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Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! -
26th June 2014, 08:22 AM
Hamara-Tumhara! Mere ghar kay afraad karnay lagay hayn, Hamara-tumhara humara tumhara! Kabhie insay maynay suna he nahee thaa, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! Mushkil ghadi mayn yahee wo bashar thay, Jo ik doosray ka sadaa thay sahara! Magar ab na jaanay kyun karnay lagay hayn, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! Zan ki thee azmat hamaysha dilaon mayn, Tha zeenat ka inki bhi kya hee nazaara! Karay waalida kii nishaanee pay ab yay, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! Zameen nay kabhie naa tha inko lubhaaya, Ik chhat kay neechay tha inkaa guzaara! Zameen kay har tukday pay ab yay likhayn hayn, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! Zar ki kabhie na thee parwaah inko, Hanskar thay ye baant-laytay khasaaraa! Ab har rupaiiyay pay kartay hayn har-dam, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! Zevar thay inkay tou akhlaaq o adaab, Unglee uthaaker na kartay ishaaraa! Giraybaan o daaman pakad ab karay hayn, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! Ahmad yay daykha ab hargiz na jaayay, Juda hotay hamsheer ka yay nazaara! Wajah dil mayn dhoondooN tou awaaz aayay, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! .................................................. .................................................. . Ahmad Hyderabadi Ahmad |
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26th June 2014, 08:49 AM
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Ahmad Hyderabad ji kya kahne...bahut hi khubsurat andaz may aapne apni baat mukamal tareeke se pesh kar di... subhanallah............dhairoN daad qabool farmaaiyega........... |
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26th June 2014, 11:28 AM
Ahmad mere bhai, kamaal ki pesh kash hhai ye aapki.... one of the best
jis tarah se aapne alaazon ko baandhhaa hai use dekh kar lag raha hai ke kaafi professional writer ka kaam hai ye... aur ehsaas to bas kyaa kahne, ummdaa bahot ummdaa... Zan ki thee azmat hamaysha dilaon mayn, Tha zeenat ka inki bhi kya hee nazaara! Karay waalida kii nishaanee pay ab yay, Hamara-tumhara hamara tumhara! likhte rahiye Shaad... |
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26th June 2014, 12:24 PM
Janab Ahmad Hyderabadi sahab!
FB par abhi abhi aapki ye nazm paRhi. Mashaallah bohat khoobsoorat aur ravaN andaaz meiN aapne bayaN ki hai aaj ke ghar-ghar ki kahani. Daad qubuul farmaiye! Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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26th June 2014, 08:20 PM
Simply superb....hat's off bro. ....
Alfaaz nahi mil rahe kuch kehne ko..........  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th June 2014, 09:44 PM
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Aapki ye rachna jeevan ki aur har ghar ki sachai hai, kahin kam kahin zyada,ehsason ko jhakjhorne ke liye aapko mubarak ho |
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5th July 2014, 11:54 PM
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5th July 2014, 11:57 PM
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6th July 2014, 12:01 AM
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Hazrat aap jaysee shaqsiyyat ki aamad he khaaksaar kay liyay baais e faqr haye, oopar say aaapki dono jagah bayshqeemtee daad ka haasil hona..sonay pay sohaaga... bayhad khushee huee aaki aamad aur daad paaker! Ilteja haye aapsay yoon hee saath banayay rakhayn! Ahmad |
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6th July 2014, 12:05 AM
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Thank You SIS.... for your observation..understanding and kind words... appreciate your kind visit Sis... yoon he saath bnaayay rakhna!!  Ahmad |
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6th July 2014, 12:30 AM
waah waah janab bahot khub.........................!!!!!
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6th July 2014, 01:08 AM
Ahmad sahab .... aapne umdah khoobsurat shayari ki misaal to pesh ki hi ... par jo chubhate huwe sawaal uthaaye aur jo mohabbat bhara paighaam diya ... wo beshkeemtee hai ... ek aham nazm hai ye ... meri jaanib se dheron daad, mubaarakbaad aur duaein .... zarraa
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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31st August 2014, 05:01 PM
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Maazratkhwaah hoon takheer e shukriya k liyay... aapki aamad wa paziraai ka dilee shukriyaa mere bhaee.. buhat masarrat huee aapko is bazm may paa ker!! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn!! Ahmad |
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31st August 2014, 05:09 PM
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31st August 2014, 05:15 PM
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31st August 2014, 11:51 PM
Ahmad bhai aadaab-wa-taslee'maat
amaa aapki kaavish youN hoti hai jaise ek lazeez khaane ke packet par sehat department ki jaanib se lagaaya jaane waala "ok tested" ka label mazaaq bar-taraf, aap un chuNindaa sho'raa meiN se ek haiN jinki kaavishoN ka mujhe Intezaar rehta hai bohat aalaa aur zameer ko jhaNjoRney waala kal'aam ataa kiya hai aapne, iske liye shukriya aur mubarakbaad tasleem farmaiiye pehli baar is post ko bohat pehle padh chuka tha, gaahe-ba-gaahe phir padhta raha hooN, daad ka aapka haq adaa karne meiN chook/der'ii ho gayi, mazrat-khwaa hooN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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1st September 2014, 09:37 AM
Ahmad bhai....behadddddddddd badiya likha hai aapne...aaj ke halaat par sahi likha hai....superb
god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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1st September 2014, 10:23 AM
Ahmad bhai,
Adaab-o-tasleemaat, Wahh janab! Aik ghambheer muDay per aap ne aik pur-zoR-o-pur-soz kalaam pesh kiya hai.... Teh-e-dil se nikli dherooN daad pesh-e-nazar hai! Likhte rahiye, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th September 2014, 09:42 PM
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Superb... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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daad kabul kijeyega |
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daad kabul kijeyega -
10th September 2014, 10:59 PM
Ahmad ji
Pehli baar aapka likha parha.dil tak dastak detey se lagte hain yeh lafz hamara tumhara. Har roz insaan in do shabdon ki kashmakash se hi ulghta reh jata hay. poori rachna kabeele tareef hay.daad kabul kijeyega. |
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