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Goya phool girtay hoan....... -
10th February 2013, 07:47 AM
Goyaa phool girtay hoan ..... Suno mayree taraf daykho, Mujhay aysay na tadpaao Ki mayree jaan nikaltee haye Tumharay rooth jaanay say! Mayn marnay say nahee darta Meri jaanaan magar sunlo, Yay dunya pyaari lagtee haye Tumharay paas aanay say! Meri saansaon mayn khushboo ki Lahar si daud uth-tii haye, Ki goya phool girtay hoan Tumharay muskuraanay say! Subah gulshan mayn mujhsay aaj, Koyal nay shikaayat kee, Tarannum bhool wo jaayay Tumharay gun-gunaanay say! Hamayn tum aazmaana chhor do Haye illtejaa yay hee Hamara dumm nikaltaa haye Tumharay aazmaanay say! __________________________________________________ _____________________________ Ahmad Hyderabadi Ahmad |
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10th February 2013, 08:19 AM
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Wah wah!!..kya kehnay..Subhan Allah!! HameiN tou pata hi nahi tha ke aap romantic kalaam bhi likhtay ho...  Superb superb!...quite romantic...  Bhabhijaan ki jai ho....  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th February 2013, 08:26 AM
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Sundar, romantic shayri ke liye tahe dil se waah waah... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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10th February 2013, 10:29 AM
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Masha Allaah janaab.... waahh kya baat hai.... is muhabbat se labrez nazm ke liye shaaad ka salaam.... likhte raheN ... Shaad... |
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10th February 2013, 01:31 PM
Ahmad bhai,
are bhai kya dubaya hai Ishk ki samandar me ki hur tarAf Ishk hi Ishk Nazar aanee laga hai bas ek change karen to ..phool girte hain phul khilte hona chahiye. samjay sehgak khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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10th February 2013, 01:45 PM
ishq se labraiz paimaana chalkaa diya appne
hum jaam e ishq kee do chaar bondieN paaney ko tarsieN or app ne to paimaany se hee chalkaa dee jaam bahut khoob likhty rahieN , meree t^araf se daad qabool fermaaieN |
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10th February 2013, 02:10 PM
Ahmad bhai,
are bhai kya dubaya hai Ishk ki samandar me ki hur tarAf Ishk hi Ishk Nazar aanee laga hai bas ek change karen to ..phool girte hain phul khilte hona chahiye. samjay sehgak khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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11th February 2013, 05:56 PM
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Bhai Subhan Allah, Ba.Daa lazzat daar lagaa aapka kalaam. Khaaskar ke ye do antare nihaayat hi khushgawaar lage: Subah gulshan mayn mujhsay aaj, Koyal nay shikaayat kee, Tarannum bhool wo jaayay Tumharay gun-gunaanay say! Hamayn tum aazmaana chhor do Haye illtejaa yay hee Hamara dumm nikaltaa haye Tumharay aazmaanay say! lage. Daad qubool farmayeN. Likhte raheN. Khush rahiye, Naadaan HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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Thanks Sis! |
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Thanks Sis! -
12th February 2013, 11:54 AM
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Yay aapki zarranawazi aur khuloos haye jo aapko yay kalaam achcha lagaa! Buhat buhat shukriya behnaa..! Chaliyay aapsay ayk raaz ki baat share kar he laytay hayN, re writing romantic kalaam.... dar asal hamnay abtak jitnay aysay kalaam likhay un sab ko exclusively aapki bhabiejaaan kay saath he share kiyay I mean un he ko nazr kiya.... aur waysay bhi 14 Feb tak intezaar kafee lamba lagaa so penned it when it came to mind Un ki jay jaykaar tou wo roz he sun-teen hayn...ab kis-say...I'll leave it to your imagination! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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Thanks Aru Jee |
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Thanks Aru Jee -
12th February 2013, 11:58 AM
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Aapki aamad aur pu-khuloos daad dono ka tahay dil say shukriyaa! Aapki wah waah sar aankhaon pay janaab! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhe honsla afzaai kertay rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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12th February 2013, 12:00 PM
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Aapki pu-khuloos daad aur aapki aamad is bazm-e-khaaksaar kay liyay buhat maanee rakhtee haye janaab! Ilteja haye aapsay yoon hee saath banayay rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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12th February 2013, 12:12 PM
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Waah kya baat haye janaab! Aapki tukbandi nay dil bhar diya khushee say! hamree haysyat kahaan janaab kisi ko ishq mayn dubayngay hum to khud doobtay insaan hayn tinkay ki talaash mayn! Sehgal saahab aapka mashwara sar aankhaon par! Phool khiltay hayn har lehaaz say sahee haye... bas us waqt jo nazraon mayn manzar thaa wahee likh daala... I mean jo tasavvur mayn tha wahee likha haye... phool barastay nazar aa rahay thay wahee likha.. behr o wazn say zyada is nacheez ka dehaan us waqt takhayyul par thaa.. aap sahee keh rahay haynkhiltay hayn bhee sahee he haye! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee pu-khuloos saath apna barqaraar rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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12th February 2013, 12:20 PM
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Lo kar lo baat........ab.isme raaz waali kya baat hai?... ..Har shadi shuda banday ka farz hai yeh tou..... ...Hehehehe....  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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12th February 2013, 12:21 PM
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Aapki aamad he kaafi thee janaab nacheez ko masroor kernay kay liyay aapki daad nay tou maghoor ker diya!! Aapki is zarranawazi ka bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon! Aaapay pahlay jumlay nay hamayn hamaree sabsay pehli ghazal jo share ki thee.. uski yaad dilaa dee...Chalkaaya jaam-e-ulfat, un-honay khumaaar mayn Tinkay ki maanind behgayay hum aabshaar mayn! Ilteja haye aapsay... yoonhee nazr-e-inayat farmaatay rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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12th February 2013, 12:24 PM
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 Achcha huaa aapsay abhie tak unkaa raabta nahee hua... verna mayree to cot he khadee hojatee!! Mayn farz tou nahee kahoongaa isay albattaa...... .. Ahmad |
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12th February 2013, 01:38 PM
Ahmad bhaii:
namaste! bahot hi pyaari koShiSh... mazaa aa gayaa !! yuunhi liKhate rahiye aage bhee KhuSh raheN... apnaa khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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13th February 2013, 09:11 AM
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Muhtaram janab Nadaan sahab aapki aamad aur pur-khuloos daad, dono ka tahay dil say shukriyaa! Aapki daad sar aankhaon par janaab! Ilteja haye aapsay.. yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn!! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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9th March 2013, 10:41 PM
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Muaaf karna bhaee pata nahee kaysay aapka shukr ada karnay mayn itni dayr hogayee!! Aaapki aamad aur aapki bayshqeemtee daad wa duaon ka buhat buhat shukriya bhaee! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn! Ahmad |
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