'Til the Moon Shines Blue

[aadeil]

On a fullmoon night, she doth opine,
Dear, how do I say that I love you?
Someone's staring from the sky divine
wait a li'l long 'til the moon is new.

And came newmoon but nothing was right
Said she, I can't say, 'I love you',
for the stars up above are shining bright,
wait for the clouds lest the wind subdue

When the winds blew the clouds did come.
My dream now seemed to be coming true,
When along with the clouds the rains hath come
I am sorry, she said, but I never knew!

The clouds went away and I was getting wary
when she said, Dear I'll surely tell you
But let's make that bit extraordinary
Wait my dear, 'til the moon shines blue.

[Hamdam]

What a lovely romantic journey ....Q&Aare beautifu.
very nice poetry Aadeil ..

SSl

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by aadeil

On a fullmoon night, she doth opine,
Dear, how do I say that I love you?
Someone's staring from the sky divine
wait a li'l long 'til the moon is new.

And came newmoon but nothing was right
Said she, I can't say, 'I love you',
for the stars up above are shining bright,
wait for the clouds lest the wind subdue

When the winds blew the clouds did come.
My dream now seemed to be coming true,
When along with the clouds the rains hath come
I am sorry, she said, but I never knew!

The clouds went away and I was getting wary
when she said, Dear I'll surely tell you
But let's make that bit extraordinary
Wait my dear, 'til the moon shines blue.

Aedil bhai - great peice of work...it was very heartfelt and a flawless read for me...keep it up

[aadeil]

Originally Posted by Hamdam

What a lovely romantic journey ....Q&Aare beautifu.
very nice poetry Aadeil ..

SSl

Sanjayji,

Thanks a lot sir...

[aadeil]

Originally Posted by mast

Aedil bhai - great peice of work...it was very heartfelt and a flawless read for me...keep it up

Thanks a lot, Anubhavji....
Do keep coming....

[bhushan]

Perfect expression of beloved's tantrums....beautifully laid stanzas...
Keep writing...n sharing.

Lots of regards.

Bhushan joshi