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You'll Find Someone Else (jus read it plz...)
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Sad You'll Find Someone Else (jus read it plz...) - 21st May 2008, 01:56 PM

Age of six
He loved her so
And everyday
He'd let her know

"I love you Grace"
He'd say each day
She'd just laugh
And run away

Till one day
She turned around
And sat with him
On the playground

"I'm sorry Chris
I don't love you
You'll find someone else
Who loves you too"

Highschool came
They met again
They laughed about
The things back then

They began to date
And fell in love
He got the girl
That he'd dreamed of

But when college came
Everything changed
They were far apart
With lives rearranged

"We'll be fine Grace"
But she had doubt
She turned and said
"It won't work out"

"I'm sorry Chris
I can't love you
You'll find someone else
Who loves you too"

In their twenties
They met again
They laughed about
The things back then

He took her hand
They began to dance
Remembering
Their old romance

Two years later
She became his wife
They'd be together
All of their life

They went on a drive
When it was no longer light
They drove down the roads
Of the starry night

The music came on
She started to sing
He whispered, "Grace
You're my everything"

But then suddenly
In one big flash
Headlights shone
As their car crashed

He saw her laying
Down on the ground
He felt his tears
Start rolling down

"Grace..." he cried
She took his hand
"I have to leave...
Please understand"

"I love you so much
It's always been true
But you'll find someone else
And you'll love again too"

"No," he cried
"It's always been you
I don't want someone else
I only want you"

And there on that street
Is where he cried
Hugging his love
As she slowly died


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A Dream within a Dream
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Love A Dream within a Dream - 21st May 2008, 02:08 PM

Take this kiss upon thy brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow—
You are not wrong, to deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand—
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep—while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?


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Love break my heart - 21st May 2008, 02:09 PM

so close to my life and yet so far away
how did it happen can some one explain
there was a moment when you were so near
when loosing you was never my fear
why did it all suddenly change
how did it happen can some one explain
with every beat of your heart you remembered me
was that really you or your true self did i not see
with every beat of my heart i said your name
why did you leave and give me so much pain
thers only one question i ask but you dont say
why did you decide to choose your seprate way?
i begged you to tell me but you did not explain
and then you tell me to say nothing and never complain
i ask you one time answer for me this final question
are you going to be mine or is this it, are we done?
im not saying my life will be beautifull without you
i wont be happy and you know that too
but i cant live like this with so many doubts in my heart
i need to live without you and make a fresh start
there will never be a time when i will forget you
but you are never gna be mine and that is also true
so if you ever loved me and if i ever ment anything to you
then break my heart finally and leave me to join the pieces with glue.


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Love Is Eternal And Dreams Are Just Dreams
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Love Love Is Eternal And Dreams Are Just Dreams - 21st May 2008, 02:10 PM

I see your face in my sleep
and your figure appears to me in my waking hours,
like an angle mesmerized by your beauty
captivated by your elegance.

I've fallen hopelessly in love
with the only woman I can never have once again.
Can the gods be so cruel as to show me the face of beauty
and not let me hold you in my arms.

To feel your breath against my face
would be my own personal heaven.
True love at first sight will last forever in my heart and my soul.
You are the only woman
that has ever walked in my soul
and for that I love you...


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Love blue dreams - 21st May 2008, 02:12 PM

A heart so full, open and true
A quality possessed by so few
As a family tragedy did unfold
You put your dreams and hopes on hold

Your concentrating on home and hearth
Only proved to be a deviation in your path
With your talent once again on show
A career blossomed, with only one way to go

Nothing but pure effort, no time to sit
Came the first of many a hit
Some plans seem to go astray
Only to come to fruition another day

Once success finally came, you stayed the same
Even then, you never forgot from whence you came
Supporting children that are hungry and distressed
Once again you prove that you are a cut above the rest

Through your music and actions you have touched my heart
Alas, we are from different worlds, miles apart
Aging slowly long lost stirrings once again are being felt
The ice encompassing my heart is beginning to melt

With the exception of my daughter and mother
I allow myself feelings for no other
Leaving you on the pedestal which I have you on, way up high
Time for me to sit back, enjoy your work and watch the years go by


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Love silent tears - 21st May 2008, 02:20 PM

So what if today we are far apart
U still reside in the hidden corner of my heart
So what if u don’t treat me as a friend any more?
I am learning to smile again; I will be successful for sure,
Whenever I miss u, I just get lost in memories of olden days
I still remember those lovely days, when in ur arms I use to lay

So easily u moved on n now u treat me as stranger
Still i tried to help u out but then u took me as a challenger
Sometimes I feel so hurt that I lock myself in room n loudly I shout
Its u who was wrong, its u who lied, n then its u who have doubts?
My poems were never to blame u, they were just my feeling’s portray
Its u who played with my feeling, then why cant I call ur fake love a betray?

Sometimes I curse my fate, because I met u, because I loved u
My feelings were true, tell me, that’s why am i in blues?
Today, i try to run away from this feeling called love.
Because a heartless person came in my life n acted like a dove,

But the bitter truth is, I am still in love with you
I still wish to spend some moments even if they r few
I cry a lot then try to find u in my tears………….
That crying never gave me pain but brought both of us near
Perhaps unconsciously I am trying to dream of that time
When world will be beautiful, I will be yours n u will be mine
You will be mine……………
You will be mine…………….
You will be mine……………
You will be mine…………….


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When You Love Someone
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Love When You Love Someone - 21st May 2008, 02:21 PM

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.

He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.

One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.

He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.

You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.


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Love I Cry - 21st May 2008, 02:22 PM

I, lonely, pray to be blessed,

To live my life without any mess,

But, here my world’s without any rest,

Seems, like I’m living in a hell,

Where answers are so far,

And,

I cry, cry silently!

I cry inside of me,

I cry so honestly,

I cry without any drop of tear,

I cry with such a great fear,

I cry not for that goodbye

But, I cry for those tears of yours,

That dropped into my hand,

When you said,

“You won’t be back again.”

Still,

I found myself living, with those memories,

As I cry, still cry silently,

I cry inside of me,

I cry so honestly,

I cry without any drop of tear,

I cry with such a great fear,

And, I’m still crying,

Because,

“You’re not here with me.”


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21st May 2008, 02:51 PM

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very touching poem
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Love Your visit to my place - 21st May 2008, 03:03 PM

I saw you coming with a bunch of white roses,

Gates were open and you started coming to me,

You walked and saw all the different crosses.

It was all silence and a real place to be.

I saw some thousand tears in your blue eyes,

These deep blue eyes, which made me, mad,

Now pain gradually started coming in your life.

Even I cried, since I never ever kept you so sad.

You continued to cry, I asked you the reason.

But, you didn't reply, and just cry.

I asked many questions to you,

But, you maintained your silence.

When crying was the only thing to do,

And tears were flowing all over the place,

I discovered that you were still all alone.

You were just sitting there and crying,

Wiping tears which were flowing out of your eyes.

Your soul was broken and lost from inside,

Suddenly, even a tear poured out of my eyes.

You looked up above the sky,

It was raining without any cloud.

You gathered your broken soul and walked by,

I want you to stay but I never bound…

So, after wiping your tears, you walked away,

But, I want you to be back again.

Since on next month is coming my day,

Hence, your days became so mundane.

You walked away and left me alone,

I continued to rest at my place.

I closed my eyes and silently slept,

The place where you cried for hours was my own grave.

But I know, I'm always there with you in your memories,

Just like that, you're here with me, with these white roses.

And, then you walked away…crying,

After visiting my grave,

And, thus, this was your visit to my place.


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Love a last chance......... - 21st May 2008, 03:05 PM

Her breath had no longer the warmth
The glint in her eyes was doused,
Enveloped in the eternal sleep
In a casket she was housed.

There she lay, With A white lily in her palms
And a placid smile on her face,
Adorned in an angels gown
An epitome of beauty, serenity and grace..

Even the heavens were in mourning
the horizon was cloaked with snow,
and as a token of their lament
a branch flittered down the cypress bough.

The silence was screeching in my ears
All around me people were whining,
Seeking alleviation I looked skywards
Clouds aplenty, but alas, there was no silver lining.

The final nail in the coffin was to be struck,
The last remaining rights had been read,
The bishop beckoned to eulogize the deceased
Ignoring her kinsmen, I was called upon instead..


“I refuse to eulogize my beloved
Coz eulogizing her would be accepting her death,
In every pulse I can feel her love,
Her fragrance still lingers in my every breath”
“her love’s been like the guiding star
In the dark and lonely night,
Death’s a transition, the soul is eternal
Her memories shall forever show me the light”
“And of what basis is our religion
About which we so proudly boast,
Burying a body after death,
Is there no difference between a human and compost”

Tears welled up in my eyes
My voice could no longer succor my emotions,
Gasping incessantly I was, at the pain
of being Separated from my lifelong devotion……

As I sat deluded by the carriage window
Staring aimlessly at the desolate scenery,
With a carpet of fallen leaves beneath me
But devoid of even a trace of greenery

While in my heart I prayed to god
please give her back to me
for just one more day,
if you then sentence me to a thousand deaths,
then so you very well may

one day, to relish true love’s one last kiss
all that I ask for is one more chance
to clasp her in my arms and hug her,
to cherish her innocent giggles and maybe, that one last dance.


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Love memories - 21st May 2008, 03:07 PM

I wonder if he remembers me

Or if I'm just a memory

I wonder if he thinks of us

Or if he finds it useless

I wonder how things would be

If he had never left me

I wonder how he is

And if I'm still a love of his

I think about him everyday

And wonder if he's okay

I think about how happy we were

And the memories make the tears stir

I think about the plans we made

While we were laying in the shade

I think about all we said

And the lives we lead

To not know

Where to go

To not know where to find

A place where he may hide

To not be able to see his face

Puts my heart so out of place

To not know when he's near

Is my greatest fear

There's so much in my head

That I wish I'd said

There's so many missed kisses

For my unanswered wishes

There's only so many ways

For me to make it through the days

There's so little light

In my heart tonight

What would I say

If given a day

What would happen

If I could have him

What joy it would bring

To hear him sing

What would I feel

If he were here for real

I miss him each day

That he is away

I miss him looking out for me

The way it used to be

I miss his love

That protected me like a glove

I miss him

So much it's made my heart dim

I wonder if he still cares

That's a question that tears

I wonder what he's like

If he'd tell me to take a hike

I wonder if he fears

That I don't hold him dear

But most of all

I wonder if he still loves me

Or if I'm just a memory

Of what used to be


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Love My Cinderella - 21st May 2008, 03:08 PM

I’m standing on the stairs in a magnificent hall
Wearing the dress that I bought for the ball
It’s long and flowing, sparkling white
My tiara of diamonds shines in the light

At the bottom of the stairs you’re waiting for me
And I gracefully float down for all to see
You take my hand and touch my face
You’re the only one I notice in the expansive space

We’re now dancing in shadows of flickering light
Holding each other close, holding each other tight
You kiss my neck and then touch my face
Then kiss my lips in a loving embrace

Time stands still whilst we are together
Feels so good, it seems like forever
I look at the clock, that cannot be right
But the bells start to chime, confirming midnight

But there’s no need to leave
From the ball tonight
I’ll be with you my prince
For the rest of our life.


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Love Without You - 21st May 2008, 03:09 PM

Without you, the color disappears slowly,
Without you, the trees forget the wind,
Without you, the night is chagrined.

Without you, my music does not amaze,
Without you, my hours are days,
Without you, my heart gets bored,
Without you, my steps are too heavy and not labored.

Without you, my thoughts prevent me from going to bed,
Without you, I do not distinguish the horizon ahead,
Without you, there are no heavens,
Without you, the time forgets its reasons.

Without you, I am afraid of the next day not chosen,
Without you, the haze conceals the splendid ocean,
Without you, I do not figure or picture anything pleasant,
Without you, I am wondering this question at this moment...

My love, where are you hidden?
Without you, my happiness is forbidden,
My heart without you, is not at all replete,
My life without you, is so incomplete...


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21st May 2008, 03:59 PM

Hello dosto .........

JINDGI MAI JAB KOI AISHA SATH CHODEGA

Jindgi mai kaun is tarah se hath mai hath dal kar chalega, jab tum chodd kar jaoge kaun wo pyar, kaun wo emotion, kaun wo jindgi ke har pal mai himmat dilayega. Kaun wo hum par apni jaan lutayega, Jo humare dard ko apna aur apni cheez hume khilayega.Humare daatne par bhi wo muskrayega aur phir bhi sorry kah kar humari baaon mai chipat jayega.
Kadam-kadam par kaun khushi aur gum batega. kaun Hume sar ke balo se lekar pair ke nakhuno tak humko samjh payega, aur humari jindgi ka viswas jitne wala, bin mooh khole humari baato ko samjhne wala jab ek din hume chodd kar jayega to humari jindgi mai us waqt wo kaisa toofan ayega.



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Din beet jate hain suhani yaadein bankar,
Baate rah jati hai kahani bankar,
Par chahat to humesha dil ke pass rehegi,
kabhi muskan to kabhi ankhon ka pani bankar.

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22nd May 2008, 09:58 AM

Beautiful poem!

Keep it up!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Thumbs up 22nd May 2008, 10:44 AM

Thanku Priya ji hum to kuch bhi nahi likhte lekin app to bahut acha likte ho hum to bas jab kabhi tanaha hote apne palo ko yaad karte-karte ye dil kahta hai aur hath likhte hai. kafi acha lagta hai jab apne dil ke baat ko is tarah dosto ke bich kaha jata hai isse dil bhi like halka ho jata hai aur ap jaise dost ko sath mil jata hai

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Baate rah jati hai kahani bankar,
Par chahat to humesha dil ke pass rehegi,
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22nd May 2008, 05:38 PM

This dedicated 2 a gd friend of mine who passed away last year wrote this for his funeral..may Allah look after u Shahzad.

My eyes filled up with tears as I heard the news
It never occurred to me, how much I could lose
I find myself wishing that it wasn't real
Every time I think about it, pain is all I can feel
Tears fall from my eyes, I can barely see
But my heart tells me that he'll always be with me
I’m glad he feels no pain now-he lives in a perfect land
I can still feel the soft touch on my shoulder of his loving hand
I lie in bed and cry at night
And I don’t feel any better in the morning light
And I will love and miss him forever
Until the day we are again together.
Together in that perfect place above,
Filled with caring, sharing and love
But until that day comes- I will wipe my tears away.
And hopefully see him again someday
   
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Very Heart Touching Poem.Outstanding!
   
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