Yeh ghazal nahiiN hai Zeba ji, kyooN ki is ka koii 'radeef, aur kaafiyaa" nahiiN hai jo ek jaisa hi rahe -- to isko bas yeh ek sher ka collection hai..
LEKIN, maine yeh to nahiiN kaha ki aapne acha nahiiN likha
Bahot khoob likha hai aapne, aur chauNkne waali baat hai ki 'paaNchvi' (5th) class meiN yeh 'sher' likhe the
Likhte rahiye,
Aman
"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"
Zeba jee aman jee jitni knowledge aur talent to nahi hai humne lekin itna jaroor keh sakte hai ke jo 5th grade mein itni imagination kar sakta hai..he has to be someone special..
aapko hamara salaam
kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
wah! kya likha hai aapne.mujhe to shabd nahi mil rahe tareef ke liye.aur aapne to 5th grade mein likha hai ye to aur bhi achi baat hai.itni choti si umar mein aapne itni badi cheez bol di.ye to bahut hi achi baat hai.i hope u keep writing these kind os shers and ghazals more.
luv
janki
Dard agar mujhe chhu na sake....to samjho woh jee na sake...
shukria bohot bohot
Mai aap logon ki batoon se bohot inspire ho rahi hoon.
ghayalparwana sahab ,dil karishta sahab aur bijli ji aap sab logon ki housla afzai ka mai shukaria ada karti hoon.
phool abhi hai baki mere daman mai bas ,chunne wala chahiye
Nagme aur bhi hai mere paas sunane ko,sunne wala chahiye.