Boht Shukria... Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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16th March 2012, 11:18 AM
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wahhh wahhhh....kya khoob likha hai aapne, sabhi ashiyaar tareef ke kabil hai...dil se daad kabool kijiye. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st March 2012, 06:58 AM
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aadaab go ki poori ghazal aabdaar hai magar sach ye hai ki meraa tabsera ka koi mood nahi tha magar Khud Apnay Ta'aqub Me Kab Se Hun Main Sargarda'an Main Gum Hun Kahan Maula, Kuch Meri Khabar Aaye is sher ne qadmon me beDiyaansi daal deen aor maa fizzameer ki adaayegee pe majboor kar diyaa is baat se inkaar na mumkin ki aap ki shairee me dam kham badarja e atam maoujood hai balki mazkoorah bala sher ki jaanib isharah kar ke agar kaha jaaye ki aap khud me doob ke shairee ki aabyaari karte hain to be ja na ho ga ji haan aise ashaar saahab e qismat likha kartey hain aor aap saahab e bakht hain mobaarak ho masood hassaas fee amanillaah |
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21st March 2012, 01:52 PM
KUCH MERI KHABAR AAYE Hum Ishq Ke Darya Me Doobay To Ubhar Aaye Tum Bhi Ho Ajab Aashiq, Tufaan Se Dar Aaye Bahut khoob...achha matla hai Boht Boht Shukria…….. Kuch Rauz Faqeeron Ki Sohbat Me Zara Betho Jeenay Ka Tumhen Shayad Phir Koi Hunar Aaye Waah.....lajawaab khyaal...mubaarakbaad Aap Ki Inayat Hai Janab….. Hum Ko Rah-e-Ulfat Me Jo Yaar Milay Un Me Kuch Phool Nazar Aaye, Kuch Khaar Nazar Aaye BAHUT KHoob. Lekin oola mein 'mein' do baar repeat hona thhoda ajeeb lag raha hai. Khyaal ke liye dhero daad Aap Ki Baat Apni Jagah Magar Mere KHayal Me Repeat Honay Se Koi KHaas Farq Nahi Padta…Boht se Baday Baday Shoraa ke Kalaamon Me Main Ne Ye Baat Dekhi Hai…. Had Se Hai Siwa Shayad, Ye Mera Junoon Janan Jis Dam Me Tujhay Sochun,Ye Aankh Bhi Bhar Aaye Bahut sundar Shukria…. Khud Apnay Ta'aqub Me Kab Se Hun Main Sargarda'an Main Gum Hun Kahan Maula, Kuch Meri Khabar Aaye Waaahh bahut khoob. Mashaallaah Aap Ki Zarrah-nawaazi Hai…Khush Rahiye… Kitnay Hee Ameeron Ke Armaan Huay Pooray Par Hum Se Ghareebon Ki Ummid Na Bar Aaye 'na bar aaye' iska matlab main nahi samajh paya. “Ummid Bar Aana” Ka Matlab Hai Ummid Puri Hona…. Socha Tha Smaitay Ga AHMAD Hamen Qurb Uska Ye Apna Muqaddar Ke , Hum Or Bikhar Aaye khoob kaha. Shukria……. AHMAD ALI SHAKIL Ahmad bhai is khoobsoorat ghazal ke liye behad daad o mubazraqbaad. Aap bahut bahut ahha likh rahe hain. Allaah aapko qaamyaabi de. Janab SUMIT SHARMA Ji….! Aap Ne Kalaam Ko Waqt dia Or Tafseelann Daad Se Nawaza, Us ke Liye Tah-e-Dil Se Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun…Aap Ka HUsn-e-Zann Hai Jo aap Ko Is KHaksaar Ke KHayalaat Pasand Aaye… Yunhi sath Banaye Rakhiye….. Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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21st March 2012, 05:04 PM
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Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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21st March 2012, 05:09 PM
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Sab Se Pehlay To Is Baat Par Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun Ke Aaap Ne Is Adnaa Se Kalaam Ke LIye Waqt NIkala. Aap Jaisay Qad-Aawar Sukhan-war Se Daad Pana Yaqinan Mere Jaisay Adnaa Se Shaayer Ke Liye Kisi Aizaaz Se Kam Nahi........ Ye Faqat Aap Ki Inayat Or Zarrah-nawazi Hai Jo Aap Ne Is Haqeer Si Kaawish Par Daad Or Hausla-Afzaayi se Nawaza......... Aap Ki Aamad Ka Or Hausla-afzaayi Ka Be-had Shukria...... Guzaarish Hai Ke Yunhi Sath Banaye Rakhiye..... Sada Khush Rahiye........ Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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