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mere gam pe hasne waale ( a nazm ...close to my heart ) -
11th October 2001, 08:38 AM
mere gam pe hasne waale
ye to kismaton ki baat hai jo meri shareek-e-gam thi wo teri shareek-e-hayaat hai tumhaari bhi mehfil saji hai apne yahan bhi raunak hai gale mili hain tere khushiyan apni gamon se mulaqaat hai ye tere ghar ka aaftaab gaya hai mere dar se utth ke ab teri raaten hai subah jaisi mera ab din bhi raat hai tere daaman mein giraa hai aasmaa(n) ka ik sitaara sambhaal ke rakhna ise tum mera mehboob ik saugaat hai tumko ho mubarak ae dost shatranj ye mohabbat ki bichhao tum apni bisaat ab hamari to maat hai jo meri shareek-e-gam thi wo teri shareek-e-hayaat hai woh teri shareek-e-hayaat hai.....!!! maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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11th October 2001, 01:01 PM
Excellent..!!
Wah maikashji..Waqaii bahut acchi nazm hai.... kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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its wonderful -
11th October 2001, 03:15 PM
hello maikash!!!
sahi main dil ko chuh gayeah tumhari yeah nazam... i m sure insaan tabhi aisay kuch likh pata hai jab usnay yeah batien mehsus ki ho.... bahut sahi kaha!!! ye tere ghar ka aaftaab gaya hai mere dar se utth ke ab teri raaten hai subah jaisi mera ab din bhi raat hai bahuth sahi kaha .. bahuth sahi suma |
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12th October 2001, 01:43 AM
Uff......Maikashji .......itni achi nazm....!!!!
No doubt...its a really really really good one .....  neelo ;-) |
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12th October 2001, 07:17 AM
aap sab ka dil se shukarguzaar hoon.....bahot pehle ye nazm likhi thi....aur yeh nazm us shayri mein se hai jo main post nahin karta...!!
ashaar mere youn to zamaane ke liye hain kuch sheyr faqat unko sunaane ke liye hain aapki hausla-afzai ka ehsaan hua dil pe...!! adaab maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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12th October 2001, 09:50 PM
Aadab MaikaH Ji,
Aapki nazm padi mashaa-allah aap to bahot bahot bahot he acchaa likhte hain. Agar aap ko bura na lage to main jaanna chahunga ke aapka profession kya hai? (Jawaab ka muntazir)  Yoon to bahout bheed hai harsoo magar.... Ek shakhs saare shahar ko viraa^n kar gaya.... |
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13th October 2001, 06:51 AM
adaab kahsif ji.....
zarra-nawazi ka shukriya janaab.....!! adaab maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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22nd October 2003, 03:21 PM
Mujhe nehi pata kyu mere dil rorahi hein, aise jeise ke chubta hi chali gayi ke mein rok nehi parahi hu. Shayed yeh meri dil aapke dard ab puri tarha se mehsoosh kar rahi hein!! Ab aur mein nehi parsakungi. Later on again. Kyu ke ab meri dimaag nehi kaam kar rahi hein aur jab woh nehi kaam karte hein toh replies aksar jiyada hojati hein. Ha yeh hein ke meri dilhi kehti rahti hein aur mein likhti jati hu. Lekin nehi aur nehi. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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