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~.. kahaani ho gaye sare - 29th September 2011, 03:37 PM

कहानी हो गये सारे कहानी जो सुनाते थे
नही जागे वो यूँ सोए.के जो मुझको सुलाते थे

सुना है लोहे का जंगला लगाया है कमेटी ने
वही मंदिर जहाँ से हम कभी पैसे चुराते थे

बिना ईदी के कैसे पूरी होगी ईद.अब मेरी
मुझे ईदी की बदले में गले अब्बू लगाते थे

हमारे दिल में जो है और जितना है समझने को
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खफा हो आसमां हमसे बला से अपनी होता हो
वो कहती थी की लाओ चाँद हम भी तोड़ लाते थे

समझ इसको न घर चिड़िया मुझे है कैद से बढ़ कर
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किसी का ज़िक्र आते ही हमारी आंख भर आना
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कहानी हो गये सारे कहानी जो सुनाते थे
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सुना है लोहे का जंगला लगाया है कमेटी ने
वही मंदिर जहाँ से हम कभी पैसे चुराते थे

बिना ईदी के कैसे पूरी होगी ईद.अब मेरी
मुझे ईदी की बदले में गले अब्बू लगाते थे

हमारे दिल में जो है और जितना है समझने को
मुहब्बत थी या चूड़ी थी जिसे हम आजमाते थे

ज़ुबा से नाक गर छूँ लूँ... लगेंगे 'पर 'मुझे फिर दो
मुझे बचपन में भाई सब बड़ा उल्लू बनाते थे

खफा हो आसमां हमसे बला से अपनी होता हो
वो कहती थी की लाओ चाँद हम भी तोड़ लाते थे

समझ इसको न घर चिड़िया मुझे है कैद से बढ़ कर
वोह ही घर मेरा था मेहमाँ जहाँ जाते थे आते थे

किसी का ज़िक्र आते ही हमारी आंख भर आना
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कहानी हो गये सारे कहानी जो सुनाते थे
नही जागे वो यूँ सोए.के जो मुझको सुलाते थे

सुना है लोहे का जंगला लगाया है कमेटी ने
वही मंदिर जहाँ से हम कभी पैसे चुराते थे

बिना ईदी के कैसे पूरी होगी ईद.अब मेरी
मुझे ईदी की बदले में गले अब्बू लगाते थे

हमारे दिल में जो है और जितना है समझने को
मुहब्बत थी या चूड़ी थी जिसे हम आजमाते थे

ज़ुबा से नाक गर छूँ लूँ... लगेंगे 'पर 'मुझे फिर दो
मुझे बचपन में भाई सब बड़ा उल्लू बनाते थे

खफा हो आसमां हमसे बला से अपनी होता हो
वो कहती थी की लाओ चाँद हम भी तोड़ लाते थे

समझ इसको न घर चिड़िया मुझे है कैद से बढ़ कर
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किसी का ज़िक्र आते ही हमारी आंख भर आना
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सुना है लोहे का जंगला लगाया है कमेटी ने
वही मंदिर जहाँ से हम कभी पैसे चुराते थे

बिना ईदी के कैसे पूरी होगी ईद.अब मेरी
मुझे ईदी की बदले में गले अब्बू लगाते थे

हमारे दिल में जो है और जितना है समझने को
मुहब्बत थी या चूड़ी थी जिसे हम आजमाते थे

ज़ुबा से नाक गर छूँ लूँ... लगेंगे 'पर 'मुझे फिर दो
मुझे बचपन में भाई सब बड़ा उल्लू बनाते थे

खफा हो आसमां हमसे बला से अपनी होता हो
वो कहती थी की लाओ चाँद हम भी तोड़ लाते थे

समझ इसको न घर चिड़िया मुझे है कैद से बढ़ कर
वोह ही घर मेरा था मेहमाँ जहाँ जाते थे आते थे

किसी का ज़िक्र आते ही हमारी आंख भर आना
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kahani ho gaye sare.. kahani jo sunate they
nahiN jaage woH yuN soye.. ke jo mujhko sulate they

suna hai lohe ka janglaa.. lagaya hai kameTee nei
wahi mandir jahaN se hum kabhi paise churate they

binaa eedi ke kaise poori hogi eid ab meri
mujhe eedi ke badle meiN gale abbu lagate they

hamare dil mai jo hai.. aur jitna hai samjhne ko
muhabbat thi ya chooRhi thi.. jise hum aajmaate they

zubaaN se naaq gar choo luN... lagenge 'par" mujhe fir do
mujhe bachpan mai bhayeee sab bada ullu banate they

khafaa ho aasmaaN humse.... bala se apni hota ho
woH kahti thi ki lao chand hum bhi tod laate they

samajh isko na ghar chidiya mujhe hai kaid se badhkar
woh hi ghar mera tha mehmaaN jahaaN jaate they aate they

kisi ka zikr aate hi humari aaNkh bhar aana
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kahani ho gaye sare.. kahani jo sunate they
nahiN jaage woH yuN soye.. ke jo mujhko sulate they

suna hai lohe ka janglaa.. lagaya hai kameTee nei
wahi mandir jahaN se hum kabhi paise churate they

binaa eedi ke kaise poori hogi eid ab meri
mujhe eedi ke badle meiN gale abbu lagate they

hamare dil mai jo hai.. aur jitna hai samjhne ko
muhabbat thi ya chooRhi thi.. jise hum aajmaate they

zubaaN se naaq gar choo luN... lagenge 'par" mujhe fir do
mujhe bachpan mai bhayeee sab bada ullu banate they

khafaa ho aasmaaN humse.... bala se apni hota ho
woH kahti thi ki lao chand hum bhi tod laate they

samajh isko na ghar chidiya mujhe hai kaid se badhkar
woh hi ghar mera tha mehmaaN jahaaN jaate they aate they

kisi ka zikr aate hi humari aaNkh bhar aana

tumheN bhi yaad hai kyaa 'FikR' hum jisko bhulaate they

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kahani ho gaye sare.. kahani jo sunate they
nahiN jaage woH yuN soye.. ke jo mujhko sulate they

suna hai lohe ka janglaa.. lagaya hai kameTee nei
wahi mandir jahaN se hum kabhi paise churate they

binaa eedi ke kaise poori hogi eid ab meri
mujhe eedi ke badle meiN gale abbu lagate they

hamare dil mai jo hai.. aur jitna hai samjhne ko
muhabbat thi ya chooRhi thi.. jise hum aajmaate they

zubaaN se naaq gar choo luN... lagenge 'par" mujhe fir do
mujhe bachpan mai bhayeee sab bada ullu banate they

khafaa ho aasmaaN humse.... bala se apni hota ho
woH kahti thi ki lao chand hum bhi tod laate they

samajh isko na ghar chidiya mujhe hai kaid se badhkar
woh hi ghar mera tha mehmaaN jahaaN jaate they aate they

kisi ka zikr aate hi humari aaNkh bhar aana
tumheN bhi yaad hai kyaa 'FikR' hum jisko bhulaate they

Dear janumanu.. sach me jaan ho yaar tum is mahfil ke... Kyaa khayaal hote hain aapke, ke bas kahiiN hum kho jaate hain padhkar...bahot khoobsurat alfaaz chunte ho aap.. Zindgi ki haqeeqat bayaaN karne ke liye.... likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...

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binaa eedi ke kaise poori hogi eid ab meri
mujhe eedi ke badle meiN gale abbu lagate they

hamare dil mai jo hai.. aur jitna hai samjhne ko
muhabbat thi ya chooRhi thi.. jise hum aajmaate they

Behad khoobsurat...as always...




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superbbbbbb....vikas, koi jawaab nahi en ahsaasoN ka, ek ek lafz dil mei ghar kar gya...sabhi ahsaas dil ke behad kareeb rahe...god bless u
Oh ji tuhadaa badda badda .. dhaanbaadi haaN.........

sadda ki hai........ likh didnde haan.. jo aaye . le bahyee ....... tu ban ja sher gahzal

par tuhadde varge hi henn jo matti chakk ke mathy la laende ho
nayee taa ....... eho jehaa jigraa hor kiss vall hundaa hai
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कहानी हो गये सारे कहानी जो सुनाते थे
नही जागे वो यूँ सोए.के जो मुझको सुलाते थे

सुना है लोहे का जंगला लगाया है कमेटी ने
वही मंदिर जहाँ से हम कभी पैसे चुराते थे

बिना ईदी के कैसे पूरी होगी ईद.अब मेरी
मुझे ईदी की बदले में गले अब्बू लगाते थे

हमारे दिल में जो है और जितना है समझने को
मुहब्बत थी या चूड़ी थी जिसे हम आजमाते थे

ज़ुबा से नाक गर छूँ लूँ... लगेंगे 'पर 'मुझे फिर दो
मुझे बचपन में भाई सब बड़ा उल्लू बनाते थे

खफा हो आसमां हमसे बला से अपनी होता हो
वो कहती थी की लाओ चाँद हम भी तोड़ लाते थे

समझ इसको न घर चिड़िया मुझे है कैद से बढ़ कर
वोह ही घर मेरा था मेहमाँ जहाँ जाते थे आते थे

किसी का ज़िक्र आते ही हमारी आंख भर आना
तुम्हें भी याद है क्या फ़िक्र हम जिसको भुलाते थे

waah. Bahut umda creation. Apni daad pesh karne ke liye lafz nai hain mere paas. Samajh gaya aap kis level pe batana chah rahe the. Vikas ji dil cheerne wali simple aur unique ghazal hai. Maine aaj tak aisi ghazal nai padhi kabhi


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Amit sahab maiN dekh rahi huuN,aap baar baar is thread per aaker author ki insult kar rahe haiN, agar aapko pasand nahi aaya tou reason bataiye kya ghalat hai aur usko kaise theek kiya jaa sakta, is tarah ka direct comment , SDC per allowed nahi hai...aapko pehle bhi warn kiya jaa chuka hai...ummid hai aap aagay se khayaal rakhengay


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magar har kadvi cheez sach bhi nahi hoti
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Amit sahab maiN dekh rahi huuN,aap baar baar is thread per aaker author ki insult kar rahe haiN, agar aapko pasand nahi aaya tou reason bataiye kya ghalat hai aur usko kaise theek kiya jaa sakta, is tarah ka direct comment , SDC per allowed nahi hai...aapko pehle bhi warn kiya jaa chuka hai...ummid hai aap aagay se khayaal rakhengay


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