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Post apne hanthoN se tu yaar LUTAATI jaa..(Sunday_Ishq) - 16th April 2005, 10:48 PM

DostoN ...

maiN kunal ek bar phir se aap sabka swagat karta huN ,... apni is sunday ki mehfil maiN ... waqt phir aa gaya hai .. aapke saamne ishq ke ek aur roop ko pesh karne ka ... phir naye tareeke ke sath ... yuN to aaj ka jo matter hai ... usmeN bhi juda kuch nahi ... kyuNki ishq ki umra bohat lambi hai .. aur feeling bohat seemit .. par unhi maiN nayi nayi stithi ko pesh karna thoda sa mushkil hai ... par jo ye topic aaj maiN laya huN .. hai to wahi .. mil ke bichadne ka .. par milne se pehle aur bichadne se pehle .. dil ke khayaoN ko sajane ki koshish ki hai maine ... kehte hai pyar maiN milne ka maja kuch aur hi hai .. par is mil ke bichadne ki tadap ka andaaza aashique hi laga sakte hai ... inhi sab batoN ko dhayan main rakh kar aaj aapke samne hazir huN ... aur sath hi sath maine aaj bohat din bad apni kisi post ke liye kuch illesutrete kiya hai ... woh bhi samne rakh raha huN ... nahi janta kaisa hai ... par aapke samne rakh raha huN ... umeed hai ye meri banayi image bhi aapko pasand aayegii... kalaam ke sath .... pesh e nazar hai aaj ka kalaam.....

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Koi Aarzoo ban phir tu meri aankhoN main samaati jaa…
ragoN ki ravani ban tu meri dhadkano main samaati jaa…

Khada HuN tere intzaar maiN sadiyoN se is kainat main..
Mere jeene ki khathir hasratoN ko ek aawaz lagaati jaa…

Janta huN tu hai mujh bin adhuri tabhi mere roobroo hai…
huN talabgaar jinka un lafzoN ko bas ek bar sunaati jaa…

beete yuN din judaai ke ki har diN saaloN sa mujhe laga…
sookhte in laboN ki apne laboN se tu pyaas ko mitaati jaa…

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…

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Re: apne hanthoN se tu yaar LUTAATI jaa..(Sunday_Ishq) - 17th April 2005, 01:16 AM

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DostoN ...

maiN kunal ek bar phir se aap sabka swagat karta huN ,... apni is sunday ki mehfil maiN ... waqt phir aa gaya hai .. aapke saamne ishq ke ek aur roop ko pesh karne ka ... phir naye tareeke ke sath ... yuN to aaj ka jo matter hai ... usmeN bhi juda kuch nahi ... kyuNki ishq ki umra bohat lambi hai .. aur feeling bohat seemit .. par unhi maiN nayi nayi stithi ko pesh karna thoda sa mushkil hai ... par jo ye topic aaj maiN laya huN .. hai to wahi .. mil ke bichadne ka .. par milne se pehle aur bichadne se pehle .. dil ke khayaoN ko sajane ki koshish ki hai maine ... kehte hai pyar maiN milne ka maja kuch aur hi hai .. par is mil ke bichadne ki tadap ka andaaza aashique hi laga sakte hai ... inhi sab batoN ko dhayan main rakh kar aaj aapke samne hazir huN ... aur sath hi sath maine aaj bohat din bad apni kisi post ke liye kuch illesutrete kiya hai ... woh bhi samne rakh raha huN ... nahi janta kaisa hai ... par aapke samne rakh raha huN ... umeed hai ye meri banayi image bhi aapko pasand aayegii... kalaam ke sath .... pesh e nazar hai aaj ka kalaam.....

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Koi Aarzoo ban phir tu meri aankhoN main samaati jaa…
ragoN ki ravani ban tu meri dhadkano main samaati jaa…

Khada HuN tere intzaar maiN sadiyoN se is kainat main..
Mere jeene ki khathir hasratoN ko ek aawaz lagaati jaa…

Janta huN tu hai mujh bin adhuri tabhi mere roobroo hai…
huN talabgaar jinka un lafzoN ko bas ek bar sunaati jaa…

beete yuN din judaai ke ki har diN saaloN sa mujhe laga…
sookhte in laboN ki apne laboN se tu pyaas ko mitaati jaa…

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…

Kunal
haaye kunal,
wah kya shayrana andaaze- ishq aaj ki is behtareen nazam ke zariye tumne beyaan kiya. pyaar hi pyaar,judai ke woh lamhein, woh raston pe aankhein bichaye, sab kuch chalak raha hai tumhari is anmol panktiyon mein. aaj kuch allag hi mila padne ko tumhari feelings ke baare mein. sach mein baar baar isse mein pad rahi hoon aur khud ko ismein khoye hue paya meine. kunal in anmol motiyon mein sanjoe hui tumhari yeh nazam sach mein aaj jas ko kuch bholli hui yaadein tazza karwa gayi. meri teh dil se daad kabool kijiye aur dua hai uss khuda se ki is se bhi behtareen kalam tumhare hume padne se nawaza jaye. sach mein kunal its gud to read ur feelings buddy. hats to u. awesome flow of thoughts. gr8 depth of deep love. well each word is complete in itself. aaj wakai mein kuch alag nazar aya tumhari is sunday wali mehfil mein. wah kunal wah. take care n may god bless u with his fine glitters.

DuRr aPse eK bhI pAl,aB tO rAhA jAtA nAhI
aPkE bIn Ab MeRi,NaZrOn Ko BhAtA nAhI

aBhI tO yEh ShUruAt HaI,nA jAnE kYa HoGa AgGE
wO laMhA nAhI hOtA KoI,tU yAaD jAb AaTa NaHi

BhAlE hI dEnA zAkHm MuJhE,mAgeR nA mUjHkO tHuKrAnA
tUm DuR hOtE hO jIs PaL,wOh PaL jIyA jAtA nAhI

tUmNE tO lUtAyI mUjHpE,jEeWaN kI sAaRI hI kHuShIyAn
MaAf KaRnA mErE sAaThI,mEin TuMhEiN kUcH dE pAtI NaHi

yEh MeHaRbAnI hAi tEri,MuJhKo ApNaYa HaI tUne
HaAtH mEiN mErE hOtA jO,mEiN gAmMoN mEiN tUMhEiN lAtI nAhi

KiSmAt YeH mErI aChI tHi Ki AaP bAn GaYE hO mEre
AaP kO hAsSiL kArKe aB "JAS" kUcH bHi ChAhTi NaHI!



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….


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17th April 2005, 07:14 AM

Masha alah,kamal karte hain aap,

mein hoon tujhse door,teri aarazu to hai,
tera pata mile na mile, justuju to hai,

dafatan tarke taaluk mein bhi ruswai hai,
uljhe daaman ko chudate nahi jhatka dekar,

falak ne bhool bhulaiyon mein daal rakha tha,
hum unko dhoondte ya apni justaju karte,


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17th April 2005, 10:07 AM

Pyare Kunal,

Lo phir haazir hai aapki ki sunehri mehfil mein. Bas ab toh har sunday ko isi umeed ke saath aa jaate hai ke aap ka koi anmol kalaam parhne ko milenge aur khushi hai ke abh tak niraash nahi kiya aapne. Is baar bhi bohot khoobsurti ke saath pyaar ke haseen jazbato ko lafzo mein utar ke pesh kiya hai yaha pe jo dil ke bohot kareeb rahega. Bohot khoob mere bhai.Aur illustration aur prologue toh subhanallah

Chaliye daad ka silsila aagey barhate hue aaj aapko 101 gram daad

Humesha khush raho mere bhai.


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Hello - 17th April 2005, 01:08 PM

Hello My sweet Little brother

Kaise ho?Aaj tumhari di time se Aa gayi ........Aur bahut khoobsurat qalam likha hay aaj ke liye mere bhai ne........Aur haan
Image jo attach ki hay that is even beautiful.........Kahan se dhuundi Kunal..?Jo panktiyan quote kar rahi huun jyada achi lagi........

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
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Kuch likhne ka mann kar raha hay

Ek Inteezar Aur deta ja
Mughey Jeene ki Ek Aas deta ja

Khuda par Yakin Aaj bhi hay
Pardes se uske Aane ki Ek Aas deta ja


tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…


Beautiful kunal.........Di ki daad kabul karna.

Sada kush raho
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17th April 2005, 01:13 PM

hi kunal,

Image was so sweet...really very nice...
the topic you chose was also really good...
after all it happens to everybody..

this was in simple words something i can understand easily...

really very well expressed

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

the above lines was really sweet

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17th April 2005, 05:38 PM

wah BHAIYA bahoot achhe.. khayaal to ek hi hai lekin alagandaaz me.. so nice it is.

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Re: apne hanthoN se tu yaar LUTAATI jaa..(Sunday_Ishq) - 17th April 2005, 05:56 PM

"jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…

sanson ko tu raaz bataati jaa.....bohot khoob!!

jana hai to is jahan ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..


har sher ki akhir line badiya lagi...


Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

shayd aur bhi bohot kuch jodaa jaa sakta tha..yahan.....ijhaare-mohabbat ka tareeka hi kuch aisa hai!!....naya tarotazza!...

apka likha behad pasand aaya.....likhte rahiye!!




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18th April 2005, 01:44 PM

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

aur
jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…


Kaise kat.te hain judaai ke din.....vohi jaanta hai jis par gujarti hai....bewafa husn kya sahara dega....vo to apni hi duniya mein khush rehna chahta hai.....

koi raaz nahi....koi salah nahi....bus keh dete hain "kisi ke aane yaa jaane se zindagi pe koi farq nahi padta"

ye alfaaz aaj bhi zehan mein goonjte hain.....

tumhara bhai......



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Re: Re: apne hanthoN se tu yaar LUTAATI jaa..(Sunday_Ishq) - 18th April 2005, 06:32 PM

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haaye kunal,
wah kya shayrana andaaze- ishq aaj ki is behtareen nazam ke zariye tumne beyaan kiya. pyaar hi pyaar,judai ke woh lamhein, woh raston pe aankhein bichaye, sab kuch chalak raha hai tumhari is anmol panktiyon mein. aaj kuch allag hi mila padne ko tumhari feelings ke baare mein. sach mein baar baar isse mein pad rahi hoon aur khud ko ismein khoye hue paya meine. kunal in anmol motiyon mein sanjoe hui tumhari yeh nazam sach mein aaj jas ko kuch bholli hui yaadein tazza karwa gayi. meri teh dil se daad kabool kijiye aur dua hai uss khuda se ki is se bhi behtareen kalam tumhare hume padne se nawaza jaye. sach mein kunal its gud to read ur feelings buddy. hats to u. awesome flow of thoughts. gr8 depth of deep love. well each word is complete in itself. aaj wakai mein kuch alag nazar aya tumhari is sunday wali mehfil mein. wah kunal wah. take care n may god bless u with his fine glitters.

DuRr aPse eK bhI pAl,aB tO rAhA jAtA nAhI
aPkE bIn Ab MeRi,NaZrOn Ko BhAtA nAhI

aBhI tO yEh ShUruAt HaI,nA jAnE kYa HoGa AgGE
wO laMhA nAhI hOtA KoI,tU yAaD jAb AaTa NaHi

BhAlE hI dEnA zAkHm MuJhE,mAgeR nA mUjHkO tHuKrAnA
tUm DuR hOtE hO jIs PaL,wOh PaL jIyA jAtA nAhI
jasleen...

tumne jaise mere kalaam ke ehsasoN ko pakda ... maiN bhi samajh sakta huN ...ki tumhare dil maiN kya kuch chal raha hoga .. bohat hi nazuk ehsasat ... nahi chahta jinhe todna hi nahi chahta tumhare reply maiN reply likh ke ... haye tumne to mujhe nashila kar diya ... itni pyari nazm tumne likh dali.... aur tumhare reply ne mere dil ko jo sukoon pahunchaya hai .... aur ye alag andaaz bikhrega ye to maiNe tumhe pehle hi bata diya tha .... aur mere likhne ka silsila kabhi ruk nahi sakta .. ye mera parivar acche se janta hai ... kayi toofan mujhe dagmaga jaroor sakte hai .. par kunal hil nahi sakta ... bohat accha laga tumhara ye dil nashi andaaz .... tumhara shukra gujar huN ... tumhari daad sir AnkhoN pe ...

apna khayal rakhna ... aur tumhara sath to haq hai ... janta huN ye kabhi na chootega ...

tumhara apna

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19th April 2005, 11:05 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Lailaa
Masha alah,kamal karte hain aap,

mein hoon tujhse door,teri aarazu to hai,
tera pata mile na mile, justuju to hai,

dafatan tarke taaluk mein bhi ruswai hai,
uljhe daaman ko chudate nahi jhatka dekar,

falak ne bhool bhulaiyon mein daal rakha tha,
hum unko dhoondte ya apni justaju karte,


Lailaa....
suban allah aap bhi kam nahi...

daad kabool kareN

aapka apna

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hi - 19th April 2005, 12:43 PM

hi kunalji sorry aapki mhafil me itne let aane ke liye lakin jab yha aayi ot aapka kalm pada to dil bag bag ho gya bhut acha laga aapka ye kalm padkar ik se badkar ik kalm likhte ho aap ase hi likhte rhao humari dad kabul kare
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19th April 2005, 02:37 PM

Koi Aarzoo ban phir tu meri aankhoN main samaati jaa…
ragoN ki ravani ban tu meri dhadkano main samaati jaa…

Khada HuN tere intzaar maiN sadiyoN se is kainat main..
Mere jeene ki khathir hasratoN ko ek aawaz lagaati jaa…

Waaaaahh... Jitna suna thha kalaam ke baare me usse bhi kahin behter hai shuruaat to... Waah!


Janta huN tu hai mujh bin adhuri tabhi mere roobroo hai…
huN talabgaar jinka un lafzoN ko bas ek bar sunaati jaa…

beete yuN din judaai ke ki har diN saaloN sa mujhe laga…
sookhte in laboN ki apne laboN se tu pyaas ko mitaati jaa…

Waaah...Pyaar ho to aisa!!


Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

Bahut Khoob! This one is my Fav till now of this kalaam.. really welll expressed!!


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Yeh to itna khoobsurat bayaan kiya hai ke bass agar ise akela bhi likh den to ehsaason me kami nahi lagegi!!

Dear Kunaal!

Ek baar for is khoobsurati se pyaar se jude har ehsaas ko tumne baandh diya hai apne Sunday ishq me ke kehne k liye kucch bach nahi jaata.... Bahut pyaar kalaam hai...

Is kalaam ko padhne se pehle itni taareef sun li thhi par ise padhaa to yeh har expectation pe khara utra... Mujhe bahut pasand ayaa tumhara yeh kalaam bhi...Bas yunhi likhte raho.. meri daad tumhare saath hai!!

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Pyare Kunal,

Lo phir haazir hai aapki ki sunehri mehfil mein. Bas ab toh har sunday ko isi umeed ke saath aa jaate hai ke aap ka koi anmol kalaam parhne ko milenge aur khushi hai ke abh tak niraash nahi kiya aapne. Is baar bhi bohot khoobsurti ke saath pyaar ke haseen jazbato ko lafzo mein utar ke pesh kiya hai yaha pe jo dil ke bohot kareeb rahega. Bohot khoob mere bhai.Aur illustration aur prologue toh subhanallah

Chaliye daad ka silsila aagey barhate hue aaj aapko 101 gram daad

Humesha khush raho mere bhai.
Salim bhai...

aapka swagat hai mere is kalaam pe... aur aapko mujhse nirasaha kabhi nahi hoti ,... ye khushi hai mujhe .. aur aage bhi koshish rahegi ki aapko nirash na hona pade ... aur aapko to sada hi mere kalaam pasand aaye hai .. sach kahuN to kuch bandoN ka intzaar to khas taur par rehta hai .... ki khas aaye aur mujhe sarahe ... aapka bhi sthan wahiN kahiN hai... aapki tareef daad sab sir aankhoN pe

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Kaise ho?Aaj tumhari di time se Aa gayi ........Aur bahut khoobsurat qalam likha hay aaj ke liye mere bhai ne........Aur haan
Image jo attach ki hay that is even beautiful.........Kahan se dhuundi Kunal..?Jo panktiyan quote kar rahi huun jyada achi lagi........

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…


Kuch likhne ka mann kar raha hay

Ek Inteezar Aur deta ja
Mughey Jeene ki Ek Aas deta ja

Khuda par Yakin Aaj bhi hay
Pardes se uske Aane ki Ek Aas deta ja


tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…


Beautiful kunal.........Di ki daad kabul karna.

Sada kush raho
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behad khushi ke roobroo huN aapko apni post pe pake ... aur aap itni pehle aa gayi khushi ka hona laazmi hai ... aur didi ye image maine khud banai hai ,... kahiN se nahi dhuNdi ... aap aayi itna kuch likha mere liye dil bagh baa ho gaya ... umeed hai aap yun hi aati raheNgi ... aur aapki lines bhi acchi lagi mujhe .....

aap bhi apna khayal rakhna ...

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kunal...
tumhari sunday ki mehfil ki dastan suni..aur manna para ki sunday ko kisi khas tarh ki shayri hoti hai ..wo bhi derd bhari???
bahut acccha likha hai ..yun to sara hi..per mujhe jo pasand ayi...wo ye panktiyan hain...

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…
...aur han,,,image???????????kya kehne!!!!!!!!!
keep it up...


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20th April 2005, 08:55 PM

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hi kunal,

Image was so sweet...really very nice...
the topic you chose was also really good...
after all it happens to everybody..

this was in simple words something i can understand easily...

really very well expressed

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

the above lines was really sweet

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image janta hUn kuch khas nahi rahi ... par maiN jo dikhana chahta tha ... bas wahi byan kar paya ... thanx to like it ... aur ab maiN mushikil alfazoN maiN likhta hi nahi ... waise .. khair aapko pasand aaya .. shukriya

tumhara apna

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wah BHAIYA bahoot achhe.. khayaal to ek hi hai lekin alagandaaz me.. so nice it is.

aapka beta
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[color=dark red]Koi Aarzoo ban phir tu meri aankhoN main samaati jaa…
ragoN ki ravani ban tu meri dhadkano main samaati jaa…

Khada HuN tere intzaar maiN sadiyoN se is kainat main..
Mere jeene ki khathir hasratoN ko ek aawaz lagaati jaa…
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Kunaal dost...

Kaafi achchha likha hai.. Bahoot khoobsoorat.. sach mano to lafz hi nahi hai mere paas... Aise hi likhte rahena.. hameshaa...

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hi - 20th April 2005, 09:38 PM

aapka toh har poem achcha hota hai ...........mujhe pasand aaya ye aisa poem hai ........aab kooi shikaayat nahi aapse .......aise hin pyaare pyaare umeed ke diye jalaata ja .........bye tc




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Re: Re: apne hanthoN se tu yaar LUTAATI jaa..(Sunday_Ishq) - 21st April 2005, 11:44 AM

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tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…

sanson ko tu raaz bataati jaa.....bohot khoob!!

jana hai to is jahan ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..


har sher ki akhir line badiya lagi...


Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

shayd aur bhi bohot kuch jodaa jaa sakta tha..yahan.....ijhaare-mohabbat ka tareeka hi kuch aisa hai!!....naya tarotazza!...

apka likha behad pasand aaya.....likhte rahiye!!




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21st April 2005, 11:46 AM

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Kaise kat.te hain judaai ke din.....vohi jaanta hai jis par gujarti hai....bewafa husn kya sahara dega....vo to apni hi duniya mein khush rehna chahta hai.....

koi raaz nahi....koi salah nahi....bus keh dete hain "kisi ke aane yaa jaane se zindagi pe koi farq nahi padta"

ye alfaaz aaj bhi zehan mein goonjte hain.....

tumhara bhai......
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Re: hi - 21st April 2005, 11:50 AM

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hi kunalji sorry aapki mhafil me itne let aane ke liye lakin jab yha aayi ot aapka kalm pada to dil bag bag ho gya bhut acha laga aapka ye kalm padkar ik se badkar ik kalm likhte ho aap ase hi likhte rhao humari dad kabul kare
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well aap yahan aa gayi to muafi ki gunjaish nahi reh jati .. khair aapka dil baag baa ho gaya isse badi baat aur kya hogi ... aur ek se ek badh ke likhne ka jahan tak sawaal hai ... ye sab aapke pyar ka hi nateeja hai .. umeed hai aapka sath barkarar raha to yuN hi likhta rahuNga maiN

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21st April 2005, 11:58 AM

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Dear Kunaal!

Ek baar for is khoobsurati se pyaar se jude har ehsaas ko tumne baandh diya hai apne Sunday ishq me ke kehne k liye kucch bach nahi jaata.... Bahut pyaar kalaam hai...

Is kalaam ko padhne se pehle itni taareef sun li thhi par ise padhaa to yeh har expectation pe khara utra... Mujhe bahut pasand ayaa tumhara yeh kalaam bhi...Bas yunhi likhte raho.. meri daad tumhare saath hai!!

Illustration me ek gadbad hai...Tumhare aur Roop ke baalon ka color interchange ho gaya hai
pulkit bhai ...

mere ehsaas mere kahan rahe .. jo sath pyar maiN pata huN kagaz pe utaar deta huN... aur sach hai ki sach ke aage lafz kehna jara mushkil hi reh jata hai....

is kalaam ka charcha to na jane kaise uth gaya ,... bas ek koshish hi thi ... yahi to wo pyar hai .. jiske liye mujhe yahan aa hi padta hai .,...aapko pasand aaya mujhe behad khushi ka ilm ho raha hai ab.... aur baloN ka color is liye change kiya .. ki real maiN to woh kabhi karegi nahi ... to aise hi sahi

aap bhi apna khayal rakhna

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tumhari sunday ki mehfil ki dastan suni..aur manna para ki sunday ko kisi khas tarh ki shayri hoti hai ..wo bhi derd bhari???
bahut acccha likha hai ..yun to sara hi..per mujhe jo pasand ayi...wo ye panktiyan hain...

Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…
...aur han,,,image???????????kya kehne!!!!!!!!!
keep it up...
swati ji ...

maine kaha na charche na jane kaise ho jate hai sunday ke .. shayad pyar hi ye aisa hai ... khair khas kism ki shayri hai hi ye ...aur aapko aage bhi is mehfil main aane ki darkhuast kar raha huN ... keep coming

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Khada HuN tere intzaar maiN sadiyoN se is kainat main..
Mere jeene ki khathir hasratoN ko ek aawaz lagaati jaa…
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Kunaal dost...

Kaafi achchha likha hai.. Bahoot khoobsoorat.. sach mano to lafz hi nahi hai mere paas... Aise hi likhte rahena.. hameshaa...

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Delhi ki mulakaat ke baad yuN itni jaldi yahaN milenge socha nahi tha maine ... kyuNki kafi dinoN se aapse rabta ho nahi raha tha... khair aap aaye mujhe saraha maiN shukragujaar huN aapka ...

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bohat bohat shukriya .. mere kalamoN ko pasand karne ke liye ... aur khushi hai ki aapse har shikwa door ho gaya hai ...

aate rehna yuN hi

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main mausam tumhari mehfil mein late as always par kya karu probs hi itni badi thi ke aa nahin payi......hamesha ki tarah ek aur dil lubhata hua sunday special....ab to tumhare sunday special ki adat si ho gayi hain......wow kya topic choose kiya hain aur words bhi.......kitne romantic.........pyar na karna chahe to bhi ho jaaye.......2 good.....waise illustartion pe balon ke color ki tum chinta na karo aajkal fashion hain so roop bhi karva legi....hee

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Re: apne hanthoN se tu yaar LUTAATI jaa..(Sunday_Ishq) - 21st April 2005, 06:23 PM

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Is milan ke baad phir ek lamba intzaar hi hai meri kismat…
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…

tu na jane ki hai mukkamal tere hi saaye se mera jahaN…
jana hai to is jahaN ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..

jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
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aaj phir aapki mehfil main itni der se aaye ... ki reply padhne main aapko maja nahi aayega... janta hun weelkly mehfil hai ye par waqt ki bhi koi seema hoti hai ... par na jane humare free wqt ko kya ho gaya hai ... aa hi nahi raha humare samne ....khair aapke sunday ke kalaam humesha hi jabardast hote hai... bas yahi kehna chahunga .. ki aap wakai badsha hai sunday sajane main... bohat accha likha hai aapne ... meri tareef kabool kare

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main mausam tumhari mehfil mein late as always par kya karu probs hi itni badi thi ke aa nahin payi......hamesha ki tarah ek aur dil lubhata hua sunday special....ab to tumhare sunday special ki adat si ho gayi hain......wow kya topic choose kiya hain aur words bhi.......kitne romantic.........pyar na karna chahe to bhi ho jaaye.......2 good.....waise illustartion pe balon ke color ki tum chinta na karo aajkal fashion hain so roop bhi karva legi....hee

tumhari dost..
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masam meri dost ...

maiN janta huN tumhari stithi ko aaj ki ... khair kehte hai na waqt humesha ek san nahi rehta ... pehle kabhi aisa hota tha ... sabse pehle tum aati thi .. aaj sabse aakhir maiN ... woh din phir aayega ... jab tum phir se har pal sath de paogi ... khair tum aayi isse badi baat aur kya hogi .. tumhe shayad mere sunday kalaam ki aadat hogi ... par mujhe bhi ab aadat ho gayi hai tumhare reply ki .. isi liye late hi sahi aa jaya karo ... bas yahi ilteza hai ...

tum apna khayal bohat acche se rakhna ... roop ko mujh pe chor do

tumhara dost

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bhai ....

aaj phir aapki mehfil main itni der se aaye ... ki reply padhne main aapko maja nahi aayega... janta hun weelkly mehfil hai ye par waqt ki bhi koi seema hoti hai ... par na jane humare free wqt ko kya ho gaya hai ... aa hi nahi raha humare samne ....khair aapke sunday ke kalaam humesha hi jabardast hote hai... bas yahi kehna chahunga .. ki aap wakai badsha hai sunday sajane main... bohat accha likha hai aapne ... meri tareef kabool kare

aapka bhai

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raaj bhai ...

yahi bat abhi mausam se kahi ... aapse bhi kehta huN .. woh din nahi rahe ... ye bhi na raheNge .. bas aap yun hi sath dete rahiye .. jabardast kalaam jabardasti se hi milte hai .... aapka shukra gujar huN phir se ... aap apna khayl rakhna ...

aapka apna

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