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tumhara naam -
22nd May 2004, 12:00 AM
samoondar kinaare tahalte huae...
n jaane muje kya maan huaa reat par likha ek naam .... aur ban gaya afsaana...... kinaare se aa kar jo takra gayi woh laher tumhara naam le gayi ab saraa samundar .... jaan gaya tumhara naam gaur se soonoge to jaanogae har mauj ki aawaj maie... paaogae tumhara naam. |
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22nd May 2004, 12:43 AM
Dear Meena, how sweet...Bohot achha laga. Waise mujhe yaad kiya hai keya? You know when you tell me you are going to take a walk by the sea I always wish I could be there...issliye! (I know it's not me, just kidding)...Aur keya aur keya aur keya...tum aaye tou haawaaon mein ek nasha hai.......gana yaad aa gaaya...
 Ek gana jo mujhe bohot achha lagta hai: hum teri yaadon mein khoyen rehte hai Log humein pagal deewana kehte hai Tere beena tere beena Tere beena na mumkin hai zindegi ka gujara sanam ho zindegi ka gujara sanam.......suna tou hai aapne bhi, Tere Naam film ki gana...Yunhi likhte rahiyega. Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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22nd May 2004, 04:14 AM
GOOD ONE.
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exellent -
22nd May 2004, 08:28 AM
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sawar sudhri gayi. good morning. |
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22nd May 2004, 10:24 AM
aaj koun nahi waqif muzse teri badoulat,
har lahar pe hai jo naam mera teri badoulat. it becomes more and more universal. |
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Bahut Khoob -
22nd May 2004, 11:51 AM
Kya baat hai Meena ji.....
ab saraa samundar .... jaan gaya tumhara naam gaur se soonoge to jaanogae har mauj ki aawaj maie... paaogae tumhara naam. Bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas haiN ye .......parhte hi nigaahoN ke aage drishya ban gaya....YooNhi likhte rahiyega... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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22nd May 2004, 12:16 PM
bhut accha , very good keep it up .
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22nd May 2004, 02:17 PM
are wah Meena!
Kya baat hai.. pata hai.. jab tum aise pyaar bhare kalaam likhti ho na, to bohat achha lagta hai.. tumme jazbaat lafzon me dhaalne ka jo hunar hai, wo waqai behtareen hai.. saahil par likhe hue naam aur lehron ke zariye tumne itni pyaari baat ki.. waise aksar log ret par likhe gaye naam, aur uske mitne ko dard bayaan karne ka zariya banaate hain.. aaj tumne usse mohabbat bayaan kar di.. bohat khoob!! Yunhi likha karo! |
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22nd May 2004, 03:40 PM
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haan shimul.... maie jab bhi samundar kinaare jaati hu... mere sabhi apno ki yaadon ka kafla bhi sathh liye jaati hu. gana jo tumne soonaya... muje bhi pasand hai. shukriaa meri rachna pasand karne ka tumhari meena |
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22nd May 2004, 03:42 PM
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aapka tahe dil se shukriaa jo aapne ise pasand kiya. |
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Re: exellent -
22nd May 2004, 03:47 PM
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tari sawaar sudhri gayi ne mari coffee...... lol |
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22nd May 2004, 03:49 PM
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hmmmmmm....... sar aankhon pe aapke ahesaas ..... |
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Re: Bahut Khoob -
22nd May 2004, 03:50 PM
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drishya...??? hmmmm shayed.... chitrakaar dost ki sangat ka asar hone laga hai...... jo hum bhi drasya khada kar paaye... tumhari meena |
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22nd May 2004, 03:52 PM
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aapki aabhari hu jo aapne is rachna ko pasand kiya. |
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22nd May 2004, 04:01 PM
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mere ahesaas ko is kadar samja tumne.... dil se shukriaa... haan sahi kaha tumne aksar lahar ko badnaam kiya gaya hai... reat par naam mitaane k liye... par kya hai na.... nazar maie ho pyaar to khayal bhi hasin ban jaate hai.... tumhari dost meena |
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gud -
22nd May 2004, 07:54 PM
hi meena
beautifull creation lovely.......khubaj inspiring hati..... aa kavita par thi tamara vicharo ne tamari rachna mein jani lidhi.....!!! koik var fursat thi vato karishu....!!! bye Sal!m.....!!! |
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22nd May 2004, 08:06 PM
Khayal ki khoobsurti, dil ki supurdgi, mahabbat ki shiddat, chahat ki hiddat aur sab se barh ker yeh ke alfaaz ka itna dilfareb istemaal, in sab cheezon ne mil ker meena aap ki is nazm ko behad khush kun aur bemisaal bana diya hai.
Mere liye ziayada khushi ki baat yeh hoti hai ke yeh takhleeq meri dost meena ki hai. Meri purkhaloos mubarakbaad qabool Karen meena itni achchi kaawish ke liye. Wishing you all the best musharrafhusain |
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Re: gud -
22nd May 2004, 08:22 PM
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mari rachna pasand karwa badal aapno aabhaar. |
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22nd May 2004, 08:24 PM
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aapki mubarakbaadi mere sar aankhon par. bahot bahot shukriaa. |
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hello -
24th May 2004, 05:47 PM
meena ji,
aap kaisi hain? aapki es rachana ko padh ke mujhe mumbay ka JUHU beach yaad aa gaya.. samunder ke kinare ki tarf mujhe berbas khich le gayi aapki kavita.. pyar ki upasthiti ka abhash ek naye andaj mein padhker achchha laga.. sachchi baar baar dil usi juhu beach ke pass chala ja raha hai aur lag raha hai ki aap vahi jaaker likhi hongi yah khubsurat si laharo ki mahak..ati sunder rachana..sukhi avang santust rahiye..duaao ke sath.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Re: hello -
24th May 2004, 10:44 PM
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maie achhi hu. ji bilkul tumne sahi socha hai..... meri yah rachna oosi samundar kinaare ki mahek le kar aayi hai.... meena |
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25th May 2004, 12:41 AM
Dera meenaji,
tame bahu sari rachna o karo cho, and gujarati pan saroo lakho cho. thanks for earlier reply. mini gujarat bhegu thayu hoy aavu lage che. pappu. |
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25th May 2004, 03:09 AM
bahut pyari si poem likhi aapne didi!!
bahut achi lagi... "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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25th May 2004, 08:50 AM
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khub aabhaar... fari ek waar. tame kahyu k gujrati pan saru lakho chho...... gujrati bahsha to mara praan chhae... je lakhi saku ae oochhu chahe. mini gujraat...... hhahaha jyaa wase ek gujrati tyaa sada kaal gujraat. barabar? khush raho. meena |
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25th May 2004, 08:52 AM
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meri priya, ty meri kavita ko pasand karne ke liyae. tumhari di |
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25th May 2004, 07:18 PM
Bahut khuub Meena jee
kinaare se aa kar jo takra gayi woh laher tumhara naam le gayi ab saraa samundar .... jaan gaya tumhara naam kya baat hai! Saara ka saara samundar jaan gaya...waah! bahut achha laga padh kar...sach...khush rahiye... aapki paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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26th May 2004, 10:35 AM
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khushi, woh bhi pyaar ki... kahaan chhupaaye chhupti hai? hum chup bhi rahe to humaari aankhe bol deti hai... ek laher ne kya jaana ... sara samundar jaan hi jaata hai..... meena |
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24th September 2015, 10:40 AM
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Meena diii....aapki 11 saal purani rachna par aaj nazar gye aur esko padkar bahut accha lga. aap kitne seedhe se lafzoN meiN apni baat keh gye...dii aap aaj-kal kuch likh kyu nahi rhi sdc par...hame aapki tazza rachna ka intejaar rhega. aapki apni .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th September 2015, 02:42 PM
bahut khoob meena jee.......................................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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24th September 2015, 03:37 PM
waah!!khoobsoorat ehsaas.........
aati rahiye di... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th September 2015, 08:52 AM
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Are! yaha aa kar muje bhi tumne mere hi ek samay se mila diya aisa lagta hai... bhul si gayi hu yah sab... ab likhti nahi hu is liye yaha post nahi karti... samay tham sa gaya hai.. likhungi to jaroor post karungi... Shukria aur khub pyar aashirwaad Didi Quote:
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25th September 2015, 09:05 AM
Aapne ise saraha... Shukriyaa
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25th September 2015, 09:07 AM
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Meena dii...aap likhne ki kohsish to kijiye, kalam apne aap chalne lagegi hame aapki tazza rachna ka intejaare rhega.regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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