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RESULT- "tarahi Ghazal- JANUARY 2012" -
1st March 2012, 10:50 AM
Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namaskaar aur Aadaab!
ab waQt aa gayaa hai ki maiN "tarahi Ghazal- JANUARY 2012" ka result aap sab ko bataa duN
sab se pehle maiN un sabhee dostoN ka bahot bahot ShuKriyaah adaa kartaa huuN jin dostoN ne apni GhazaleN tarahi Ghazal meiN submit kee.. aap sabhee ne bahot hi mehnat kee hai !
tarahi Ghazal-JANUARY 2012 ki do winner Ghazal hai donoN hi Ghazal ko 9 votes mile haiN
>> jahaaN mujh ko, meri jana, ye sara mil gaya hota- By Vikram Jethi Jee (9 Votes)
>> Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota- By Sameer Shaad Jee (9 Votes)
Vikram Bhaa'ii aur Sameer Bhaa'ii aap donoN ko Shayri Parivaar ki aur se DheroN saari ShubhakaamnaayeN
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mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota
jahaaN mujh ko, meri jana, ye sara mil gaya hota
maiN likh pata ghazal koi tere hoNthoN pe hoNthoN se
tadapta kyuN, mujhe gar ye nazara mil gaya hota
jo chalte tum, falaq tak saath mere ham-qadam banke
kahiN khoya, haseeN sapna, hamaara mil gaya hota
tu rootha kyuN, sanam mujh se, hui mujh se khata kaisi
tere qadmoN meN rakhta sar, ishaara mil gaya hota
juda kuchh yuN, hua khud se, namumqin ab milan apna
sada sunta faqat dil ki, dobara mil gaya hota
tha gardish meN sada apna muqaddar 'mast' sunta ja
qaram hota agar uska, sitara mil gaya hota
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Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota,
Mujhe Sooraj nahi miltaa, Sitaara mil gaya hota.
Dilaasa dil ko dekar maiN bhi apne Ghar gayaa hota,
Gale lag kar jo Tu Mujhse Dubaara mil gayaa hota.
Khuda se waasta rakhta, to na LuT'taa main is tarha,
Tabaahi ke zaraa Pehle ishaara mil gayaa hota.
Na jaata Naa-khuda gar Chorkar Lehron ko baahoN me,
Tha Mumkin aaj kashti ko kinaara mil gayaa hota.
Na fir gumraah main hotaa tamannaoN ke Sehra meiN,
Mujhe terii Muhabbat ka sahaara mil gayaa hota.
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yeh rahiiN baaqee dostoN ki GhazaleN:
>> Mere Dil Ki Umangon Ko Kinara Mil Gaya Hota-By AHMAD SHAKIL Jee ( 4 Votes .. member name Taranaa jee ki post sirf 4 hi hai voting ke liye kam-z-kam 50 post chaahiye ees liye unka vote nahiin ginaa gayaa)
>> Falak se TooT kar jaise sitaaraa mil gayaa hotaa-By AnjAAn!!! Jee (3 Votes)
aap sab ko bahot bahot mubaaraKbaad aur ShuKriyaah aur un sabhee sadasyoN ka ShuKriyaah jinhone Vote diyaa haii.. !
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKhiye
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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1st March 2012, 11:36 AM
Vikram Bhai Aur Shaad Bhai ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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1st March 2012, 02:59 PM
Congratulations to both of you
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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1st March 2012, 04:07 PM
vikram sahab aur shaad sahab aap dono ko bahut bahut mubaraqbaad.
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1st March 2012, 04:44 PM
...............Congratulations...............
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd March 2012, 10:52 AM
Janab Sameer Shaad Saheb..............! Tah-e-Dil Se Aap Ko Jeet Ki mubarakbaad Pesh karta Hun..........
Yunhi Taraqqi ki Manaazil Tay Kartay Jaayen........
Sada Khush Rahiye.......
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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2nd March 2012, 10:56 AM
Janab Mohtram Vikram Saheb.........!
Boht Khushi Hui Ke Aap ki Ghazal BHi 1st Aayi Hai....
Tah-e-Dil Se Aap ko MUBARAKBAAD Paish Karta Hun....
Aagay Bhi Yunhi Ye Silsila Jaari Rakhiye Ga......
Sada Khush Rahiye..........
Is Ke Sath Sath Main Janab Anjaan Ji......... Ko BHi Mubarakbaad Dena ChahunGa, Jinhon ne Bohat Kam Waqt Me Ye Ghazal Likh Kar Jama Karwaayi... Meri Nazar Me ANjaan Ji Bhi Is Muqablay Ke Winner Hain....
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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2nd March 2012, 09:23 PM
Thanks all of you................. for your support......Those who has given their precious vote both intentionally and unintentionally... thanks all of you again.........
DuaaoN me yaad rakhiyega.... shukriyaaa
Shaad...
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3rd March 2012, 07:09 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dhaval
Mere Pyaare dostoN:
Namaskaar aur Aadaab!
ab waQt aa gayaa hai ki maiN "tarahi Ghazal- JANUARY 2012" ka result aap sab ko bataa duN
sab se pehle maiN un sabhee dostoN ka bahot bahot ShuKriyaah adaa kartaa huuN jin dostoN ne apni GhazaleN tarahi Ghazal meiN submit kee.. aap sabhee ne bahot hi mehnat kee hai !
tarahi Ghazal-JANUARY 2012 ki do winner Ghazal hai donoN hi Ghazal ko 9 votes mile haiN
>> jahaaN mujh ko, meri jana, ye sara mil gaya hota- By Vikram Jethi Jee (9 Votes)
>> Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota- By Sameer Shaad Jee (9 Votes)
Vikram Bhaa'ii aur Sameer Bhaa'ii aap donoN ko Shayri Parivaar ki aur se DheroN saari ShubhakaamnaayeN
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mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota
jahaaN mujh ko, meri jana, ye sara mil gaya hota
maiN likh pata ghazal koi tere hoNthoN pe hoNthoN se
tadapta kyuN, mujhe gar ye nazara mil gaya hota
jo chalte tum, falaq tak saath mere ham-qadam banke
kahiN khoya, haseeN sapna, hamaara mil gaya hota
tu rootha kyuN, sanam mujh se, hui mujh se khata kaisi
tere qadmoN meN rakhta sar, ishaara mil gaya hota
juda kuchh yuN, hua khud se, namumqin ab milan apna
sada sunta faqat dil ki, dobara mil gaya hota
tha gardish meN sada apna muqaddar 'mast' sunta ja
qaram hota agar uska, sitara mil gaya hota
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Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota,
Mujhe Sooraj nahi miltaa, Sitaara mil gaya hota.
Dilaasa dil ko dekar maiN bhi apne Ghar gayaa hota,
Gale lag kar jo Tu Mujhse Dubaara mil gayaa hota.
Khuda se waasta rakhta, to na LuT'taa main is tarha,
Tabaahi ke zaraa Pehle ishaara mil gayaa hota.
Na jaata Naa-khuda gar Chorkar Lehron ko baahoN me,
Tha Mumkin aaj kashti ko kinaara mil gayaa hota.
Na fir gumraah main hotaa tamannaoN ke Sehra meiN,
Mujhe terii Muhabbat ka sahaara mil gayaa hota.
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yeh rahiiN baaqee dostoN ki GhazaleN:
>> Mere Dil Ki Umangon Ko Kinara Mil Gaya Hota-By AHMAD SHAKIL Jee ( 4 Votes .. member name Taranaa jee ki post sirf 4 hi hai voting ke liye kam-z-kam 50 post chaahiye ees liye unka vote nahiin ginaa gayaa)
>> Falak se TooT kar jaise sitaaraa mil gayaa hotaa-By AnjAAn!!! Jee (3 Votes)
aap sab ko bahot bahot mubaaraKbaad aur ShuKriyaah aur un sabhee sadasyoN ka ShuKriyaah jinhone Vote diyaa haii.. !
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKhiye
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Vikram bhai aur Shaad bhai aap dono ko bahut bahut mubaarakbaad. Behad khoobsoorat likha hai aapne. Ye muqaabla behad romaanchak rahaa.
Waise is ek muqaable mein teen winner hue.....Very Strange.......Ahmad Shakil bhai ne mujhe bhi khitaab de diya, ab main ye khitaab lautaane wala nahi hu.....lol :P
Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya is muqaable ko saarthak banaane ke liye. Yaqeenan Shaad bhai aur Vikram bhai ki jeet mein hamaari bhi jeet shaamil hai.
Eeshwar aap logo par apni kripa drishti banzaye rakhe. Allaah aapko panaah mein rakhe.
Aameen
Izaazat deejiye
Aapka Bhai
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3rd March 2012, 01:35 PM
sdc aur sab dostoN jinhone meri ghazal ke liye vote kiya hai, un sab ka tahe dil se shukriya karta hu....
sab ko bahut bahut shukriya.....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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3rd March 2012, 01:42 PM
shaad saheb,
bahut bahut mubaaraqbaad...
aapki ghazal meri ghazal se kahiN umda hai, aapki apni vote aapne anjaan saheb ko di hai...mujhe behad achha laga...good things do not go unnoticed...and I truly appreciate your gesture....
aur is wajha se asal winner aap hi haiN...maiN jaanta huN ki is jeet haar ka koi maayna nahi...aur shayad aap bhi meri tarha jeetne ya haarne ke liye is competition me hissa nahi lete...faqat shirqat ke liye hi lete haiN....chaliye bahaana koi bhi ho...achhi ghazaleN padhne ko mil jaati haiN...aur likhne ka bhi dil ho aata hai....
chaliye ijaazat chaahunga...
mast
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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3rd March 2012, 01:43 PM
bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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3rd March 2012, 01:44 PM
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Congratulations to both of you
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Thanks a lot Praneeta ji..................................
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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3rd March 2012, 01:46 PM
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vikram sahab aur shaad sahab aap dono ko bahut bahut mubaraqbaad.
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bahut bahut shukriya uffaq saheb..........
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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3rd March 2012, 01:47 PM
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Thanks a lot Sunita ji...........................
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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3rd March 2012, 01:51 PM
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Janab Mohtram Vikram Saheb.........!
Boht Khushi Hui Ke Aap ki Ghazal BHi 1st Aayi Hai....
Tah-e-Dil Se Aap ko MUBARAKBAAD Paish Karta Hun....
Aagay Bhi Yunhi Ye Silsila Jaari Rakhiye Ga......
Sada Khush Rahiye..........
Is Ke Sath Sath Main Janab Anjaan Ji......... Ko BHi Mubarakbaad Dena ChahunGa, Jinhon ne Bohat Kam Waqt Me Ye Ghazal Likh Kar Jama Karwaayi... Meri Nazar Me ANjaan Ji Bhi Is Muqablay Ke Winner Hain....
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janaab ahmad saheb,
bahut bahut shukriya aapka....
aapki ghazal bhi bahut badhiya hai...
meri koshish hogi ki ye silsila yuN hi barqaraar rahe aur aap se bhi yahi ummeed karta huN ki aap bhi isi tarha apni badhiya badhiya ghazaleN padhne ka hame mauqa dete rahenge...
duaoN ke saath ijaazat,
vikram 'mast'
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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3rd March 2012, 01:56 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Vikram bhai aur Shaad bhai aap dono ko bahut bahut mubaarakbaad. Behad khoobsoorat likha hai aapne. Ye muqaabla behad romaanchak rahaa.
Waise is ek muqaable mein teen winner hue.....Very Strange.......Ahmad Shakil bhai ne mujhe bhi khitaab de diya, ab main ye khitaab lautaane wala nahi hu.....lol :P
Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya is muqaable ko saarthak banaane ke liye. Yaqeenan Shaad bhai aur Vikram bhai ki jeet mein hamaari bhi jeet shaamil hai.
Eeshwar aap logo par apni kripa drishti banzaye rakhe. Allaah aapko panaah mein rakhe.
Aameen
Izaazat deejiye
Aapka Bhai
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sumit sharma ji,
bahut bahut shukriya aapka....
aapki ghazal bhi mujhe bahut pasaNd aayee aur meri nazar se dekhenge to 3 nahi is muqaabale me 4 winner haiN....jo aa kar likhta hai vo khud ba khud ek winner ho jaata hai....aapki muhabbat dekh kar bahut achha laga....bahut bahut shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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