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Tum Bhi Daykh Lo!! -
10th June 2014, 05:02 AM
Tum bhi daykh lo! Barbaadi ka nazaaraa, tum bhi daykh lo, Aalam hai daykhay saaraa, tum bhi daykh lo! Auron ko nafay khoob huay, kaarobaar mayn, Hamko huaa khasaaraa, tum bhi daykh lo! Aayee thi khushi ghar hamaray yaad hai hamayn, Ghar kyaa hua hamaaraa, tum bhi daykh lo! Darya e gham k saahil kehte thay tum hamayn, Dooba huaa kinaaraa, tum bhi daykh lo! Is aakhri ghadi mayn dushman bhi mil chukay hayn, Ahmad ko aa khudaaraa, tum bhi daykh lo! .................................................. .................................................. ......... Ahmad Hyderabadi Ahmad |
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10th June 2014, 10:04 AM
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bahot hi khoobsuuratii se aapne is kalaam me baandhaa hai ahmad saahab... itni mushkil radeef nibhaane ke liye main aapko tahe dil se daad dena chahta hoon... bahot hi ummdahh kaariggaree nazar aaye mujhe aapke is kalaam me... likhte rahiye Shaad... |
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10th June 2014, 10:50 AM
ahmad sahab aapko bahut bahut badhaai dena chahunga is kalaam ke liye......bahut hee.khoobsoorti se aapne apne ehsaason ko shabdon mein dhaala hai......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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10th June 2014, 11:14 AM
Dekh liya janaab dekh liya....aapka Bayaan -e -dard....dekha bhi aur mahsuus bhi kiya
.......ghazal par aapko dhero daad.....tc |
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10th June 2014, 01:00 PM
Masha Allah bohat khoob bhaijaan. ..
Simply superb...! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th June 2014, 01:26 PM
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bahot hi khubsurat hai ye ghazal.... laajawaab haiN har ashaar.... ek ek sher padhte hue ussme chhipe gham ko mehsoos kiya hai..... dheroN dheroN daad, janaab aapko  ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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10th June 2014, 09:31 PM
Daryaa e gham ke sahil kehtey they tum hame
Dooba hua kinara, tum bhi daikh lo Bhut khoob janaab kya kehne hain ghazal ke tamaam aashaar bhut khoob rhe khass kar ke ye sher bhut khoob rha daad khidmat mai hazir hai qubool farmaaiye Aslam Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum |
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10th June 2014, 09:46 PM
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Bohut bohut khoobsurat, mazaa aa gaya aur sar jhuk gaya(Aapse seekhne ko bohut kuch milega.) Shukriya isey hum sab ke saath share karne ke liye. Apki behn Sarika |
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10th June 2014, 10:52 PM
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Waah Ahmed ji laajawab bandish ....ek khoobsoorat intekhaab inaayat kia hai bahut khoob hai ....bohat ssari daad qabool farmaaayeN ...salamat rahain.. Harash Mahajan |
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11th June 2014, 09:04 AM
Ahmad bhai , adaab .
Baad muddat tumhein dekh ker yun laga , jaise bekaar dil.ko karar aa gaya. Yeh tau aap ko mehfil mein dekhne pe mehsoos hua. Ab ayein aap ki ghazal pe ...bahut hi khoob ravangee bhai aur itne simple words ki mujh jaise naasamjh ko bhi jhatpat samajh mein aa gayee aap ki ghazal. Regds Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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11th June 2014, 09:55 AM
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aapke likhe yeh mujhe zaheer dehlvi ji ki nazm yaad aa gayi jiska zikr karna chahungaa.. unko haal-e-dil-pur-soz sunaa kar utthe aur do char ke ghar aag laga kar utthe Amhad bhai sach mein aapne mehfil mein jaan phoonk thi apni is rachna se yunhi likhte rahiYe aabaad rahiYe aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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23rd June 2014, 05:52 AM
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takheer e jawaab kay liyay maazratkhwaah hoon bhaee... aapki daad sar aankahaon par janaab... yay aapka khuloos haye jo aapko kalaam-e-khaaksaar pasand aaya... buhat buhat shukriya meray bhaee.. aamad wa honsla-afzaai kaa! duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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23rd June 2014, 05:54 AM
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Bayhad mashkoor hoon bhaee aapki pur-khuloos paziraai ka! Buhat buhat shukriya bhaee... ilteja haye aap-say yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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23rd June 2014, 05:57 AM
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Buhat buhat shukriyaa bhaee... aapki "Nazr-e-inaayat" kaa aur ham-dardi kaa! Buhat khushee huee apko yahaan daykh. Aapki daad sar aankhaon par... yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn.. yahee ilteja haye.. Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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23rd June 2014, 05:59 AM
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Thank you sooo much Sis... for your appreciation and encouragement!!! ilteja haye aap-say.. yoon-hee saath banayay rakhna...!Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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23rd June 2014, 06:02 AM
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Buhat buhat shukriyaa aapki aamad o inaayat kaa! Aapki aamad wa paziraai buhat muaynay rakhtee haye along with all our peers here bhaee! Ilteja haye aapsay yoon hee pur-khuloos saath banayay rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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23rd June 2014, 06:12 AM
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Khushaamdeed!! Apki aamad aur usper aapki pur-khuloos daad dono hee khaaksaar kay liyay baais-e-masarrat hayn... bayhad mashkoor hoon aapkay khuloos bharay kalimaat ka! Ilteja haye aap-say ... yoon he saath banayay rakhayn... Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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23rd June 2014, 06:18 AM
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Sis, aapki aamad wa daad... dono ka bayhad shukrguzaar hoon. Sis..aap aur ham sab bhaee bahan yahaan baraabar hayn aur taalib-e-ilm hayn.. students hayn is fann/kalaa kay.. so sar jhukaanay ki koee baat nahee.. ham sab tou yahaan ayk doosray say buhat kuch seekhtay hayn goh ki ham aksar aknowledge nahee kartay/kar-paatay.... aapki pur-khuloos daad ka buhat buhat shukriyaa Behna Duagoh Ahmad Ahmad |
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8th September 2014, 11:36 PM
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KhushAamdeed! Takheer e shukr kay liyay maazratkhwaah hoon janaab! Aapki pur-khuloos paziraai ka bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon! Ilteja haye aapsay, yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn! Ahmad |
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8th September 2014, 11:37 PM
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8th September 2014, 11:40 PM
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Sharminda hoon taakheer e shukriyaa k liyay. Aapki muhabbat bharee inaayat ka shukr ada karne k liyay alfaaz nahee hayn mayray paas! Dilii maazrat aur saath he shukriya aapkay khuloos ka... aapki daad sar aankhaon par. Warm & Kind regards Sir, Ahmad |
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8th September 2014, 11:45 PM
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Maazratkhwaah hoon takheer e shukr k liyay! Ommeed haye aap khayr wa aafiyat say hongay.. aapki ghayr-mawjoodgee hamayn baychayn kar rahee haye bhaee! Aapki muhabbat bharee pazirai ka bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon aur aapnay jo Zaheer saahab ka shayr paysh kiya is bazm mayn rounaq aa gayee! Bayhad shukriyaa aapki inaayataon ka! Ilteja haye aapsay...yoonhee shafqat bhara saath banaayay rakhayn! Ahmad |
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9th September 2014, 10:04 AM
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne...sabhi ashiyaar tareef ke kabil hai...! god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st September 2014, 03:03 AM
waah waah !! waaqayee dekhne laayak ghazal hai Ahmad sahab !! ehsaasaat bahaut hi pakke lage is ke aur bayaan dilchasp ! dheron daad aur duaein aap ko !!
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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