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aham - 3rd May 2003, 10:16 PM

Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
   
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Re: aham - 11th October 2005, 12:52 PM

komal...
aapne waat kari hati ae kavita...

jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

urmi ma moja jai bhatkaay
mahel ni charae deewale
hoi bharti toi sadaay
bhinjaya vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
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Re: aham - 11th October 2005, 12:59 PM

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Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?

dd gujrati mujhe aati nahi isiliye doosri wali samajh ke bahar hai.par doosri wali bahut hi khoobsurat hai.bahut hi aasani aur khoobsurati ke saath aapne apne khayalat aur zindagi ke prati naraazgi dikha di itne aasan shabdon me.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

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11th October 2005, 01:00 PM

woww...meena didi this was amazin....
especially loved this one

Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?

this was wonderful
once again a very nice post
keep writin
takecare didi


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Re: Re: aham - 11th October 2005, 01:07 PM

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dd gujrati mujhe aati nahi isiliye doosri wali samajh ke bahar hai.par doosri wali bahut hi khoobsurat hai.bahut hi aasani aur khoobsurati ke saath aapne apne khayalat aur zindagi ke prati naraazgi dikha di itne aasan shabdon me.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

aapka LUCKY

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11th October 2005, 01:12 PM

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woww...meena didi this was amazin....
especially loved this one

Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?

this was wonderful
once again a very nice post
keep writin
takecare didi

karthik,

haan kai baar yahi hota hai... nazar jaroor milti hai par milan nahi ho pata... khaas kar jab bhavna or sahuliyat ke bich sahi pramaan na ho...

meri rachna pasand karne k liye shukria....... kai saal pahlay likhi hai yah... par aaj bhi mere ahesaas is rachna ko nakaar nahi paate

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hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

i luved this

sathe hoyeiye chataaY sathe n rehvaye evu pan hoy che..
sathe hoyiye pan ene sath n kehvaaye..Evu pan hoye che!

thts life..
bahuj fine che di...
a fact of life.

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hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

i luved this

sathe hoyeiye chataaY sathe n rehvaye evu pan hoy che..
sathe hoyiye pan ene sath n kehvaaye..Evu pan hoye che!

thts life..
bahuj fine che di...
a fact of life.

tc
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priy komal,

ha ... jivan ni sachhai j chhe aa.. kyaan k ne kyaak aa nazar aawi j jaay chhe...

ek aevu dard ... je darek swaash ma oobharya kare chhe...

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11th October 2005, 09:01 PM

Dearest Meena di,

As always, reading you in gujarati is my great feeling... as usual best expression... loved it...

be happy, always & take care!

   
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Meena Ji!!

Ek beeja taraf ketliye lagni-bhavnaa hoy chataye... ek beejathi bahuj duur duur... Kamal ni rachna chey!!

jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

Sharuaat ketli bhavuk chey aney ant pan:

tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

aavu saras taemy lakhi shako, prasansha ney patra chey!!
Vahal sahit,
Rajan!


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komal...
aapne waat kari hati ae kavita...

jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

urmi ma moja jai bhatkaay
mahel ni charae deewale
hoi bharti toi sadaay
bhinjaya vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
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Dearest Meena di,

As always, reading you in gujarati is my great feeling... as usual best expression... loved it...

be happy, always & take care!

priy parul,

aabhar...

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Meena Ji!!

Ek beeja taraf ketliye lagni-bhavnaa hoy chataye... ek beejathi bahuj duur duur... Kamal ni rachna chey!!

jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

Sharuaat ketli bhavuk chey aney ant pan:

tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

aavu saras taemy lakhi shako, prasansha ney patra chey!!
Vahal sahit,
Rajan!

bhai rajan,

aabhar.......

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meena dost

dosti aur sachchaayee ka choli daaman ka saath hai.
aur in dono jazboan ke saath meena ka bhi choli daaman ka saath hai.
bohat khoob aur khoobsurat andaaz e bayaan hai meena.
meri bharpoor daad qabool karo.
tum kisi bhi zubaan mein likho, kisi bhi beher mein likho, tumhari sachchaayee aur ikhlaas "azher-menus-shams" hai.
bohat bohat mubarakbaad qabool karo apni is khoobsurat nazm ke liye.
meri dua hai hamesha isi tarah khoobsurat jazbe yahaan bekherti raho, aur mohabbatein samet-ti raho.

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meena dost

dosti aur sachchaayee ka choli daaman ka saath hai.
aur in dono jazboan ke saath meena ka bhi choli daaman ka saath hai.
bohat khoob aur khoobsurat andaaz e bayaan hai meena.
meri bharpoor daad qabool karo.
tum kisi bhi zubaan mein likho, kisi bhi beher mein likho, tumhari sachchaayee aur ikhlaas "azher-menus-shams" hai.
bohat bohat mubarakbaad qabool karo apni is khoobsurat nazm ke liye.
meri dua hai hamesha isi tarah khoobsurat jazbe yahaan bekherti raho, aur mohabbatein samet-ti raho.

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aapka bahut shukria... jo aapne meri rachna ko saraha....
aap apna khayal rakhiyega

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Re: aham - 16th November 2005, 07:27 PM

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Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
diii... sawaal.. aur shayad har sawaal ka jawaab bhi hai... na jaante huye bhi"hum dno" kitna jaante hain ek doosre ke baare me... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... ek lay si banti gayi.. ho sakta hai ye gujraati me hi jaada khoobsoorat lagta ho.. but diii.. of course mujhe hindi ne hi jaada prabhaavit kiya... kabhi seekh paayi to shayad jarur gujraati ki khoobsoorti ko bhi mehsoos kar saku
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Re: aham - 16th November 2005, 07:30 PM

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Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?

Maa kitana dard.. saath hokar bhi saath na rahe to ...

aapne dard ko achhe se vyakt kiya hai.. aur kya kahoon

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Re: Re: aham - 17th November 2005, 02:19 PM

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diii... sawaal.. aur shayad har sawaal ka jawaab bhi hai... na jaante huye bhi"hum dno" kitna jaante hain ek doosre ke baare me... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... ek lay si banti gayi.. ho sakta hai ye gujraati me hi jaada khoobsoorat lagta ho.. but diii.. of course mujhe hindi ne hi jaada prabhaavit kiya... kabhi seekh paayi to shayad jarur gujraati ki khoobsoorti ko bhi mehsoos kar saku
khayaal rakhna apna dii
aapki pallo

priy pallavi,

haan muje is kavita mai jaroor mahsoos huaa hai k gujrati mai yah jyada achhi bani hai..
fir bhi hindi mai aap tak is kavita k bhav pahuncha paayi hu iski khushi hai.

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Re: Re: aham - 17th November 2005, 02:20 PM

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Maa kitana dard.. saath hokar bhi saath na rahe to ...

aapne dard ko achhe se vyakt kiya hai.. aur kya kahoon

aapki laadli

priy garima,

haan ... sath ho kar bhi sath n hona ... yah dard ki shayed had nahi ..

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wah meena ji aaj tamane me paheli waar wachya ane wachi ne ghanoj aanand pamyo chu samjo ne ke maaru man gad gad thai gayu tamari aa gazal mathi mane aa pankti wadhu gami che

hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne

really aati uutam lakhiyu che tame
ghani sadgi thi tame tamara under chupayela vichar ne bahar sudhi lavi ne kalam na toc dwara je kagad par uutarya che te kala lage che ke tamane khuda e bhet ma aapi che eem nahi maan ta ke aa nihar fakt tarif na pool bandhi rahiyo che

mane je man ma aaviyu che tej kahiyu che aane mara mate aa haqikat che

tamne fari waar vachwa mate intazar karto

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