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Dil ki baat dil se kab chhup paati hai... -
20th June 2015, 08:00 PM
Doston,
Mann me kucch khayal aaye aur arse baad unhe kaagaz par utaarne ki koshish ki hai. Kucch khayaal aise hote hain doston jo har forum ke liye nahin bane to please ise Facebook page yaa kisi aur forum me mujhe tag karke naa share karen  Mere ehsaas maine yun hi bayaan kiye hain to inhe technically judge naa karen kyunki main kacche pakke alfaazon me bass likh deta hoon mann ki baat. Poocha maine dil se kyaa baat tujhe sataati hai, Sab to hai, dekh honthon pe hansi bhi khilkhilati hai Dil bolaa sab hokar bhi tab kami si nazar aati hai, Yaad jab kisi khaas ki mujhko aa sataati hai Yaad woh aisi hai jo barson me dhundli naa huwi Adhoora kucch hone ka ehsaas mujhe dilaati hai Woh jo naa hokar bhi rehte hain mere kareeb Nami un palkon ki de dhadkan meri badhaati hai Tum kya sochte ho Pulkit ke aansoo sukha lene se Har baat dil ki dabkar dil me hi reh jaati hai Muskuraakar tum zamaane se to chhupa loge qissa-e-gham Par bhala dil se kab dil ki baat koi chhup paati hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th June 2015, 09:58 PM
Waah, Bahut khoob, ChoTe Bhaiya...!
Vaakai bahut accha likhaa hai tumne, ehsaas aur bayaaN behad acche lage...! Apna khayaal theek tarha se rakhaa karna,ok...! Aashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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20th June 2015, 10:20 PM
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Bahut khoob ehsaas bayaan huye hain...pulkit ji... Daad qubool kijiyega... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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21st June 2015, 06:04 AM
Pulkit, you have written so so good..obviously u had to since u have taken classes from me
Too good to read you. Shukriya khayal rakhiye apna. |
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21st June 2015, 10:54 AM
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waaahhh pulkit bhaiyaa kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne....... dil se likhe kalaam ko meraa dil se salaam pesh hai... likhte rahiye.. aate rahiye Tum kya sochte ho Pulkit ke aansoo sukha lene se Har baat dil ki dabkar dil me hi reh jaati hai bahut khoob...... Shaad..... |
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22nd June 2015, 02:02 PM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd June 2015, 04:43 PM
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Dear Pulkit.......................bahut kuch hai es shayri meiN padne ko aur samjane ko...aapne ehsaasoN ko ba-khoobi bayaan kiya hai, aapke Mann ki baat hamare mann tak pahunchi. apna khayal rakhe pyar aur duaoN ke saath dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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23rd June 2015, 06:47 AM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd June 2015, 12:02 PM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd June 2015, 12:44 PM
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pulkit bohut hi khubsoorat ehsaas hain. dil ko choo gaye. Sarika |
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23rd June 2015, 08:59 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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23rd June 2015, 09:47 PM
Pulkit bhaiya
Namaste Kaise hain aap.... aapki koshish dil ko chhu gayiin... ehsaas seedhe dil mein utar gaye... dil se daad Aapka Dhaval |
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24th June 2015, 10:51 AM
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Tumhe dil ki baat pasand aayi jaankar accha laga... Yunhi haunsla badhate raho aur apna khayal rakho. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th June 2015, 10:53 AM
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24th June 2015, 10:55 AM
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Apna khayal rakhiye, take great care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th June 2015, 10:57 AM
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Bhai, Hum log is tarah se judhe hain ke ehsaas to aapko pasand aane hi thhe... aapko koshish bhi acchi lagi aur aur bhi khushi huwi... aap yunhi haunsla badhate raho, main koshish karta rahoonga Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th June 2015, 10:59 AM
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Main bilkul thheek hoon aur aasha hai tum bhi acche se hoge... Tumhe koshish acchi lagi, mujhe jaankar khushi huwi... aise hi saath dete raho aur apna acche se khayal rakho. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th June 2015, 03:36 PM
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wah............. likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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24th June 2015, 08:17 PM
Par bhala dil se kab dil ki baat koi chhup paati hai
Waaaah Pulkit MiyaN kya khayal bandha hai ..... Ye jo dil ka dil se naata hai sadiyoN sa purana hai lekin , aaj bhi ye dil bharmata hai , bar bar sapne ye sajata hai. YuN hi likhte rahiye aur naye 2 khayal share karte rahiye .. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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25th June 2015, 10:45 AM
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yunhi saath dete rahiye!Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th June 2015, 10:48 AM
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Yun hi haunsla badhate rahiye, apna khayal rahiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th June 2015, 11:09 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaahh.... maazi ky kisi jharoke se nilkle yeh ehsaas .. dil tak aa poohnche... bohat khoob.. andaaz-e-bayaaN bhii.. ehsaas-e-bayaaN bhii.. likhte rahiye.. salamat rahiye .. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th June 2015, 02:56 PM
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Waise he saada, saral shabdoN meiN zindagi ka falsafa bakhuubi bayaan kiya hai. Dil se daad. Bohot khuub. Aur achha lag raha hai aapko regular dekh kar. Aaate rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiye. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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25th June 2015, 03:06 PM
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Tum itna dil se saraahte ho ke tumhaare reply ka intezaar rehta hai Tumhe ehsaas aur bayaan pasand aaye jaankar khushi huwi... apna khayal rakho, yunhi haunsla badhate raho!Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th June 2015, 03:10 PM
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Falsafa kehlo yaa aapbeeti, mujhse shayri banaayi nahin jaati... mann ke ehsaas bayaan karne ki koshish rehti hai.. Aap aise hi haunsla badhaiye, hum koshish zaari rakhenge! Apna khayal rakhiye! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th June 2015, 11:46 PM
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kaise ho aap... aap ko aaj bahut dino baad padha..bahut achchha likhe ho aap..daad qubul Karen.. sach man ko bahut tasalli huyi ki bhaayi hamare usi rang mein hain.. aur aapko yaad dila du aaj meri marriage anniversary bhi hai.. so aapki bahut yaad aayi... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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26th June 2015, 12:41 PM
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Aapko yahaan dekhkar bahut khushi huwi... Main acha hoon aur ummeed hai aap bhi acche honge. Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, jaankar bahut accha laga. Aap logon ko padh padh kar tedha medha likhna seekh gaya hoon Wishing you and bhabhi a very happy anniversary. Humesha khush rahiye aur yunhi saath dete rahiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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26th June 2015, 10:59 PM
Good one Pulkit
Bahut dinon baad tumhara likha padha.Bahut khushi hui.Keep up the good work. |
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27th June 2015, 05:40 AM
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Kaisi hain aap?? Zamaane baad aapka message dekha aur bahut accha laga. Aapko aashar pasand aayr khushi huwi... Yun hi aati rahiye, apna khayal rakhiyega. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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