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kaash duniya na hoti - 20th January 2003, 08:48 AM

kaash duniya na hoti,zindagani na hoti......
hum aadmi na hote ,to gam ki kahaani na hoti.....

who to thoda sa dard seh gaye,
baki ki saza hum bhogat te reh gaye,

kash adam ne hawa ki ,baat mani na hoti....
hum aadmi na hote ,to gam ki kahaani na hoti....

hum bhi aasmaan pe khel rahe hote,
yu na gham duniya ke jhel rahe hote,

yeh bachpan ,yeh budhapa aur jawani na hoti....
hum aadmi na hote ,to gam ki kahaani na hoti....


bhaiyoun aur behnoo
please do reply me yeh kaisi lagi meri gazal.yeh gazal meri pehli gazal thi jo maine 5th grade (school) mai likhi thi.

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20th January 2003, 09:11 AM

Sorry.. jaise pehle likha tha, kal pii hui thi =\
Aapne bahot acha likha hai, sach meiN yeh pasand aayi!

Likhte rahiye,
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te bibba saada dil moD de..!"


kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..

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omg - 20th January 2003, 08:46 PM

baap re baap ,
theek hai-theek hai bhai, baat samjah mai aagayi hai...

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thanks - 20th January 2003, 11:12 PM

Thank you Aman

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