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Love salam meri jaan payal - 22nd January 2003, 11:12 PM

kaisi hain aap allah se dua hai ke ap achi aur bahut achi hoon mashallah p ek baat bataieye ab tarif kia karu tarif un ki ki jati hai jo trif ke kabil hoon aur kuch chcezien asi hotin hain jinti tarif se bhi unki tauhin hoti hai kasam se ap ko lakhon salam aisi ghazal likhne ke liye mashallah agar baat agar ghazal ki hoti tu hum tarif kaar dete but yahan tu apne aapne jazbaat biyaan kar diye mashallah bahut umda aur bahut trif ke kabil hai apki ghazal kasam se i love u very muchhhhhhhh bahut acha likha hai apki kasam mere pass alfaaz nahi hain p batao kis tarahan in feeling ka izhaar karu mashallah main kehta hoon agar yahan sabne reply nahi kia tu kasam se unko ghazlon ka shauk hi nahi bahut achi aur asi ghazal shahyed koi likh hi na sake i love u very much plz din ba din ap unchaiuny ko chu rahi ho aur apse yehi umeed hai my wife is number 1 jaan u deserve it bcoz u r is in it apse agey bhi yehi umeed rahegi kasam aptu lagta hai kahin apki secound ghazal heard fail na karde main speeling bhool dil ki lolz plz apna khayal rakhna aur 2 ghazal ka wait tu ab besabri se nahi akhri waqt taak rahega tha was superb havent got words to eplain u whats u have written kasame i love u very much yeh bhi chota hai apni p ke age plz agar hota tu apke hath chum leta i love u jaan plz apna khayal rakhna plz mere liye aur dsori ghazal zaroor dena main wait karunga ok love u very much takecare of urself 4 me plz plz ok ab ijazat chaonga ok apna khayal rakhna aur asi ghazlien ab rukna nahi dena plz its my request u r superb and u r not beautifull u r wonderfull kasame kudha hafiz.....apka aur sirf apka shahry.....................................


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payal ji - 23rd January 2003, 06:48 AM

hi payal ji, khuda aafiz, aapne bahut hi khoob likha hai, dil ki jo baatein hum kabhi kabhi keh paate hai aaj aap ne beyaan kardi. aur aaj salman bhaai bhi khush ho gaya, kitna acha din tha aap aur humare liye bhi kyuinke aaj hum bhi thoda sa khush hue. aap dono ke paas humari aur poore sansaar ki duaein hai. khush raho
take care payal and salman bhai
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fantastic!! - 23rd January 2003, 04:31 PM

A salam o walikum! 2 all of u!!! ufff dey diya na jhatka
kya likha hai app ney bhut class ka likha hai app iss tara mat likha karooo plz mujhe rona ajata hai kaasam se
lekin ager merey ponit of view se dekheyin tab mager mager
bhut accha likha hai appney app log banatey kaisye hai ye sab mujshe to nahi banety itni muhskill shars kasam mager appney to record hi tordiya bhbai bhut bhut bhut bhut accha likha hai n aggey bhi likhti reyga mager itna ghum wala nahi thora kumok ab chalta hoo n thankx 4 replying me thankx alottt apna khayal rakheyga yaha sab theek hai ok ab chalta hoo k Allah hafiz
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Thumbs up walikum salam jaan - 23rd January 2003, 11:01 PM

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm kaisi hain aap allah se dua hai bahut achi hoon apka bahut bahut shukriya humain reply karne ka aur inshallah hum umaar bhaar apka aisi hi sath deinge dont worry shahry is always wid u kasam se i love u very much aur inshallah hum jaldi ghazal deinge but aj kaal bahut masroof haina u no y thats wahy time hi nahi nikal pate kissi bhi cheez ka i love u na lekin apni p ki kuaish zaroor pori kareinge inshallah kabhi naraz nahi kareinge apni p inshallah jaldi apke kadmon main hogi ghazal ab ijazat chahonga plz apna khayal rakhyega mere liye plz ok ab chalon khayal rakhna plz bahut pain ho raah sir main ap chalta hoon jaan kudha hafiz......................apka aur sirf apka shahry.................................


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wah wah - 25th January 2003, 04:37 AM

Itne ghum paaye hain "payal" aur "shahry" ne judaai main,,
Hum taraste hain ab muskurane ko..
yeh sher accha hai
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