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3rd May 2003, 10:16 PM
Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
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11th October 2005, 12:52 PM
komal...
aapne waat kari hati ae kavita...
jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
urmi ma moja jai bhatkaay
mahel ni charae deewale
hoi bharti toi sadaay
bhinjaya vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
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Re: aham -
11th October 2005, 12:59 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
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dd gujrati mujhe aati nahi isiliye doosri wali samajh ke bahar hai.par doosri wali bahut hi khoobsurat hai.bahut hi aasani aur khoobsurati ke saath aapne apne khayalat aur zindagi ke prati naraazgi dikha di itne aasan shabdon me.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.
aapka LUCKY
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11th October 2005, 01:00 PM
woww...meena didi this was amazin....
especially loved this one
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
this was wonderful
once again a very nice post
keep writin
takecare didi
Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...
Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun
I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
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11th October 2005, 01:07 PM
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dd gujrati mujhe aati nahi isiliye doosri wali samajh ke bahar hai.par doosri wali bahut hi khoobsurat hai.bahut hi aasani aur khoobsurati ke saath aapne apne khayalat aur zindagi ke prati naraazgi dikha di itne aasan shabdon me.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.
aapka LUCKY
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lucky
darasal yah kavita maine gujarati mai hi likhi hai ... hindi to sirf ooska anuwaad hai... jo itna achha ban bhi nahi paaya hai.. fir bhi tumne is rachna mai jhalkte mere khayal ko samja or oose saraha... is ke liye shukria.
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11th October 2005, 01:12 PM
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Originally posted by karthik
woww...meena didi this was amazin....
especially loved this one
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
this was wonderful
once again a very nice post
keep writin
takecare didi
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karthik,
haan kai baar yahi hota hai... nazar jaroor milti hai par milan nahi ho pata... khaas kar jab bhavna or sahuliyat ke bich sahi pramaan na ho...
meri rachna pasand karne k liye shukria....... kai saal pahlay likhi hai yah... par aaj bhi mere ahesaas is rachna ko nakaar nahi paate
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11th October 2005, 01:15 PM
hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
i luved this
sathe hoyeiye chataaY sathe n rehvaye evu pan hoy che..
sathe hoyiye pan ene sath n kehvaaye..Evu pan hoye che!
thts life..
bahuj fine che di...
a fact of life.
tc
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11th October 2005, 01:20 PM
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hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
i luved this
sathe hoyeiye chataaY sathe n rehvaye evu pan hoy che..
sathe hoyiye pan ene sath n kehvaaye..Evu pan hoye che!
thts life..
bahuj fine che di...
a fact of life.
tc
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priy komal,
ha ... jivan ni sachhai j chhe aa.. kyaan k ne kyaak aa nazar aawi j jaay chhe...
ek aevu dard ... je darek swaash ma oobharya kare chhe...
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11th October 2005, 09:01 PM
Dearest Meena di,
As always, reading you in gujarati is my great feeling... as usual best expression... loved it...
be happy, always & take care!
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11th October 2005, 11:50 PM
Meena Ji!!
Ek beeja taraf ketliye lagni-bhavnaa hoy chataye... ek beejathi bahuj duur duur... Kamal ni rachna chey!!
jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
Sharuaat ketli bhavuk chey aney ant pan:
tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
aavu saras taemy lakhi shako, prasansha ney patra chey!!
Vahal sahit,
Rajan!
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Re: Re: aham -
11th November 2005, 11:44 AM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
komal...
aapne waat kari hati ae kavita...
jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
urmi ma moja jai bhatkaay
mahel ni charae deewale
hoi bharti toi sadaay
bhinjaya vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
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16th November 2005, 08:03 AM
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Dearest Meena di,
As always, reading you in gujarati is my great feeling... as usual best expression... loved it...
be happy, always & take care!
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priy parul,
aabhar...
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Meena Ji!!
Ek beeja taraf ketliye lagni-bhavnaa hoy chataye... ek beejathi bahuj duur duur... Kamal ni rachna chey!!
jivan hoi vasant, toi sadaay
tahuka vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
Sharuaat ketli bhavuk chey aney ant pan:
tarta aawde toi n aawu kinare
n tu hodi lai aawe majdhaar
prem ichhiye toi sadaay
aham sathe na kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
aavu saras taemy lakhi shako, prasansha ney patra chey!!
Vahal sahit,
Rajan!
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bhai rajan,
aabhar.......
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16th November 2005, 11:13 AM
meena dost
dosti aur sachchaayee ka choli daaman ka saath hai.
aur in dono jazboan ke saath meena ka bhi choli daaman ka saath hai.
bohat khoob aur khoobsurat andaaz e bayaan hai meena.
meri bharpoor daad qabool karo.
tum kisi bhi zubaan mein likho, kisi bhi beher mein likho, tumhari sachchaayee aur ikhlaas "azher-menus-shams" hai.
bohat bohat mubarakbaad qabool karo apni is khoobsurat nazm ke liye.
meri dua hai hamesha isi tarah khoobsurat jazbe yahaan bekherti raho, aur mohabbatein samet-ti raho.
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16th November 2005, 07:08 PM
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meena dost
dosti aur sachchaayee ka choli daaman ka saath hai.
aur in dono jazboan ke saath meena ka bhi choli daaman ka saath hai.
bohat khoob aur khoobsurat andaaz e bayaan hai meena.
meri bharpoor daad qabool karo.
tum kisi bhi zubaan mein likho, kisi bhi beher mein likho, tumhari sachchaayee aur ikhlaas "azher-menus-shams" hai.
bohat bohat mubarakbaad qabool karo apni is khoobsurat nazm ke liye.
meri dua hai hamesha isi tarah khoobsurat jazbe yahaan bekherti raho, aur mohabbatein samet-ti raho.
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mere mushi dost,
aapka bahut shukria... jo aapne meri rachna ko saraha....
aap apna khayal rakhiyega
aapki dost meena
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16th November 2005, 07:27 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
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diii... sawaal.. aur shayad har sawaal ka jawaab bhi hai... na jaante huye bhi"hum dno" kitna jaante hain ek doosre ke baare me... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... ek lay si banti gayi.. ho sakta hai ye gujraati me hi jaada khoobsoorat lagta ho.. but diii.. of course mujhe hindi ne hi jaada prabhaavit kiya... kabhi seekh paayi to shayad jarur gujraati ki khoobsoorti ko bhi mehsoos kar saku
khayaal rakhna apna dii
aapki pallo
Pallavi...
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Re: aham -
16th November 2005, 07:30 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
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Maa kitana dard.. saath hokar bhi saath na rahe to ...
aapne dard ko achhe se vyakt kiya hai.. aur kya kahoon
aapki laadli
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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17th November 2005, 02:19 PM
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diii... sawaal.. aur shayad har sawaal ka jawaab bhi hai... na jaante huye bhi"hum dno" kitna jaante hain ek doosre ke baare me... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... ek lay si banti gayi.. ho sakta hai ye gujraati me hi jaada khoobsoorat lagta ho.. but diii.. of course mujhe hindi ne hi jaada prabhaavit kiya... kabhi seekh paayi to shayad jarur gujraati ki khoobsoorti ko bhi mehsoos kar saku
khayaal rakhna apna dii
aapki pallo
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priy pallavi,
haan muje is kavita mai jaroor mahsoos huaa hai k gujrati mai yah jyada achhi bani hai..
fir bhi hindi mai aap tak is kavita k bhav pahuncha paayi hu iski khushi hai.
tc
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17th November 2005, 02:20 PM
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Maa kitana dard.. saath hokar bhi saath na rahe to ...
aapne dard ko achhe se vyakt kiya hai.. aur kya kahoon
aapki laadli
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priy garima,
haan ... sath ho kar bhi sath n hona ... yah dard ki shayed had nahi ..
maa
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31st October 2007, 05:01 PM
wah meena ji aaj tamane me paheli waar wachya ane wachi ne ghanoj aanand pamyo chu samjo ne ke maaru man gad gad thai gayu tamari aa gazal mathi mane aa pankti wadhu gami che
hu tanaau lagni na vahen ma
ne tu kinare sona na mahel ma
nazaru made toi sadaay
milan vinana kem aapne
sathhe rahiye toi sadaay
sang vinana kem aapne
really aati uutam lakhiyu che tame
ghani sadgi thi tame tamara under chupayela vichar ne bahar sudhi lavi ne kalam na toc dwara je kagad par uutarya che te kala lage che ke tamane khuda e bhet ma aapi che eem nahi maan ta ke aa nihar fakt tarif na pool bandhi rahiyo che
mane je man ma aaviyu che tej kahiyu che aane mara mate aa haqikat che
tamne fari waar vachwa mate intazar karto
nihar ( ek umeed)
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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