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....I just want to Exist! - 26th December 2010, 03:50 PM
I have got no enemies ,I have got no friends,
I don't follow any rules, I don't follow any trends!
I just follow my heart, whichever way it bends,
I make do with what I get, whatever life sends!


My hand's always open,I never make a fist,
I'm never in a competition, I just want to Exist!
I don't aspire to be a number, a number in a list,
If my life has got any story, then survival is its gist!

I just want to live my life, as long as I'm alive,
I don't mean to push none, I just want to survive!
If at all there's any wish, for which I always want to strive,
It is seeing the notion of 'live and let live', everyone revive!

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its a nice post. keep it up. and thanks for sharing........................................

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Thanks! - 30th December 2010, 07:38 PM
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its a nice post. keep it up. and thanks for sharing........................................

Thanks for the appreciation Mittal Pali Sahab! You're always welcome here! Wish you Peace!

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I have got no enemies ,I have got no friends,
I don't follow any rules, I don't follow any trends!
I just follow my heart, whichever way it bends,
I make do with what I get, whatever life sends!


My hand's always open,I never make a fist,
I'm never in a competition, I just want to Exist!
I don't aspire to be a number, a number in a list,
If my life has got any story, then survival is its gist!

I just want to live my life, as long as I'm alive,
I don't mean to push none, I just want to survive!
If at all there's any wish, for which I always want to strive,
It is seeing the notion of 'live and let live', everyone revive!


A fascinating piece and I really enjoyed reading..........!

u have expressed ur feelings very beautifully,

looking fwd to read more ..........!!!



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Thank You! - 20th April 2011, 04:10 AM
A Deep Thank You Zainy Sahiba!! Wish You Peace And Tranquility In Life!!

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abso beutiful
nice rhymes
good words
great idea....

well done

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Thanks! - 23rd April 2011, 03:25 AM
Adaab Mohtaram Janaab Dr.Tahir Sahab! Heartfelt Thanks for Your appreciation. It is everwelcome and evervalued here. Apoloigies for the late response. Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein!

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23rd April 2011, 10:39 PM
some times it does seem to be a confession of eternal defeat..but this is outstanding in my opinion

My hand's always open,I never make a fist,...flawlessly something beautiful has been said....a deft stroke on the canvass.

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Thanks! - 8th May 2011, 01:51 AM
Adaab, Dear Zidd Sahab!

Yes what you've said is true from one perspective. I believe I wrote this to remind self to be at peace and certainly at ease from pursuing mortal goals. I really value your appreciation. Wish you Peace!

Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein!

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WONDERFUL !!!!!!!

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9th December 2013, 01:31 AM
Seems like you have written what I feel..
This touched me..
Thanks for writing EnigmA..
Keep writing..
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Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
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Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
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Beautiful thoughts potrayed in exceptionally beautiful poem

   
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9th June 2014, 04:58 PM
Enigma ji...

I know aap yahaan kisi se naaraaz ho...but if you are somewhere around and reading this msg...pls come back...we miss you and your poetry...

Jisne bhi aapka dil dukhaya ho...main unki taraf se aapse maangti huun...bhool jayiye purani batein aur laut aayiye....

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9th June 2014, 09:01 PM
i too miss him zainyji.
i hope the enigma unwraps this mystery .

it would really be a privilege to see you again sir. a privilege to be able to speak to you once again
   
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