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Love ~*~ Wo Mere Lamhon Main ~*~ - 9th August 2008, 09:38 AM
Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha


Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi
Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa


Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha


Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai......
Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha

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9th August 2008, 04:46 PM
bahut khoob surat ghazal likhi hai aapne

Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha

kamaal ki soch aur soch ko bahut achey tareke se express kiya hai
sher mukamaal hai gahal behtar hai
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9th August 2008, 06:14 PM
Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha

ye lafz to sach me....kya kahu
neha ji.....bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne....

Aansu aa jate hai rone se pahle....
Har khwab toot jate hai sone se pahle....
ISHQ hai GUNAH ye to samajh gaye....
Kaash koi rok leta ye hone se pahle....
   
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bahut khoob surat ghazal likhi hai aapne

Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha

kamaal ki soch aur soch ko bahut achey tareke se express kiya hai
sher mukamaal hai gahal behtar hai

buhat shukriya is tarif ka aur is hosala afzai ka

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Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha

ye lafz to sach me....kya kahu
neha ji.....bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne....

Aansu aa jate hai rone se pahle....
Har khwab toot jate hai sone se pahle....
ISHQ hai GUNAH ye to samajh gaye....
Kaash koi rok leta ye hone se pahle....
thanks a lot DR.Raj ji apki nazar shanasi ka kamal hai

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10th August 2008, 08:50 AM
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Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha


Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi
Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa


Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha


Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai......
Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha
Beautifulfull poetry chalo bahut dino baad post kiya aapne par itna acha post kiya ke shari kami door hogayi bahut khoobsoorat andaaz hai aur meaning bhi mera daad kabool farmaiye nehaji

Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath

Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
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Beautifulfull poetry chalo bahut dino baad post kiya aapne par itna acha post kiya ke shari kami door hogayi bahut khoobsoorat andaaz hai aur meaning bhi mera daad kabool farmaiye nehaji
thank u so muchsahi kaha apne apko tu pata hai kafi dinoo se kuch post karna chah rahi thi ab jesi hi ye kavita comp hoi tu send kardi buhat buhat shukriya apki husala afzai kaapki tawajja ki zarorat rahegi apni tarif o tanqeed se nawazte rahiyega

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10th August 2008, 05:32 PM
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Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha


Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi
Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa


Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha


Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai......
Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha



kya baat hai neha ji bohat khoob very intersting post.bohat khubsurat likha hai main to kahen or he kho gaya tha app ki ye post parte parte bohat bohat shukria hamesha aysi he post kerti rahiye,apni duaon main yaad rakhiye ga.apna khayal rakhna.ALLAH HAFIZ,

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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kya baat hai neha ji bohat khoob very intersting post.bohat khubsurat likha hai main to kahen or he kho gaya tha app ki ye post parte parte bohat bohat shukria hamesha aysi he post kerti rahiye,apni duaon main yaad rakhiye ga.apna khayal rakhna.ALLAH HAFIZ,

nawazish hai apki tu apne mere kalam ko isqabil samjha buhat shukriya apke reply k liyee thanks n ALLAH HAFIZ

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nawazish hai apki tu apne mere kalam ko isqabil samjha buhat shukriya apke reply k liyee thanks n ALLAH HAFIZ

good one. khuda kare ap yu hi baris ki bundo se mahakti mati si soundi shayari karte kare.
   
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3rd September 2008, 04:38 PM
NEHA BOHUT ACHI GHAZAL HAI....................... NICE


New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..

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ZINDAGI SE POCHO YEH KIYA CHAHTI HAI,
BUS DUNIYA SE WAFA CHAHTI HAI,
KITNE MASOOM AUR NADAN HAI ZINDAGI,
KHUD BEWAFAA HAI AUR WAFA CHAHTI HAI.


New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
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neha jee...kaise hain aap....etne din kahaN gayab thi aap????
vaise aakpa gayab rahna accha raha...kyuNki aapke aate hi aapki khoobsurat shayri padne ko jo mil gaye

aati raha kijiye, gayab mat raha kijiye

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3rd September 2008, 06:38 PM
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Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha


Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi
Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa


Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha


Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai......
Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha

Wow kiya likha hai neha bahut khoob kiya andaz hai, i am sure u must be in love with some one

Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha

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good one. khuda kare ap yu hi baris ki bundo se mahakti mati si soundi shayari karte kare.

waoo what a beautifuL line reallyapke in khubsorat alfazon se hi na jane kitne khayal mere zehan main peda hone lage hain kisi ghazal k liyee...

barish ki bondon..
rimjhim si phuar
mehakti mitti...
soundi shairi...
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NEHA BOHUT ACHI GHAZAL HAI....................... NICE

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neha jee...kaise hain aap....etne din kahaN gayab thi aap????
vaise aakpa gayab rahna accha raha...kyuNki aapke aate hi aapki khoobsurat shayri padne ko jo mil gaye

aati raha kijiye, gayab mat raha kijiye

god bless u
aapki dost

bilkuL thek hoon shukar hai ALLAH PAK ka sunita ji

bas itne din ane ka bilkul b time nahi mila poetry tu aur b buhat si likhi theen but ye achi lagi post karne k liyee soo itne dinoo k bad yehi post kardi but plz sunita agar meri mistakes b point out kardo tu it will b good for me

hmm full try karongi k ati rahoon...
agar apko kahin reply nahi desaki tu plz maf kardi jiyega kiya karoon ajkal kam online ho rahi hoon tu post replies reh jate hain okz friend

GOD bless u too

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Wow kiya likha hai neha bahut khoob kiya andaz hai, i am sure u must be in love with some one

Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha

kiya line hai bahut pasand aaya keep it up
thanks a Lot sujatha jin thanks 4 ur pm 2....
Listen honey apko pm ka reply kia but i have no option to pm u b/c apne pm 4m all users ok nahi kia hai....

main apko kitna b pm karoon it is impossible 4 me jab tak ap apne options main ja ke reset nahi karogi thats y i cant reply u sweety

ur pm reply in short is "off course YES wid my pleasure"

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thanks a Lot sujatha jin thanks 4 ur pm 2....
Listen honey apko pm ka reply kia but i have no option to pm u b/c apne pm 4m all users ok nahi kia hai....

main apko kitna b pm karoon it is impossible 4 me jab tak ap apne options main ja ke reset nahi karogi thats y i cant reply u sweety

ur pm reply in short is "off course YES wid my pleasure"

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Bahut khoob - 4th September 2008, 03:45 PM
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Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri
Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha


Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf
Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha


Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi
Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa


Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par
Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha


Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai......
Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha

Hi neha ji kiya likha hai bahut khoob thoda shararti bhi hai aur meaningful bhi pls post karte rahiyega
   
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NEHA BOHAT HI ACHI POETRY HA.BEST OF LUCK.
TAKECARE
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KOI ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE,
JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE,
PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE,
MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE,
AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI,
KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI,
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