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shabaab chhalke kahii.n - 23rd April 2015, 12:12 PM

shabaab chhalke kahii.n aur kahii.n sharaab gire
kahii.n bhii abr na chhaae yahaa.n naqaab gire

pila pila tu baDe shauq se pila saaqi
tere hi dast-e-musarrat1 se ho azaab2 gire

the tund-KHuu3 ki terii mai-e-tund4 kaa tha asar
jo ho so aaj magar aake tere baab5 gire

jalii hai shamma ki saaqi zaraa tu pardaa giraa
kahii.n se baad chale abr-diid6 jo aab gire

ye jaam-e-zahr7 sa behtaa “Safiir” kaa dil aur
lahuu ke aa.nkh se qatre bhii be-hisaab gire

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कहीं भी अब्र न छाए यहां नक़ाब गिरे

पिला पिला तू बड़े शौक़ से पिला साक़ी
तेरे ही दस्त-ए-मुसर्रत1 से हो अज़ाब2 गिरे

थे तुंद-ख़ू3 कि तेरी मय-ए-तुंद4 का था असर
जो हो सो आज मगर आके तेरे बाब5 गिरे

जली है शम्मा कि साक़ी ज़रा तू पर्दा गिरा
कहीं से बाद चले अब्र-दीद6 जो आब गिरे

ये जाम-ए-ज़हर7 सा बहता “सफ़ीर” का दिल और
लहू के आँख से क़तरे भी बेहिसाब गिरे

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شباب چھلکے کہیں اور کہیں شراب گرے
کہیں بھی ابر نہ چھے یہاں نقاب گرے

پلا پلا تو بدی شوق سے پلا ساقی
تیرے ہی دست ا مسرّت سے ہو عذاب گرے

تھے تند خو کی تری مے ا تند کا تھا اثر
جو ہو سو آج مگر آکے تیرے باب گرے

جلی ہے شمّ کی ساقی ذرہ تو پردہ گرا
کہیں سے بعد چلے ابر دید جو اب گرے

یہ جام ا زہر سا بہتا "سفیر" کا دل اور
لہو کے آنکھ سے قطرے بھی بحساب گرے

== == == == == == ==

1 Hand of joy
2 punishment / torment
3 passionate
4 strong wine
5 door
6 cloudy eyes/tearful eyes
7 goblet of poison



ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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Aadil bhai...bahut khoob likha hai aapne, aik khaas baat aapki urdu par pakad kaafi acchi hai, agar aap urdu word ke matlab na batate to bahut mushkil tha har sher samjna...shukriya aapne es baat ka khayal rakha aur matlab saath saath bataye.



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Aadil bhai...bahut khoob likha hai aapne, aik khaas baat aapki urdu par pakad kaafi acchi hai, agar aap urdu word ke matlab na batate to bahut mushkil tha har sher samjna...shukriya aapne es baat ka khayal rakha aur matlab saath saath bataye.

aap ka bahot bahot shukriya, didi

urdu toh bas shayri likhte likhte aa jaati hai

duaaoN ke saath.....



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23rd April 2015, 03:46 PM

Bahut khoob ghazal adeil jiii
bahut sari daad aur mubarak baad is behtareen ghazal par.



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Bahut khoob ghazal adeil jiii
bahut sari daad aur mubarak baad is behtareen ghazal par.
aapka dilse shukriya adaa karnaa chahunga, Madhuji

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14th May 2015, 10:28 AM

Wah wah

Adeil ji jab bhi Apko padti hun kisi aur era mein chali jaati hun.

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki Aapka shayad koi Janm Ghalib ke yaa Amir khusro ke zamaane mein hua hoga....

Apki bhasha par pakad Bohut mazboot hai.

Bohut khoob.


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14th May 2015, 10:32 AM

pila pila tu baDe shauq se pila saaqi
tere hi dast-e-musarrat se ho azaab gire


waah waaah ... ! Kia kehny Adil bhai ..

roz-ba-roz aap ka kalaam bohat hii mazboot hota ja raha hy ...

teh-e-dil se daad qabool kejiye is dil-fareb ghazal ky liye


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Aadil bhai...kya baat hai....bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....naacheez kee daad kubul karein....



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Wah wah

Adeil ji jab bhi Apko padti hun kisi aur era mein chali jaati hun.

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki Aapka shayad koi Janm Ghalib ke yaa Amir khusro ke zamaane mein hua hoga....

Apki bhasha par pakad Bohut mazboot hai.

Bohut khoob.
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pila pila tu baDe shauq se pila saaqi
tere hi dast-e-musarrat se ho azaab gire


waah waaah ... ! Kia kehny Adil bhai ..

roz-ba-roz aap ka kalaam bohat hii mazboot hota ja raha hy ...

teh-e-dil se daad qabool kejiye is dil-fareb ghazal ky liye
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Aadil bhai...kya baat hai....bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....naacheez kee daad kubul karein....
Sarikaji, Hassanbhai aur Arvindji,

avval to der se sirkat karne ke liye muaafi chahunga...


aap sabhi ka behad shukr guzaar hu. aap sabhi kii iis qadr hausla afzaai aur muhabbat hi hame yahaaN khinch laati hai.

hamaari jaanib se dher saari duaaeN...



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shabaab chhalke kahii.n aur kahii.n sharaab gire
kahii.n bhii abr na chhaae yahaa.n naqaab gire

pila pila tu baDe shauq se pila saaqi
tere hi dast-e-musarrat1 se ho azaab2 gire

the tund-KHuu3 ki terii mai-e-tund4 kaa tha asar
jo ho so aaj magar aake tere baab5 gire

jalii hai shamma ki saaqi zaraa tu pardaa giraa
kahii.n se baad chale abr-diid6 jo aab gire

ye jaam-e-zahr7 sa behtaa “Safiir” kaa dil aur
lahuu ke aa.nkh se qatre bhii be-hisaab gire

------------ X ------------

शबाब छलके कहीं और कहीं शराब गिरे
कहीं भी अब्र न छाए यहां नक़ाब गिरे

पिला पिला तू बड़े शौक़ से पिला साक़ी
तेरे ही दस्त-ए-मुसर्रत1 से हो अज़ाब2 गिरे

थे तुंद-ख़ू3 कि तेरी मय-ए-तुंद4 का था असर
जो हो सो आज मगर आके तेरे बाब5 गिरे

जली है शम्मा कि साक़ी ज़रा तू पर्दा गिरा
कहीं से बाद चले अब्र-दीद6 जो आब गिरे

ये जाम-ए-ज़हर7 सा बहता “सफ़ीर” का दिल और
लहू के आँख से क़तरे भी बेहिसाब गिरे

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شباب چھلکے کہیں اور کہیں شراب گرے
کہیں بھی ابر نہ چھے یہاں نقاب گرے

پلا پلا تو بدی شوق سے پلا ساقی
تیرے ہی دست ا مسرّت سے ہو عذاب گرے

تھے تند خو کی تری مے ا تند کا تھا اثر
جو ہو سو آج مگر آکے تیرے باب گرے

جلی ہے شمّ کی ساقی ذرہ تو پردہ گرا
کہیں سے بعد چلے ابر دید جو اب گرے

یہ جام ا زہر سا بہتا "سفیر" کا دل اور
لہو کے آنکھ سے قطرے بھی بحساب گرے

== == == == == == ==

1 Hand of joy
2 punishment / torment
3 passionate
4 strong wine
5 door
6 cloudy eyes/tearful eyes
7 goblet of poison

bahut khoob Aadeil bhai har ashar lajwaad
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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bahut khoob Aadeil bhai har ashar lajwaad
likhte rahen
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bahot bahot shukriya, Ishqji

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shabaab chhalke kahii.n aur kahii.n sharaab gire
kahii.n bhii abr na chhaae yahaa.n naqaab gire

pila pila tu baDe shauq se pila saaqi
tere hi dast-e-musarrat1 se ho azaab2 gire

the tund-KHuu3 ki terii mai-e-tund4 kaa tha asar
jo ho so aaj magar aake tere baab5 gire

jalii hai shamma ki saaqi zaraa tu pardaa giraa
kahii.n se baad chale abr-diid6 jo aab gire

ye jaam-e-zahr7 sa behtaa “Safiir” kaa dil aur
lahuu ke aa.nkh se qatre bhii be-hisaab gire

------------ X ------------

शबाब छलके कहीं और कहीं शराब गिरे
कहीं भी अब्र न छाए यहां नक़ाब गिरे

पिला पिला तू बड़े शौक़ से पिला साक़ी
तेरे ही दस्त-ए-मुसर्रत1 से हो अज़ाब2 गिरे

थे तुंद-ख़ू3 कि तेरी मय-ए-तुंद4 का था असर
जो हो सो आज मगर आके तेरे बाब5 गिरे

जली है शम्मा कि साक़ी ज़रा तू पर्दा गिरा
कहीं से बाद चले अब्र-दीद6 जो आब गिरे

ये जाम-ए-ज़हर7 सा बहता “सफ़ीर” का दिल और
लहू के आँख से क़तरे भी बेहिसाब गिरे

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شباب چھلکے کہیں اور کہیں شراب گرے
کہیں بھی ابر نہ چھے یہاں نقاب گرے

پلا پلا تو بدی شوق سے پلا ساقی
تیرے ہی دست ا مسرّت سے ہو عذاب گرے

تھے تند خو کی تری مے ا تند کا تھا اثر
جو ہو سو آج مگر آکے تیرے باب گرے

جلی ہے شمّ کی ساقی ذرہ تو پردہ گرا
کہیں سے بعد چلے ابر دید جو اب گرے

یہ جام ا زہر سا بہتا "سفیر" کا دل اور
لہو کے آنکھ سے قطرے بھی بحساب گرے

== == == == == == ==

1 Hand of joy
2 punishment / torment
3 passionate
4 strong wine
5 door
6 cloudy eyes/tearful eyes
7 goblet of poison


waahhh miyaan waahhh ye ghazal nahi Qatal hai qatal...... pur sukoon, pur khuoos, khumaari me dooboii huii ghazal jaise shaayar ne ghazal ko hi sharaab me bhigo diyaa ho........ nayaab sar se paaa talak.. aafreen....

tahe dil se daad pesh hain mere bhai... tashreeef laate rahiyegaa.... likhte rahiye

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20th August 2015, 02:54 PM

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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' View Post
waahhh miyaan waahhh ye ghazal nahi Qatal hai qatal...... pur sukoon, pur khuoos, khumaari me dooboii huii ghazal jaise shaayar ne ghazal ko hi sharaab me bhigo diyaa ho........ nayaab sar se paaa talak.. aafreen....

tahe dil se daad pesh hain mere bhai... tashreeef laate rahiyegaa.... likhte rahiye

Shaad.......
aapka behad musquur-o-mamnoon huu, Shoaibbhai... der se aane ke liye muaafi ka arzmand huu....



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