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23rd July 2005, 07:04 PM
Baj Raha hai sitar ke jaisa,
Wo tasabbor, Karaar ke Jaisa..

Koun Bikhara hai dil ki dharti par,
Rang, Khushboo, Bahaar ke Jaisa..

Rafta-Rafta bhigo gaya sab kuchh,
Ek aansooN, Fuhaar ke jaisa..

Nili AankhoN mai jhaakta kya hai,
Ye gulaabi, Pyaar ke jaisa..

Tum HazaaroN ho, Fir bhi ek nahi,
Ek meN hooN, Hazaar ke jaisa..

HasrateN, HasrateN rahi Harpal,
Aur meN, bekaraar ke jaisa..

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23rd July 2005, 07:41 PM
aaj Raha hai sitar ke jaisa,
Wo tasabbor, Karaar ke Jaisa..

Koun Bikhara hai dil ki dharti par,
Rang, Khushboo, Bahaar ke Jaisa..

Waaaaaaaaaaahh.. kyaa baat hai!


Rafta-Rafta bhigo gaya sab kuchh,
Ek aansooN, Fuhaar ke jaisa..

Nili AankhoN mai jhaakta kya hai,
Ye gulaabi, Pyaar ke jaisa..

beautifull....!


Tum HazaaroN ho, Fir bhi ek nahi,
Ek meN hooN, Hazaar ke jaisa..

HasrateN, HasrateN rahi Harpal,
Aur meN, bekaraar ke jaisa..

Waaaaaaaaaaahhhh!

Mayank bhai

Ek behad khoobsurat ghazal ke liye daa kubool kijiyega.. aise hi likhte rhaiye...

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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24th July 2005, 07:26 AM
HI Mayank Ji,

Behud umda ghazal hai bhai. Bohot bohot shukriya isse humare saath yaha baantne ke liye.

Luvs,

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24th July 2005, 08:19 AM
Koun Bikhara hai dil ki dharti par,
Rang, Khushboo, Bahaar ke Jaisa..

Rafta-Rafta bhigo gaya sab kuchh,
Ek aansooN, Fuhaar ke jaisa..

Bahut khuub! likha hai...yeh ashaar dil jeet gaye...kam lafzon mein bahut khubsurat bayaan hai...

mayank kaise ho...bahut dino baad yahan ka rukh kiya...yoonhi mehfil mein aate raho...raunak badhaate raho...

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Re: Ek Ghazal.. - 24th July 2005, 09:29 AM
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Originally posted by Anjana Rahi
Baj Raha hai sitar ke jaisa,
Wo tasabbor, Karaar ke Jaisa..

Koun Bikhara hai dil ki dharti par,
Rang, Khushboo, Bahaar ke Jaisa..

Rafta-Rafta bhigo gaya sab kuchh,
Ek aansooN, Fuhaar ke jaisa..

Nili AankhoN mai jhaakta kya hai,
Ye gulaabi, Pyaar ke jaisa..

Tum HazaaroN ho, Fir bhi ek nahi,
Ek meN hooN, Hazaar ke jaisa..

HasrateN, HasrateN rahi Harpal,
Aur meN, bekaraar ke jaisa..

-Mayank
mayank ji,
in very few words i can just say u expressed so much. gr8 flow of thoughts. plz do keep on sharing ur wonderful creations more with us. its awesome as usual. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.


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Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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15th October 2005, 06:42 PM
Pulkit bhai,

Kaise ho? Ghazal aap ko pasand aaya jaan kar khushio huyi.. Daad ke liye bahoot bahoot sukriya..

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15th October 2005, 06:44 PM
Salim ji..

Saath den eke liya bahoot bahoot shukariya.. Aap ke is housla afzayi ka safar jaari rahe inhi duaaoN ke saath.. Apna khayaal rakhiye..

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15th October 2005, 06:45 PM
Parastaar saahiba..

Kaisi haiN aap? Aap ko qalam pasand aaya yahi khud ek badi taarif hai. Ab to aadat bhi chhot gayi hai kuchh likhne ki… Kosish karoon to bhi nahi likh paaunga..

Mai thik hoon.. kuchh to masorifiyat bhi badh gayi hai aur likhne ki aadat bhi nahi rahi… kosish karoonga ki aage bhi baaqaaedaa aa sakooN aur is pariwaar se jud sakooN .. Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa…

Aap ka dost..

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15th October 2005, 06:50 PM
Roohaani ji..

Kase haiN aap? Ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye bahoot bahoot sukriya.. Aap sab ka pyaar hai ki yahaan baarbaar aana hota hai.. aap bhi apna khayaal rakhiye aur yuN hi sab ka housla afzaayi karte rahiye...

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15th October 2005, 10:13 PM
Mayank bhai,

Bahoot hi unda khayal aur bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal....
shukriya isse yahan likhne ke liye....

Apna khayal rakhiyega...
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16th October 2005, 09:05 AM
Ajana rahi ji,

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22nd October 2005, 05:52 PM
Rohin bhaaii...

Taarif ke liye shukriya... Apna khayal rakhiye...

Aap a bhaaii

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22nd October 2005, 05:53 PM
Ferhana ji..

App ko pasand aaya yah qalam jaan kar achchha laga.. umeed hai aage bhi aap sab ka sahyog rahega.. Apna khayaal rakhiyega..

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22nd October 2005, 05:59 PM
Mayank ji,

bahoot achhi gazal hai.. aur mai padh hi nahi paayi thi.. thanks to these rainy days ki mai aaram se baithi hoon aur itani achhi gazal padh paayi


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hi - 22nd October 2005, 06:38 PM
mayank bhai

how r u

hey bhooot hi piyaara khiyaal hai yeh aur yeh ghazal to kamaal ki hai. i think u aap ise zaroor gaa sakte hai. its really beautiful.

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22nd October 2005, 08:25 PM
Koun Bikhara hai dil ki dharti par,
Rang, Khushboo, Bahaar ke Jaisa..

Rafta-Rafta bhigo gaya sab kuchh,
Ek aansooN, Fuhaar ke jaisa..

Namaskar Mayank Ji

Your Ghazals have always sounded beautiful......this time even u have written nicely...hamare taraf se bhi daad kabul kijeyga..kuch panktiyaan likhne ka mann hay

Rafta-Rafta Ansuon ki Lehar chalti kab hay
Muskrahat Fuhar se gam chalkati kab hay

Yeh Akash mein indradhanush ki kirney
Dhara par rang chalkati kab hay

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kaise hai aap?aap bahut hi sundar likhte hai main aaj aapki ghazal pad ke aap ki fan ho gayi aagey bhi likhte rahiyega aur humein pyar sikhate rahiyega......

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Arrow Hi - 7th April 2008, 06:32 PM
HI MAYANK...

KAHAN SE NIKLI HAI AAJ YEH KALAAM TUMHARI....
DO SAAL PURANI....
MERE LIYE SHAAYAD KISINE GHASEETA HAI ISE...
TUMHARI GHAZAL PURANI....

LOVE
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Baj Raha hai sitar ke jaisa,
Wo tasabbor, Karaar ke Jaisa..

Koun Bikhara hai dil ki dharti par,
Rang, Khushboo, Bahaar ke Jaisa..

Rafta-Rafta bhigo gaya sab kuchh,
Ek aansooN, Fuhaar ke jaisa..

Nili AankhoN mai jhaakta kya hai,
Ye gulaabi, Pyaar ke jaisa..

Tum HazaaroN ho, Fir bhi ek nahi,
Ek meN hooN, Hazaar ke jaisa..

HasrateN, HasrateN rahi Harpal,
Aur meN, bekaraar ke jaisa..

-Mayank[/quote]

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