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Mere pyaare dostoN:
namaskaaR aur aadaab!! aik koShiSh ehsaas ko lafzoN ke zar'iiYe bayaaN karne kii... liKhate waQt Tech. baatoN pe gaur naheeN diyaa.. bas apne dil ke ehsaas ko Geet meiN Dhaalne kii aur use gungunaane kii ik chhoTii sii koShiSh kii thee .. jo aaj aap sab ke saath baaNt rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath zaruur mileNgaa.. aapki qeemtee raae'y aur sujhaav kaa iNtezar raheNgaa...! ******************************* "" tujhe chhu kar jo hawaayeN guzarti haii..samaa letaa huuN maiN usse apnii iN saaNsoN meiN... yahee aas liye aaj tak jee rahaa huuN. ki mil jaaye tu kahiiN ziNdagee ke kisii moD par.. aur mujhe qazaa mile terii baahoN meiN.... terii yaadoN ko dil meiN basaaye biKhre huye sapnoN ko dil meiN sajaaye. ziNdagee ko bas jiye jaa rahaa huuN.. yaa Shaayad ziNdagee mujhe jee rahee haii..!.."" kyuuN... kyuuN... hmm.. kyuuN...!! guzre laMhoN meiN Khoyii si hai tu kahaaN saNg ti're aaj to haii yeh saara jahaaN kyuuuuN.... haii aaNkheN yeh nam ehsaasoN meiN Ghum O sanam.... O sanam...!! tu miTaa dooree zaraa paas aa jaanejaaN bin tere yeh ziNdagee lage ab to KhizaaN kyuuuN.... hai aaNkheN yeh nam ehsaasoN meiN Ghum O sanam.... O sanam..!! wo yaadeN.. baateN naa baaqee ko'i niShaaN reh gaii hai baaqee bas taNhaa'i yahaaN kyuuuN.... hai aaNkheN yeh nam ehsaasoN meiN Ghum O sanam.... O sanam..!! |
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5th January 2009, 11:15 PM
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hmmmmmmmm...o sanam ......o sanam......!!! kisko bulata hai re tum  kis ke liye hai yeh pyar bhari sargam  o sanam .....o sanam..!! kaya baat hai chottu........majja aa gaya tumhara geet gunguna kar....technically to maloom nahi, hamari nazar mein to yeh geet wah wah hai  o sanam....o sanam.....!! hamari taraf se tumhe pyar ke saath reps +++ sister .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Miss Sunita.... aap se poochna hai ki.... ye sher kiska hai?
Eh aasmaa.n wale zamee.n par uttar kar dekh, hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh....... |
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5th January 2009, 11:33 PM
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yeh geet sonu nigam ka gaya hua hai aur fim hai "aaja meri jaan" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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6th January 2009, 09:47 AM
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dear dhaval shayri ka ek alag hi rang mujhe dekhne ko mila.... per lakh koshish ke baad bhii main ise gunguna nahi paya   mujhe samajh hi nahi aayii.... bada pyaar geet hai.... aur main ise ab tumhaare hii munh se sunana chahta hoon to kab laga rahe ho phone  accah serious.... bakai main dil ki aawaz nazar aa rahi hai mujhe,.. bali sach kahoon main bhii ise padta huaa kahin kho gaya.... laga jaise meri hi dil ki aawaz ho. daad kabool kare.n aa shukriya dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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6th January 2009, 10:46 AM
dhaval bhai....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hain...very romantic.........
humne koshish to ki per gungunana nahi aaya...zarasa mushkil hai...per accha laga isey padhkar..something different... zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th January 2009, 01:24 PM
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Pranaam!! aapko yeh koShiSH pasaNd aayii jaan.K be-Had KhuShii hu'ii... aur yeh o sanam koii nahiiN  aap merii KhiNchaa'ii kar rahe hai Hmm.. YuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee..!KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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10th January 2009, 06:13 PM
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Dhaval ji, kaise ho aap..? mujhe to pata nahin yeh ghazal hai ya Nuzm per gungunake dekhi to yeh song bahot achha laga wo yaadeN.. baateN naa baaqee ko'i niShaaN reh gaii hai baaqee bas taNhaa'i yahaaN kyuuuN.... hai aaNkheN yeh nam ehsaasoN meiN Ghum O sanam.... O sanam..! dil ko chhu gaya aapka song ..aise hi likhte rahiye Dua.on ke saath Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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13th January 2009, 12:07 AM
dhaval dear
gaana bahut acha laga gane me bhi maza hai..aur yakeenan sanam bata hi dega sab jo chhupa raha hoga... acha sa mahual ban jayerga jab dhaval dear ye geet gungunayega likhte raho khush raho sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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19th January 2009, 09:00 PM
dear dhaval acha laga ise mukammal shaqal main parrh ker acha ahsasaat hain likhte raho khush raho humesha Ameen
apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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1st February 2009, 11:23 PM
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dilip bhaa'ii: namaste!! kaise haiN aap? aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayii jaan.K be-had KhuShii hu'ii.. aur zaruur jab baat hoNgii hamaari ees baar tab aapki yeh KhaahiSh bhee poorii kar duuNgaa maiN.. yeh geet gaake hi sunaa duuNgaa aapko..! YuuNhi paRhte rahiyengaa.. saath dete rahiyengaa aage bhee..! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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2nd February 2009, 01:55 PM
its beautiful ...............................
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7th February 2009, 05:55 PM
jai mata di dhaval......
yeh gaana gungunakar bahut accha laga........gaane likhne ki acchi khasi practice ho gayi hain...........daad! mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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8th February 2009, 12:45 AM
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keep writing. Mera daman jalega tau jalogai tum bhi yeh samajhte ho,phir aag lagate kyu ho
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14th June 2009, 11:54 AM
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namaste! kaisii hai.n aap? aapko merii chhoTii sii koShiSh par deKh kar bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii.. Geet ko pasaNd karne ke liye maiN aapkaa be-Had mamnuun huuN.. aapse bas yahee darKhaaSt haii kii aage bhee yuuNhi saath dete raheN! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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29th September 2009, 12:49 PM
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namaste! maiN ek dam Theek huuN.. aapne merii koShiSh ko pasaNd kiyaa bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii! YuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.N... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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29th September 2009, 01:55 PM
Dhaval Ji,
Boht khobsorat likha aapnay, Mujhe boht pasand aaya aap ka likha.... Aisey hi likhtay rahiye : GOD BLESS YOU tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th June 2010, 09:39 AM
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namaste! kem Chho tame? Geet ki pasaNdagee ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h! saath nibhaate rahe.n aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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12th June 2010, 09:40 AM
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Aadaab! aapki yaad hameShaa aatee hai! ummid kartaa huuN aap Khairiyat se ho.nge! koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye ShuKriyaa'h! Khudaa haafiz aapka ~ Dhaval |
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13th June 2010, 08:15 AM
Dhaval Ji........Namaste !
Very Impressive & Very Romantic.......... ! Nice creation..... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th June 2010, 09:28 AM
Indeed a very beautiful peice of work Ishk saheb............
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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24th June 2010, 02:41 PM
So romantic Dhaval ji... Superbbbbbbbbb....
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