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Falsafa pyar ka tum kya jaano - 22nd March 2015, 11:23 AM
Falsafa pyar ka mere yaar tum kya jaano,
Dil hai kabse bekarar tum kya jaano.

Chat pe dekho chand ne bikeri chandni,
Gul se bhanvare ka pyar tum kya jaano.

Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

Maikhane mein madhosh haiN kyun sare,
Kaise chalke jaam bar bar tum kya jaano.

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
Tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

Humne dil cheer ke rakh diya kadmon meiN,
HAMDAM is dil ki pukaar tum kya jaano.


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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Wah janab HAMDAM SAHAB,, Kya Dard hae,, wahhhh daad khubol karein
   
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Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano
Waah sanjay jee bahut khoob kaha....
is behtareen kalaam par dil se daad kubool karein..


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Bohot bohot bohot khooob gazal kahi aapne....

Ehsaas purasar......har sher lajawaab.....maja aa gaya...dheeeron daad kubul farmayen....

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23rd March 2015, 11:03 PM
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Wah janab HAMDAM SAHAB,, Kya Dard hae,, wahhhh daad khubol karein
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Re - 24th March 2015, 10:48 AM
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falsafa pyar ka dilber tum kya jaano,
dil hai kabse bekarar tum kya jaano.

Chat pe dekho chand ne bikeri chandni,
gul se bhanvare ka pyar tum kya jaano.

Makhmali bister per chain se sone walo,
kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

maikhane mein madhosh hain kyun sare,
kaise chalke jaam bar bar tum kya jaano.

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

Humne dil cheer ke rakh diya kadmon mein,
hamdam is dil ki pukaar tum kya jaano.
bahut he khubhamdam sahab behtreen kalam

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26th March 2015, 10:24 AM
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Falsafa pyar ka dilber tum kya jaano,
Dil hai kabse bekarar tum kya jaano.

Chat pe dekho chand ne bikeri chandni,
Gul se bhanvare ka pyar tum kya jaano.

Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

Maikhane mein madhosh haiN kyun sare,
Kaise chalke jaam bar bar tum kya jaano.

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
Tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

Humne dil cheer ke rakh diya kadmon meiN,
HAMDAM is dil ki pukaar tum kya jaano.

bahot acchii koshhish ek baar fir se sanjay saahab..... dil jhoom uthaa meraa......

pahle sher ke pahhle misre me jo aapne qaafiya istemal kiya hai wo mujhe na jaane kyon thoda atak raha hai.... agar use dekh len to baraae karam kalaam ka rukh hi badal jaaegaa........ dil se daad aapko pesh hai... likhte rahen......

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26th March 2015, 09:50 PM
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bahot acchii koshhish ek baar fir se sanjay saahab..... dil jhoom uthaa meraa......

pahle sher ke pahhle misre me jo aapne qaafiya istemal kiya hai wo mujhe na jaane kyon thoda atak raha hai.... agar use dekh len to baraae karam kalaam ka rukh hi badal jaaegaa........ dil se daad aapko pesh hai... likhte rahen......

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pls dilber ki jagah mere yaar edit kar deiN.

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27th March 2015, 03:58 AM
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Falsafa pyar ka dilber tum kya jaano,
Dil hai kabse bekarar tum kya jaano.

Chat pe dekho chand ne bikeri chandni,
Gul se bhanvare ka pyar tum kya jaano.

Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

Maikhane mein madhosh haiN kyun sare,
Kaise chalke jaam bar bar tum kya jaano.

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
Tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

Humne dil cheer ke rakh diya kadmon meiN,
HAMDAM is dil ki pukaar tum kya jaano.
Sanjay ji, bahut khoob likha hai..
kuch lines zyada hi pasand aaye..

aap likhte rahein, hum padte rahein,
aap alfaazon ko bunte rahein, aur hum sunte rahein,
koi rishta ho na ho zindagi mein mukammal sanjay sahab,
aapke nagmon pe waah waah hum karte rahein...
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Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano
Waah sanjay jee bahut khoob kaha....
is behtareen kalaam par dil se daad kubool karein..
Madhu ji ek baar phir se aapka shukriya ada kerta hun .. AAp hi hain jo baar bar humara haunsala badati rehti hain .

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Falsafa pyar ka mere yaar tum kya jaano,
Dil hai kabse bekarar tum kya jaano.

Chat pe dekho chand ne bikeri chandni,
Gul se bhanvare ka pyar tum kya jaano.

Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

Maikhane mein madhosh haiN kyun sare,
Kaise chalke jaam bar bar tum kya jaano.

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
Tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

Humne dil cheer ke rakh diya kadmon meiN,
HAMDAM is dil ki pukaar tum kya jaano.
Pur asar Sanjay ji aapki yeh ghazal technically bhi sahi hai aur ehsaas to bas kya kahun, dil ke aar paar ho gayi. Har sher muh se wah wah khiinchtaa chala gaya....

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Sanjay ji, bahut khoob likha hai..
kuch lines zyada hi pasand aaye..

aap likhte rahein, hum padte rahein,
aap alfaazon ko bunte rahein, aur hum sunte rahein,
koi rishta ho na ho zindagi mein mukammal sanjay sahab,
aapke nagmon pe waah waah hum karte rahein...
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Prince bhai aap ki haunsala wazai ke liye shukriya .. kafi dino ke baad aana hua aap ka sdc per . Aate raheiN aur muskurte raheiN.

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Falsafa pyar ka mere yaar tum kya jaano,
Dil hai kabse bekarar tum kya jaano.

Chat pe dekho chand ne bikeri chandni,
Gul se bhanvare ka pyar tum kya jaano.

Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

Maikhane mein madhosh haiN kyun sare,
Kaise chalke jaam bar bar tum kya jaano.

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
Tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

Humne dil cheer ke rakh diya kadmon meiN,
HAMDAM is dil ki pukaar tum kya jaano.


Namaskaar sanjay

bahut khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne, sabhi ashiyaar bahut acche bane hai...yeh 2 sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

Makhmali bister per chaiN se sone walo,
Kaise chubte hain khar tum kya jaano

Gul ne poocha shakh se saath kyun chora,
Tootne pe dard hote hazaar tum kya jano.

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