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15th October 2005, 11:47 AM
TU HAI ZAMEEN, TU HAI AASMAA
TUJH SE HAI DUNIYA, TUJHI SE HAI JAHAN
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE...................
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI..............
TERA NAAM
UJDE DIL, VEERAN AANKHAIN
DIL MAI HAI IK PIYAAS
TERE BIN NAHI KOI AAS
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANNANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI
TERA NAAM
TU HAI MAMTA KA SAROOP
TUJI SE HAI DHOOP
TUJI SE HAI CHAHO
TU HAI MERE ASHKO MAI
TU HAI MERI HASRATO MAI
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI
TERA NAAM
DIWAANO SE KIYA KAHE
HUM TU KHUD HI
DILAGI KAR BAITHE HAI
NA JAANE KAB SE
TUJHE SIRF TUJHE HI
APNE DIL MAI, UMANGO MAI,
KHAWASHIYO MAI AUR KHASRATO MAI
BASAI HOVE HAI
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BHI HAI
TERA NAAM
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15th October 2005, 01:56 PM
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE...................
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI..............
TERA NAAM
meri romana,
ek waqt k baad tumhe padhaa...... achha laga. dil ko sirf chhu kar nikal nahi gayi tumhari bhavna... lekin dil mai sama gayi.
khush raho
tumhari di
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15th October 2005, 03:55 PM
Beautiful...
Romana,
You have written very well... seeing you here after a long time... hope to see you more often now...
Take Care
Rohin
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15th October 2005, 09:27 PM
meri romana,
ek waqt k baad tumhe padhaa...... achha laga. dil ko sirf chhu kar
hw r u first of thanx for reading or mujhe bhut khushi hovi ke aapnse apana qeemti waqat mai se kuch is post ko diya. aapko meri bhavnai achi lagi hai yeh sun kar khushi hoi. aur dair se likhne waali baat well occasionally kuch likh leti hoon but post karne ka time nahi mila yeh aaj subha bas dil kiya to yahi aaki likh di waisey bi kuch dosto se promise kiya tha ke mai jald hi kuch post karo gi just to let them know that i havn't left the site.
neway di
thnx for coming here and praising my work
have a nice tiem
bye
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hi -
15th October 2005, 09:30 PM
hi rohin
hw r u
thank you ever so much. likhne waale jab shuru karte hai chorte to nahi but kabhi kabhi vo likhna bhool jaate hai maine soch ashiad mai bi bhool gayi hoo so ill give it a go again.
thnx once again
tc
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19th October 2005, 02:22 PM
hi babes
hw r u. meri piyaari gudiya kiya baat hai bhut hi piyaari nazam hai par tum itna udaas kiyo hoo and whr r u dese days. tera naam very thoughtful and a very deep poem. neway say hi to auntie aur roze kahi tumai ziada hi tang nahi kar rahe na. lol
take care
keep on writing and smiling
bye
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19th October 2005, 07:43 PM
Romana,
bahut achha likha hai... simply beautiful... keep writting & take care!
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21st October 2005, 11:10 AM
hi neha sis
hw r u, thnx for liking thsi poema nd taking some time to actually come on the site and read i do really appriciate it and wot u on about not seein or hearing from me since ages ijus rang u yday pagal. we might b coming ova soon so c u dan yeh
thanx once again
bye
hello parul
hw r u thnak you ever so much for takin some time to read this poem. thnx for ur encouraging words
bye
keep smiling
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21st October 2005, 05:41 PM
Bahut achha likha hai
kafi waQt baad aapko padhne ka mauka lag raha hai ..
DIWAANO SE KIYA KAHE
HUM TU KHUD HI
DILAGI KAR BAITHE HAI
NA JAANE KAB SE
TUJHE SIRF TUJHE HI
APNE DIL MAI, UMANGO MAI,
KHAWASHIYO MAI AUR KHASRATO MAI
BASAI HOVE HAI
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BHI HAI
TERA NAAM
khaas taur pe ye to bahut hi achha likha hai
malik aapko ye hunar aur takseem kare
tareef Qabool ho
apna khyaal rakhiye
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22nd October 2005, 05:48 PM
salaam kshitiz
how r
and thank you ever so much for taking some time to read this poem. aap ne is nazam ko padha aur sarha mujhe likhne ki peraina isi se milti hai.
thanx
tc
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22nd October 2005, 05:57 PM
Romana ji..
Ek alag andaaz mai likha gaya yah qalam hame behad behad pasand aaya... App ki is qalam ko ek taal mai gaaya ja sakta hai aur mai bhi wohi kosish kar raha tha... Dil se nikli daad kabul kijiye..
MayanK
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22nd October 2005, 06:14 PM
Romana ji,
bahoot khoobsurat hai ye rachana.. so nice
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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22nd October 2005, 06:21 PM
MayanK ji
kaise ho aap. thnx aap aaye aur is nazam ko pasand kiya mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye. ehm gaana mujhe nahi aata magar jab taal mai aap gaa sakain tu mujhe zaroor suniye ga. aap ne meri nazam ko is kabil samjha aur itni appriciate kiya thnx alot.
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22nd October 2005, 06:23 PM
hi garima ji
how r u
thank you for takin some time to read and replyin to it
keep on smiling
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29th November 2007, 10:02 PM
Aansu ki kimat wo jante hai,
jo kisiko yad karte hai.
Dil ke gum wo jante hai jo kisiko chahte hai,
Dost ke dard ko wahi jante hai
jo use dil se dost mante hai.
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29th November 2007, 10:14 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by romana
TU HAI ZAMEEN, TU HAI AASMAA
TUJH SE HAI DUNIYA, TUJHI SE HAI JAHAN
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE...................
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI..............
TERA NAAM
UJDE DIL, VEERAN AANKHAIN
DIL MAI HAI IK PIYAAS
TERE BIN NAHI KOI AAS
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANNANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI
TERA NAAM
TU HAI MAMTA KA SAROOP
TUJI SE HAI DHOOP
TUJI SE HAI CHAHO
TU HAI MERE ASHKO MAI
TU HAI MERI HASRATO MAI
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BI HAI
TERA NAAM
DIWAANO SE KIYA KAHE
HUM TU KHUD HI
DILAGI KAR BAITHE HAI
NA JAANE KAB SE
TUJHE SIRF TUJHE HI
APNE DIL MAI, UMANGO MAI,
KHAWASHIYO MAI AUR KHASRATO MAI
BASAI HOVE HAI
HAAN YEH HAI MERA MANANA KE
DUNIYA MAI ABBHI BHI HAI
TERA NAAM
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29th November 2007, 10:16 PM
Jab pyaar ki baat adhoori ho..
jab beech me thori doori ho..
jab milna bohut zaroori ho…
per milne mein majboori ho..
tum dil me yaad jaga lena..
kuch pyaar ke deep jala lena..
jab mujh se milne aa na sako..
aur yaad se bahar jaa na sako…
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3rd December 2007, 11:15 PM
Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,
sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,
Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,
To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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4th December 2007, 03:05 PM
Romana ji aapko padna accha laga.........waqt miley to mahfil mein jaroor aaya kijiye.....aap sab purane members ki shayri ko hum bahut miss kartey haiN............!
kush rahiye
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th December 2007, 09:23 PM
Apki dosti hum is tarah nibhayenge,
app roz khafa hona hum roz manayenge,
Par maan jana manane se,
Warna yeh bheegi palkein le ke kahan jayenge
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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