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Aap Ki Is Nazm Ke Bara Me Kia Kahun.............. Mujhy Taareef Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Mil Rahay.......... Jitni Khubsurti Se Aap Ne MUHABBAT Ka Naqsha Khencha Hai........ Wo Bila-Shuba Aap Ki Raushan KHayalaat Ka Akkaas Hai...... Us Pr Aap Ka Andaz-e-Bayan Or Khubsurat Alfaaz Ki Rawani, Kamaaaal Tareeeeeen Rahi..... Boht Boht Pasand Aayi Ye Nazm ............. Karoron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khubsurat Takhleeq Pr.......... Sada Khush Rahen Or Yunhi Likhtay Rahen....... Saabit Ho Gaya Ke Aap MUHABBAT Ke Samandar Me Doob Kr Niklay Hain.... Sari Kefiyyaaaat Haqiqi Hain...... ALLAH KARE ZOR-E-QALAM OR ZIADA Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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bas nazm likhte hi post kar di hai............ bahut baar padhne pe shayed kuch aur raddo-badal karuN isme aapne saraha ........ sakoon milaa shukriyaaa |
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ye bahta paani hai pyare ise ruknaa nahi aataa kalam sar apna karwa le magar jhuknaa nahiN aataa ye zahir bhi nahiN rahti ... ise chupna nahiN aataa laga do jitni keemat bhi keemat nahiN bikna naiN aata puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi Fikr Ji....... Highlight Line Dobara Dekhiye Ga.... "Laga Do Jitni Qeemat BHi Isay Bikna Nahi Aata" Kia Ye Theak Nahi Rahay Ga....? Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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typo ho gayee roman mai misraa yuN hai laga do jitni bhi keemat nahi bikna nahi aataa लगा दो जितनी भी कीमत नही बिकना नही आता ab agar kuch kami lage to batayeN regards |
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Sir Kami To Pehlay Bhi Nahi Thi........ Mujhy BHi Yehi Mehsoos Hua Tha Ke Typing Mistake Hai........ Baqi To Hr Pehlu Se Mukammal Nazm Hai..... Yaqin Maiye Dil Se Daad Nikli Is Kalaam Pr....... Dil Khush Ho Gaya Parh Kr.... KHush Rahen....... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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Nice to see so much written about love. Vikas Bhai...! Aur likhaa bhi aapne bahut accha hai...!
Pehle do misre hameiN bahut pasand heiN Likhte raheiN, ok...? Ashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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लुटाओगे इसे जितना ये दौलत बढ़ती जाएगी ये बहता पानी है प्यारे इसे रुकना नही आता कलम सर अपना करवा ले मगर झुकना नही आता bahut Sundar .... vikas bhai ............ radhe radhe ............ Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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Janumanu sahab Namaskar,
aapne kisi nazm ki zamiin par ise likha hai kya ? jis tarah compose kiya hai ise isliye mujhe aesa laga.. khoobsurat alfaazo ko aapne motiyo ki tarah pirokar pesh kiya hai... ehsaaso ki rawaani k kya kehne.. acha laga aapko padhkar....daad qabool kare Diggaj |
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ye nazm kisi aur ki zameen par nahi, magar bahut si hindi ganno k same meter mai hai like muhabbat zinda rahti hai .. muhabbat mar nahi sakti aur ...........chalo ik baat fir se ajnabi ban jaye hum dono aise bahut song milenge aapko thanx for the read |
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मुहब्बत बाँटते रहिए मुहब्बत बढ़ती जाएगी
लुटाओगे इसे जितना ये दौलत बढ़ती जाएगी ये बहता पानी है प्यारे इसे रुकना नही आता कलम सर अपना करवा ले मगर झुकना नही आता ये ज़ाहिर भी नहीं रहती इसे छुपना नही आता लगा दो जितनी भी कीमत नही बिकना नही आता पुरानी होगी ये जितनी ही कीमत बढ़ती जाएगी Bahut Hii Umdaa .... Vikas Bhai ! BehtreeN ... Nazm ! Har Leehaaz Se ... Dilee Daad Aur Mubaaraqbaad !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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Vikas behad umda likhtey ho aap, aapka har kalaam hame pasand aata hai so kahne ki jaroorat nahi hai ki yeh bhi pasand aaya
sabhi ahsaas bahut asardaar rahe par yeh last wale to bas dil meiN bas gye....! मिले गर दर्द भी इसमे कलेजे से लगा लो तुम नज़र इसको ना लग जाए कहीं दिल में छुपा लो तुम सहा ये दर्द हो जिसने गले उसको लगा लो तुम अगर आए हो दुनिया में तो ये पुन्न भी कमा लो तुम नही तो फ़िक्र दुनिया में तिजारत बढ़ती जाएगी` god bless u dear .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Hi friend....
According to me it is very nice ...bahut khoob likha he aapne.......wah ji wah. "ye bahta paani hai pyare ise ruknaa nahi aataa kalam sar apna karwa le magar jhuknaa nahiN aataa ye zahir bhi nahiN rahti ... ise chupna nahiN aataa laga do jitni keemat bhi keemat nahiN bikna naiN aata puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi badi khamosh rahti hai.... byaan isme nahi hota yakiN hi iski fitrat hai. gumaan isme nahi hota hai ubhraa saksh jo doovaa... nihaaN isme nahi hota siyasat meiN jo hota hai.. haaN isme nahi hota na thama iska daman to .. siyasat badhti jayegi"........ |
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Good one...............................
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Vikaas bhaa'ii:
namaste! bahot Khoob liKhaa hay aapne.. umdaa'h andaaz-e-bayaaN.. dil se daad aur duaaeN KhuSh rahiye.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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Mohabbat ke alag alag pehlooon ko parakh kar kayi dilchasp comments kiye hain is nazm mein jo behad pasand aaye. Bahaut acche fikr bai.
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very nice sharing ji,,,janumanu
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khoobsurat tarike se piroya hai aapne armaano ko ek sher jispar do baar wah niklo woh hai मैं शायर हूँ मुहब्बत का यही बस मैने माना है हिमाकत इसको समझोगे हिमाकत बढ़ती जाएगी aapne din bana diya samjho.. yunhi likhte rahiYe abaad rahiYe -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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mile gar dard bhi isme kaleje se laga lo tum
nazar isko na lag jaye kahiN dil meiN chupa lo tum saha ye dard ho jisne gale usko laga lo tum agar aaye ho dunia meiN to ye punn bhi kama lo tum nahi to fiKr dunia meiN tizarat badhti jayegi bahot khub vikas ji Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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aapki tareef kya kare hum, lafz kam padjate hain aapki nuzm behat pasand aayi sabse alag soch aapko ko bhid mein alag kar deta hai aapki yeh andaz-e-bayan behat khubsuurat hai dero.n daad take care :-ek bujhaa hua dhumil palak jhapakte hi jo aankh se hu'aa ojhal woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
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[B]चले आओ चले आओ यही आख़िर ठिकाना है
हुए पैदा इसी से हम इसी में डूब जाना है/B] wah kya baat hai.bahut khoob मिले गर दर्द भी इसमे कलेजे से लगा लो तुम नज़र इसको ना लग जाए कहीं दिल में छुपा लो तुम सहा ये दर्द हो जिसने गले उसको लगा लो तुम अगर आए हो दुनिया में तो ये पुन्न भी कमा लो तुम नही तो फ़िक्र दुनिया में तिजारत बढ़ती जाएगी` behad hee khoobsoorat nazm likhee hai bhai aapne. aapko is dilqash pesh qash par lakho daad.................................tc |
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