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Ghazal : Jo Tumse KahTe KahTe Rah Gayaa ... ! - 18th March 2012, 10:46 AM

Woh Sab MitTe MitTe Rah Gayaa
Jo Tumse KahTe KahTe Rah Gayaa ...

Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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18th March 2012, 01:21 PM

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Woh Sab MitTe MitTe Rah Gayaa
Jo Tumse KahTe KahTe Rah Gayaa ...

Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...


Waahh waahhh kya baat hai,.... behad khoobsurat tahreer se aapne alfaazoN ko sajaaya hai Naresh Bhaiyaa.... subah subah aapki mohak rachna padhkar man bhaav vibhor ho uthaa... bahot bahot dhanyawaad hamaare saath is kavita ko baatne ke liye.... Likhte raheN...

Shaad...


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Woh Sab MitTe MitTe Rah Gayaa
Jo Tumse KahTe KahTe Rah Gayaa ...

Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...
Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

good one ... sir ji

very well written .......................


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Woh Sab MitTe MitTe Rah Gayaa
Jo Tumse KahTe KahTe Rah Gayaa ...

Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...
Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

bahut sundar ... bahut khoob ... ghazal huee hen .. naresh bhai ... sabhi sher khoobsurat bane hai ... acchi ghazal bani hen ... dil se daad ... likhte rahiye ... dil se daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe .............


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19th March 2012, 12:30 PM

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Woh Sab MitTe MitTe Rah Gayaa
Jo Tumse KahTe KahTe Rah Gayaa ...

Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...
Ji Bhaut Sunder.....................



Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye


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good one ... sir ji

very well written .......................
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namaste!

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nareshji abto baaz aa jaiye dupatton ka peeca karne se

aapki ghazal to acchi lagi hi par upar highlight kiya hua sher wakai gazab raha....

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KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...


nareshji abto baaz aa jaiye dupatton ka peeca karne se

aapki ghazal to acchi lagi hi par upar highlight kiya hua sher wakai gazab raha....

itne saare matlab liye huye ye sher bahut kamaal adaa huaa.....

good work sirji....i admire your sincerety....

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Lekin Aap PakaDhne Se Baaz Nahi Aaye ...

Yeh Aap Kii Mohabbat Hai ... Jo Itne Khoobsurat AlfaazoN MeN ... Ghazal Pasand Kii ...

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26th March 2012, 05:56 PM

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Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...
naresh saheb namaskaar,
kaise hain aap?

aapki ye ghazal bahut badhiya hui hai janaab...
meri jaanib se daad qubuul kijiyega...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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28th March 2012, 05:50 PM

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acchee ghazal huyi naresh jee....................daad o mubaraqbaad.tc
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Sochaa Tumhe Woh Sab Bataa DooN
Jo Khat MeN LikhTe LikhTe Rah Gayaa ...

Kaaghaz Par Likhaa Thaa Jo Naam
Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
Dupattaa PakadhTe PakadhTe Rah Gayaa ...

RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
Lab Main KholTe KholTe Rah Gayaa ...

"Naresh" Ke Paas Se Jab Gayee Tum
Main Aansoo RokTe RokTe Rah Gayaa ...


naresh ji..namaste

kya kahun... yeh kafi hai..itna khoobsoorat or pyaar bhara...

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Vikram Ji ... Aap Kii NawaazishaaT Aur MohabbatoN Se Nawaazne Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH !!!




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daad qubool kijye - 10th April 2012, 01:48 AM

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Baarish MeN DhulTe DhulTe Rah Gayaa ...

Hawaa Thii Shaam Se Tez Itnee
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RooTh Tum Kitnaa Gayee Thii Mujhse
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