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Tumhara Naam Likh Likh Kar Mitana Bhul Jati Hun,,, - 10th May 2010, 03:15 PM

TUMHARA NAAM LIKH LIKH KR
MITANA BHUL JATI HUN,
TUMHE JAB DEKHTI HUN MEI,
ZAMANA BHUL JATI HUN,

TUMHE JAB YAAD KARYTI HUN,
BHULANA BHUL JATI HUN,

HZARO AISI BATEI_N HAI
JO MERE DIL MEI HOTI HAI,
MAGAR JB TUMSE MILTI HUN,
BTANA BHUL JATI HUN,

TUMHARE BAAD AB HR PAL,
BADI MUSHQIL SE KAT TA HAI,
MEI AKSAR TUMKO KHWABO MEI,
BATANA BHUL JATI HUN,

TUMHE JAB DEKHTI HUN MEI,
ZMANA BHUL JATI HUN,

HAR SHYAM SOCHTI HUN MEI,
KI TUMKO BHUL JAUNGI,
MAGAR JAB SUBHA HOTI HAI,
IRAADA BHUL JATI HUN,,,

TUMHARA NAAM LIKH LIKH KAR,
MITANA BHUL JATI HUN,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
   
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10th May 2010, 03:21 PM

Bohat saaf seedha saccha aur accha ...

badi mushkil se kuch pasand aata hai aaj kal .. aur aapki kahi har seedhi see baat bhi aise rakhi hai ki seedhe dill main aa jaye .. aur tarrannum main bhi baith jaye aise sajaya hai .. bohat hi khoob ...

agar ye aapne hi likhi hai to aapki kalam ko salaam ..

Aap se aage bhi padhne ko milega isse bhi accha umeed hai

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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..

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10th May 2010, 03:24 PM

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TUMHARA NAAM LIKH LIKH KR
MITANA BHUL JATI HUN,
TUMHE JAB DEKHTI HUN MEI,
ZAMANA BHUL JATI HUN,

TUMHE JAB YAAD KARYTI HUN,
BHULANA BHUL JATI HUN,

HZARO AISI BATEI_N HAI
JO MERE DIL MEI HOTI HAI,
MAGAR JB TUMSE MILTI HUN,
BTANA BHUL JATI HUN,

TUMHARE BAAD AB HR PAL,
BADI MUSHQIL SE KAT TA HAI,
MEI AKSAR TUMKO KHWABO MEI,
BATANA BHUL JATI HUN,

TUMHE JAB DEKHTI HUN MEI,
ZMANA BHUL JATI HUN,

HAR SHYAM SOCHTI HUN MEI,
KI TUMKO BHUL JAUNGI,
MAGAR JAB SUBHA HOTI HAI,
IRAADA BHUL JATI HUN,,,

TUMHARA NAAM LIKH LIKH KAR,
MITANA BHUL JATI HUN,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
A CLASS ACT........
TOO GOOD...
aisa lagta hai aap ek accompolised shayara hai
welcome madam

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10th May 2010, 03:57 PM

Welcome to sdc Anjali ji........

Aapki nazm bohat pyari hai, aapse poochna chahungi,ke kya yeh nazm aapki hi hai? actually yeh nazm mujhe kayi aur sites per bhi mili hai,infact khud sdc per do baar posted hai....

http://www.tafreehmela.com/ghamgheen...-jata-hun.html

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...h+mitana+bhool

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...h+mitana+bhool

http://www.smsshayari.net/SMS-Shayar...Jata-Hoon.html

http://www.evergreensms.com/details/57876/~-Good-Luck-~/Tumhara-naam-likh-likh-kar-mittana-bhool.html

http://pearlpk.wordpress.com/2008/03...ara-naam-likh/

http://shayarimypassion.blogspot.com...ana-bhool.html


MaiN jaanti huuN , aap yahaaN nayi haiN isiliye aap yahaaN ke rules nahi jaanti haiN...

yahaaN aap agar kisi aur ki nazm/ghazal post kar rahe ho tou saath mein (nm) ,(not mine)...likhna zaruri hai

PLZZ KEEP THIS IN MIND, IN FUTURE...




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10th May 2010, 04:11 PM

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PLZZ KEEP THIS MIND IN FUTURE...

hahahahaha.................................

Yeah.... Anjali.. never bring another's mind in here....hahaha

Damn good...
   
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hahahahaha.................................

Yeah.... Anjali.. never bring another's mind in here....hahaha

Damn good...


HMMMMM........THANKS .......




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10th May 2010, 04:19 PM

Hota hai hota hai........

Ghalti se mistake...........rite
   
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10th May 2010, 04:48 PM

Anjali jee:

namaste!

Sab se pehle to parivaar me.N aapkaa tah-e-dil se swaagat hai... Anjali jee Khud ki liKhi koShiSh nah ho to Not mine ees liye liKhte hai.N ki saHeeH writer ko daad-o-taareef mile.N ..Bas ik yahee waj'H hai.. Ummid kartaa hu.N aap ees baat ko samjhe.Ngi.. Bazm me.N nayi hai.N aisaa ho jaata hai to buraa nah maaniyegaa ..Aapki liKhi hu'ii koShiSh kaa iNtezaar raheNga!

aik darKhaaSt hai jab bhee waQt mile.N parivaar ke sadasyo.N ki koShiShe.N zarur paRhe.N aur apni raa'ey dena nah bhuule.N ees se aage liKhne ka hausilaa'h aur himmat mileNgee sab ko..Aur SeeKhne ko bhee mileNgaa

ShuKriyaa'h

duaao.N ke saath ijaazat

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Smile Welcome - 10th May 2010, 04:55 PM

Anjali jii, aapka SDC pariwaar mein dil se suwagat hai, aapne bahut acchi nazm hum sabse share ki, hume ahsaas bahut acche lage, baaki Zainy aur Dhaval ki baat se main bhi sahmat hoon.
umeed hai yahan aap bahut accha waqt guzarengi, yahan aapko sabka bharpoor saath mileyga, hume aapke likhe tazza kalaam ka intzaar rahega.

god bless u


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thanks to all of you.... - 10th May 2010, 06:16 PM

sabse pehle to shukriya, mherbani, karam,,,,aap sbhi ka mujhe yha k rules samjhane k liye.

niyam aapke bnaye hai to kayam ham bhi rakhenge,
Mehfil aapne lgayi hai to kadam ham bhi rakhenge,,
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Mauqa to dijiye ham bhi shayad aapse kuch seekh ske,,,,maanti hun mei ye poem meri nhi hai lakin kuch iss terha yaad hai ki socha shuruwat isi se ki jaye,,,,

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Anjali jii, aapka SDC pariwaar mein dil se suwagat hai, aapne bahut acchi nazm hum sabse share ki, hume ahsaas bahut acche lage, baaki Zainy aur Dhaval ki baat se main bhi sahmat hoon.
umeed hai yahan aap bahut accha waqt guzarengi, yahan aapko sabka bharpoor saath mileyga, hume aapke likhe tazza kalaam ka intzaar rahega.

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Ankho mei Ek sapNa Tha,,,, - 11th May 2010, 01:30 PM

Ankho Mei Ek SapNa Tha, Jaise Vo Mera ApNa Tha,
Shayad Dil Ko Mere Ehsaas Na Tha,
Jo Uska Hai Ab, Kabhi Mere Paas Na Tha,
Khamoshi, Udaasi, aaj bhi kyu Chayi Hai,
Jab Paas Nahi Vo Fir Kyu Lagta Hai,
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