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Ghazal: Kisi pe mar ke dekho... -
25th March 2013, 05:05 PM
aadaab dosto,
ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi.. Ise bhi kar ke dekho Kisi pe mar ke dekho Fuzool dil hai saalim Kabhi bikhar ke dekho Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai Magar saNwar ke dekho Jo chaho tum nazar meiN Usi ko bhar ke dekho O arsh ke safiiroeN Zaraa utar ke dekho Ji haan kahi hai tumne Lo ab mukar ke dekho Ye shayri hai bismil Yahaan ubhar ke dekho Pradhyuman - Bismil gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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25th March 2013, 05:38 PM
Pradhyuman bhaii:
namaste! janaab aapko kal sunne kaa mauqaa milaa... kyaa Khoob liKhte hoN aap aur aap kaa Sher kehne kaa andaaz bhee Khoob thaa... ChhoTi beHr meiN aik achChhi koShiSh..dil se daad aur duaaeN KhuSh rahiye.... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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25th March 2013, 06:35 PM
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Bohat khoob Pradhyuman ji.................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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25th March 2013, 07:38 PM
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ChhoTi Beh'r MeN Asar Andaaz Ghazal BehtareeN Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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26th March 2013, 08:49 AM
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chaliye khair is baar nahi padh paae to koi baat nahi.. ab ye program to hote rahenge insha allaah.. next time aap apni pasand ki ghazlen zaroor padheN... shukriyaa... |
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27th March 2013, 09:20 AM
very nice
bahot khoob ghazal ........................................ |
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1st May 2013, 01:06 PM
bahot shukriya aap sabhi dosto ka...aapki daad aur hounslafzai ka asar ta-umr rahega mujh par.
aur hatim sahaab..yeh bhi khushi hai ki kisi naye insaan tak pahunchi meri baat..shukriya bahot shukriya god bless u all! aapka apna, Pradhyuman - Bismil gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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