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zindagii aadmii kii kyaa hogii - 12th June 2015, 01:09 AM
zindagii aadmii kii kyaa hogii
maut se pehle vo fanaa hogii

kitne hai.n moD par muDe to kahaa.n
har taraf raah Gam zadaa hogii

gungunaataa hai vo Gazal jaise
dil se niklii koii sadaa hogii

laDkhaDaaye nahi.n kadam saaki
maikashi kaisii bin nashaa hogii

khuun nahi hai safiir rago.n me.n magar
aakhrii buu.nd tak vafaa hogii


ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता


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21st June 2015, 10:16 PM
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zindagii aadmii kii kyaa hogii
maut se pehle vo fanaa hogii

kitne hai.n moD par muDe to kahaa.n
har taraf raah Gam zadaa hogii

gungunaataa hai vo Gazal jaise
dil se niklii koii sadaa hogii

laDkhaDaaye nahi.n kadam saaki
maikashi kaisii bin nashaa hogii

khuun nahi hai safiir rago.n me.n magar
aakhrii buu.nd tak vafaa hogii
Bahut khoob ghazal huyi hai adeil ji....
daad qubool karein...


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22nd June 2015, 10:31 AM
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zindagii aadmii kii kyaa hogii
maut se pehle vo fanaa hogii

kitne hai.n moD par muDe to kahaa.n
har taraf raah Gam zadaa hogii

gungunaataa hai vo Gazal jaise
dil se niklii koii sadaa hogii

laDkhaDaaye nahi.n kadam saaki
maikashi kaisii bin nashaa hogii

khuun nahi hai safiir rago.n me.n magar
aakhrii buu.nd tak vafaa hogii
bahut khoob gazal kahi hai aapne Aadeil bhai...yu hi bazm meiN aate rhiye aur likhtey rhiye...aapki gazloN se bazm meiN chaar chaand lag jaate hai.


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WOW, very nice written


khuun nahi hai safiir rago.n me.n magar
aakhrii buu.nd tak vafaa hogii

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2nd July 2015, 11:50 AM
Madhuji, Sunita di, Prabhjyotji,

aap sabhi ka teh-e-dil shukr guzaar hu...
yuN hi aate rahiye


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zindagii aadmii kii kyaa hogii
maut se pehle vo fanaa hogii

kitne hai.n moD par muDe to kahaa.n
har taraf raah Gam zadaa hogii

gungunaataa hai vo Gazal jaise
dil se niklii koii sadaa hogii

laDkhaDaaye nahi.n kadam saaki
maikashi kaisii bin nashaa hogii

khuun nahi hai safiir rago.n me.n magar
aakhrii buu.nd tak vafaa hogii
wah aadeil bhai wah bahut hi sundar rachna hai aapki
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath

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