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Khud ko nashaad ker rahi hai.
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Love Khud ko nashaad ker rahi hai. - 14th October 2003, 12:46 AM

Koyal lagay kisi ko yaad ker rahi hai.
Milnay ki kisi say feryaad ker rahi hai.

Ghafil hai shayad mohabbat ki suchaee say.
Isi liye dil kisi say aabad ker rahi hai.

Qaid main to aik din bhi jee na sakay gee.
Apni aazadi khushi say berbaad ker rahi hai.

Sab hi ko sureeli see sergum suna ker.
Weeraniyoun ko dil say azaad ker rahi hai.

Kuch or to nahin bus shaiki yehi kahain gey.
Bey waja hi khud ko nashaad ker rahi hai.
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- - 14th October 2003, 12:58 AM

Hi shakeel ji,
Bahut achha likha hai aur kuch alag kism ka likha hai....lekin mujhe ek word ka meaning nahi samajh aaya...
"Ghafil hai" iska kya matlab hai....
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14th October 2003, 01:06 AM

Hi pari jee pehlay to shukriya us kay baad Ghafil ka matlab yeh hai kay nahin janti mohabbat key baray main(Anjaan hona kisi cheez say). ok apna khayaal rakhiye ga.

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14th October 2003, 01:06 AM

hi shakeel ji very nice bahut acha hai aur alag bhi.

are pari di
gafeel ka matlab i think anjaan hota hai rest i don't know
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Love hi - 14th October 2003, 02:31 AM

hi pernet jee shukriya pasandeedgi ka insaan apnay aas pass daykhay to kafi kuch hai likhney ko bus ehsas hona chahiye saath.

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14th October 2003, 03:41 AM

it's ok u welcome.don't say ji i am junior to u.haan apne sahi kaha hai likhne ke liye ehsaas chahiye.
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Bohot achha samajhte bhi hein aap, wah aapka bhi jawab nehi hein. Well said. Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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Re: Khud ko nashaad ker rahi hai. - 17th October 2003, 01:16 PM

koyaliya mat kar pukaar..
karejwa lage kataar...

begum akhtar ke gayi is geet ki yaad aa gayi aap ki gazal padh kar...hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi behtreen likha hai aapne.....hamari daad kubool kijiye...
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Namastay manoj jee.
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Love Namastay manoj jee. - 18th October 2003, 12:23 AM

Bohat shukriya pasandeedgi ka or meri hosla afzaee ka.
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Salam anas jee.
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Love Salam anas jee. - 18th October 2003, 12:26 AM

Shukriya ansa jee aap ko pasand aaya mera likha.

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Shukriya shimul jee pasandeedgi ka.

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