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A Poem - 17th December 2004, 10:37 PM

Zindagi mein ek hasin sapan dekha hai
us sapne ko sach karna chahta hoon

Tu kahe agar to tere daman ko
chand sitaron se bharna chahta hoon

Man me uthe har ek vichar ko
Ummid me badalna chahta hoon

To kya hua agar badal pani nahi barsate
To kya hua agar aag lagne se nahin uthta dhooaan

Irade hai itne atal
Hawa ka rukh badalna chahta hoon

Per badloon bhi to kaise
Bus yahi soch mein dooba rehta hoon

Ek uske dil ko to pigla na saka
per duniya badalna chahta hoon.

Use pa liya to jannat mil jayegi
Varna,
Pyar ki reet badalna chahta hoon
   
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18th December 2004, 11:00 AM

bahut khub.........
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18th December 2004, 06:44 PM

Bahut khoob

Badal hain aaj nahi toh kal honge
Barse woh aaj nahi barse to kal barsenge
Agar hai aaj woh tumse khafa to kal zaroor muskurayenge
Hai agar aaj unka dil pathar to kal zaroor pighlega
Humare pyaar mein hai aakhir mila khuda ke dua

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Talking 19th December 2004, 10:15 AM

its really good. someone teach me how to write shayri!


When the wind howls,
it is to you I promise.
When the mountain sags,
it is for you I stand.
When the heaven cries[rain]
it is for you I smile.
When all hope fails,
it is for you I live.
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20th December 2004, 03:36 PM

Hi Ashena,


What shall i sya you have come to the right forum. Here you can read a lot of good shayri from very talented friends. They are so amazing that at times i even wonder how can they write so well. Slowly try and put your thoughts into words and everything will fall into place. Even i am trying to learn.So try your hand at it and i am sure where there is a will there is a way


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