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लकीरें - 1st August 2013, 09:46 PM

सांझ ढले
करते रहना
तेरा इंतज़ार ,
आँखों में भरकर
उदास - सी चाहत .
तेरा आना
मेरा खिलना ,
मन की
अँधेरी गलियों में
दीपों की
इक पंक्ति जलना ,
पा लेना
खामोश - सी राहत .
मेरी आँखों से
कभी
आंसू गिरना ,
तेरी बातों का
हौसले भरना
मूक शब्दों की
बाहों में
मेरा घिरना
पाकर
तेरी चाहत .
तुम
भूले तो
नहीं हो ना ?
तेरा साथ
मेरा
भाग्य नहीं माना ,
फिर क्यों ...........
जिस दिन
मेरे मन ने
थामा था
तेरे क्लांत मन को ,
और
हौले - से
सहलाया था
तेरे थके माथे को ,
उसी पल से
तेरे माथे की
लकीरें
मेरे हाथों में
उतर आई हैं ?

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2nd August 2013, 04:10 PM

मेरी आँखों से
कभी
आंसू गिरना ,
तेरी बातों का
हौसले भरना
मूक शब्दों की
बाहों में
मेरा घिरना
पाकर
तेरी चाहत .


Waaahhhhhhh bahot khoob peshkash rahi aapi Swaraa jii.................. behad aazaad khayaal me likhi gayee ye kavitaa yaqeenan kisi ka dil jeetne ko kaafi hai.... mujhe bahot pasand aai aapki kavish, pls ise hamaare saath baanT'te rahiyegaa...

shukriyaa

Shaad...........


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3rd August 2013, 10:01 PM

Shaad Ji,
Bahut bahut dhanyvad meri koshish ko pasand karne ke liye . Aage bhi baantna hai aapke saath apni kavita ko. Aap log padhenge , apni baat kahenge , tabhi aur likh sakungi .

   
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bahut hi ahchi kavita hai saaheb, ahcha laga padh kar, umeed karte haiN jald hi aapko aur padhne ka mauka milegaa...



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15th August 2013, 11:34 PM

Taish ,

Bahut bahut shukriya kavita padhne aur sarahne ke liye . Definitely aage bhi apni kavita aapke saath share karna chahungi .

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