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zindgi raaz na aayi - 17th June 2003, 06:33 PM

zindgi raaz n aayi hamko ae dost
n ham kisi ke huae n koi hamara
Ab sawan ka mausam thhahar gaya hai
In aankhao maie....
N aansu bahtae hai n gilapan jaata hai
in palko par aansu ke toran
gilae hi rahenage tumhaare aane tak....
Tumhara intzaar rahega kayamat tak.
Fir bhi gar tum na aayae mere jivan maie
To sahra ki dhoop liyae chal padungi....
Zindgi raaz na aayi to maut ko aajmaungi
Jitae ji to koi rang n dekha ....
Maut kya rang dikhati hai ab wohi dekhungi.
   
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hello?????? - 17th June 2003, 07:13 PM

Mina bahuj saras lakhayi che
bhige bhige mausam main
samndar ki lehro ki tarah uchalo
maut ki batein na karo
tumhari udasi mera man ko chu jati hai


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thanx - 17th June 2003, 07:24 PM

mita,
bhige bhige mausam main
samndar ki lehro ki tarah uchalo
maut ki batein na karo
tumhari udasi mera man ko chu jati hai


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17th June 2003, 10:47 PM

Ab sawan ka mausam thhahar gaya hai
In aankhao maie....
N aansu bahtae hai n gilapan jaata hai

Wah wah ..in lafzon ne to jeet liya mujhe..

bahut khoob keh gaye aap meena ji..

bahut achha likha hai


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shukra gujaar hu tumhari - 17th June 2003, 10:58 PM

varinder dost,
tumhe jo labz pasand aaye... oonhe maine mahesoos kiya hai..... shayed is liyae hi woh khubsurat hai kyun ki oon maie sachaai hai, hai na?
   
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18th June 2003, 03:20 PM

namasteee.. meenaji..

wah.. kya khoob likha hai apne..bahut .. khoob.. ba hut.. hi umda likha hai aur kabile tareef hai .... wah....these lines...were gr8-->

Tumhara intzaar rahega kayamat tak.
Fir bhi gar tum na aayae mere jivan maie
To sahra ki dhoop liyae chal padungi....
Zindgi raaz na aayi to maut ko aajmaungi
Jitae ji to koi rang n dekha ....
Maut kya rang dikhati hai ab wohi dekhungi.

wah..bahut khoob... aise hi likhte rahiye..

bye n take care


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thanx - 18th June 2003, 08:46 PM

tanhaai dost,
tahae dil se shukriaa... aapko meri nazam pasand aayi.. hamesha salaah ki raah maie rahungi
   
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Re: zindgi raaz na aayi - 27th March 2006, 07:35 PM

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zindgi raaz n aayi hamko ae dost
n ham kisi ke huae n koi hamara
Ab sawan ka mausam thhahar gaya hai
In aankhao maie....
N aansu bahtae hai n gilapan jaata hai
in palko par aansu ke toran
gilae hi rahenage tumhaare aane tak....
Tumhara intzaar rahega kayamat tak.
Fir bhi gar tum na aayae mere jivan maie
To sahra ki dhoop liyae chal padungi....
Zindgi raaz na aayi to maut ko aajmaungi
Jitae ji to koi rang n dekha ....
Maut kya rang dikhati hai ab wohi dekhungi.
Namastey Meena Ji
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28th March 2006, 10:25 AM

meena dost

apne under ke akele pan ko, apni na-tamaam hasratoan ko, apni udaasi ko, apni mehroomi ko jitne khoobsurat andaaz mein bayaan kerti ho, aur jitne pur-asr tarique se apne parhne walon mein muntaqil kerti ho yeh tumhara hi kamal hai.
meri bharpoor daad qabool karo apni is khoobsurat nazm ke liye.
meri dua hai ke tumhari yeh nazm sirf tumhari nazm hi ho. aur meena yeh jo tumhare saath itna jamm-ghaffeer hai yeh sab tumhein tanha hone kab dein ge jo tum yeh sab soacho.

bas khush raho, muskurayo, yehi hamari dua hai aur yehi hamari tamanna. ke God tumhein her fikr , her bala se mehfooz rakhe aur tum khush raho.

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Re: zindgi raaz na aayi - 28th March 2006, 11:45 AM

Quote:
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zindgi raaz n aayi hamko ae dost
n ham kisi ke huae n koi hamara
Ab sawan ka mausam thhahar gaya hai
In aankhao maie....
N aansu bahtae hai n gilapan jaata hai
in palko par aansu ke toran
gilae hi rahenage tumhaare aane tak....
Tumhara intzaar rahega kayamat tak.
Fir bhi gar tum na aayae mere jivan maie
To sahra ki dhoop liyae chal padungi....
Zindgi raaz na aayi to maut ko aajmaungi
Jitae ji to koi rang n dekha ....
Maut kya rang dikhati hai ab wohi dekhungi.
bahut khoob meena aunty bahut accha likha hai


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13th November 2007, 02:25 PM

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zindgi raaz n aayi hamko ae dost
n ham kisi ke huae n koi hamara
Ab sawan ka mausam thhahar gaya hai
In aankhao maie....
N aansu bahtae hai n gilapan jaata hai
in palko par aansu ke toran
gilae hi rahenage tumhaare aane tak....
Tumhara intzaar rahega kayamat tak.
Fir bhi gar tum na aayae mere jivan maie
To sahra ki dhoop liyae chal padungi....
Zindgi raaz na aayi to maut ko aajmaungi
Jitae ji to koi rang n dekha ....
Maut kya rang dikhati hai ab wohi dekhungi.
bahut khoob diiii.........


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25th July 2014, 09:16 PM

wahhh! wahhh..! Meena jiii,,

Sache jazbooN se bharpoor aik mazboot kalam pesha kiya aap ne...

be-misaal...

Umeed hai aise hi mehfil roshan karti raheN gi,

DuaooN k saath,,


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