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maie dharti tum aashmaan -
20th June 2004, 05:41 PM
Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ?
Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? Meri dhadkan ka saaj bhi tum ho Or mere kaano maie ghulti mishri si aawaj bhi tum ho.. fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Mere dil maie tum hi tum base ho Or dil kahta hai mujse Ab to tum hi mera dil ho fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Jab bhi aaine maie dekhti hu Saamne nazar aate tum ho Meri aankhe ro padti hai to.. Aanshu pite nazar aate tum ho fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Ji kare tumhara chehra mere hathh maie ho Yah ahesaas kyun karate nahi ho Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? |
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20th June 2004, 05:56 PM
Hmm.. AB hum bataate hain ki ye kaise hai...
Abr si khamosh hai.. Nirmal hai boondon si.. Dil hai apna sehra to.. Baat hai baarish uski.. Likh deti hai kaaghaz pe.. Pyaare bhare do meethe bol.. Ishq,Judaii mili hai isme, Dard mohabbat deti hai ghol... Mehfil me jaan uski badaulat, Mehek lehje me hai heena ki.. Wo kahe to kaun nahi sunta? Har baat hoti hai nazm Meena ki. Meena.. Tum is kism ki nazm, jisme aise pyaare jazbaat shaamil ho.. bohat hi kum likhti ho.. KASH aksar likha karti.. kyunki jab bhi likhti ho..baRa pyaara likhti ho.. Tum to bejhhijhhak jo mann kahe post kiya karo.. kyunki mann ki awaaz humesha sachhi aur khubsoora hoti hai.. khaaskas tuhaare mann ki aawaaz.. phir bhale hi wo khushi ka sur ho.. ya ghum ka saaz.. bas.. likhti raho..  |
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20th June 2004, 07:33 PM
hmmmmmmmmm
koi mujhe batayega ...ki yeh JAAN kaun hai .....haaannnnnnnnnnnnnnn ...... yeh sab kya ho raha hai .......... daaal mein kuch kala hai .....ya aaj puuri daal kali bani hai ....  koi to bataye hame yeh mazaara kya hai dil wil ki baatein chal rahi hai .... per dil ki dukaan kahan hai ....  jaldi jawab dijhiye pls .... aap ki nanu waise bahut romantic likhi hai yeh nazm .......waise shadi meri hui hai ...aur romantic aap ho rahe ho ....baat kya hai ji .... ha ha ha ha |
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20th June 2004, 08:09 PM
jaan maie tumse door kab hoon,
tum dharati maie aasmaan kab hoon. jiska ahsaas-e-wajood ho bas tumase, woh maie tumase door kan hoon. tumane mujhe aasmaan main dekha to aasmaan main paaya, warna maie tumase door kab hoon. tumane hi mujhako apane se door kiya aur phir kagaj par utaara, maie to khayaalon main hi khush tha maie tumase door kab hoon. jaan mein hi tum aur tum hi maie hoon, na tum dharati ho, na aasmaan maie hoon. tumhara ahsaas-e-wajood hoon maie tumse door kab hoon. it becomes more and more universal. |
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20th June 2004, 08:40 PM
Bhai jaan ..
ADaab Qabool kijiye Bade dinoN baad kitaab ka panna khula .. khair khula to yehi bahut hai magar ek raz ki baat to aapne batayi hi nahi .. Nahi baad me pochunga abhi nahi abhi to aap sirf tareef sambhaliye .. Take Care |
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21st June 2004, 12:49 PM
Meena ji.....ab kya kaheiN aapki is rachna par .....comment karna mushkil ho raha hai.....dekhiye na...dard ko bhi kitna romentic bana diya hai aapne.....itni KhooBsoorat shaikaayat....per to koi sorry bhi kya keh pata hoga...
Ek ghazal ke bol yaad aa geye... Bikhra pada hai tere hi ghar me tera wojood Bekaar mehfiloN me tujhe dhooNdta hooN mai... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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21st June 2004, 12:51 PM
Banno Hmm.. AB hum bataate hain ki ye kaise hai...
Abr si khamosh hai.. Nirmal hai boondon si.. Dil hai apna sehra to.. Baat hai baarish uski.. Likh deti hai kaaghaz pe.. Pyaare bhare do meethe bol.. Ishq,Judaii mili hai isme, Dard mohabbat deti hai ghol... Mehfil me jaan uski badaulat, Mehek lehje me hai heena ki.. Wo kahe to kaun nahi sunta? Har baat hoti hai nazm Meena ki. Bahut achchhe Banno ji...aap bhi kamaal haiN... Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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21st June 2004, 12:55 PM
Chand ji..
Thanks!  Lekin iska sehra to Meena ko jaata hai.. kalaam ki inspiration jo thi! |
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21st June 2004, 05:51 PM
Meena? Meri Meena ji?
hum bhi sunein yeh majra kya hai....... Ji kare tumhara chehra mere hathh maie ho Yah ahesaas kyun karate nahi ho Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho aaye haaye...main marr jawaan....! Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? hmmmn...bahut khoob likha hai...maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho..... ek chota sa sher aapki nazar...shevan bijnauri sahib ka... jhuum kar kaalii kaalii ghaTaa jab uThii raat apanii to karavaT badalate kaTii kuchh to mausam ne bechain rakkhaa hame.n kuchh teraa yaad aanaa Gazab ho gayaa yoonhi likhti rahiye...aapki paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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21st June 2004, 06:35 PM
meena dost
pyaar ki shiddat , mohabbat ki hiddat, dil ki lagan, man pasand sajan, khoobsurat izhaar, jab itna kuch ho to kalam to aasmaan ki bulandi ho , yaah sehrayon ki tangi ho, kitna hi faasla kyun na ho sab uboor ho jaayegaa, mein tumhen yaqeen dilaataa hoon ke itne khoobsurat izhaar ke baad koee insaan to kam az kam tum se duur naheen reh sakta. dost bohat khoobsurat nazm kahee hai tum ne go kaafi din ke baad kahi hai magar bohat hi khoob. meri duaayen bhi dost apne is izhaar mein shaamil karlo, naakaami ka sawaal hi naheen. All the best musharrafhusain |
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Bahut ache! -
21st June 2004, 09:33 PM
Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ?
Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? Meri dhadkan ka saaj bhi tum ho Or mere kaano maie ghulti mishri si aawaj bhi tum ho.. fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Mere dil maie tum hi tum base ho Or dil kahta hai mujse Ab to tum hi mera dil ho fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Jab bhi aaine maie dekhti hu Saamne nazar aate tum ho Meri aankhe ro padti hai to.. Aanshu pite nazar aate tum ho fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Ji kare tumhara chehra mere hathh maie ho Yah ahesaas kyun karate nahi ho Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? Didi... aapne to jaise meri kahaani likha daali... yeh main unhe zaroor padhaaongi! Bahut hi achi likhi hai aapne... vahi pyar ka ehsaas, vahi milne ki tadap, vahi choohne ki chaah.. vahi aankhon mein nami... bilkul jaise meri zindagi... Thankyou di! ~Pree "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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22nd June 2004, 12:19 AM
Meena ji..
Sahi jaa rah hai aap , forum ka hairaan hona laazmi hi tha..lol Badi hi behtreen nazm likhi aapne..Mujhe bhi apni jawani ka samah yaad aa gaya..Hamara bhi kabhi zamana hota tha romantic baate karne kaa, ab tau kher duniyadaari aur belton ke chakkar mein pad gaye hain..lol Aur Afshan ..wah tumne tau nazm ke jawaab mein nazm keh daali..shayad tumhe bhi ye nazm padkar apni JAWANI yaad aa gayi..lol Meri boodi haddion mein taakat hoti tau aap dono ki khidmat mein bahut kuchh likhta magar waqt ki nazakat ye tabiyat ye allow nahin karti.. Jeete raho.. |
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22nd June 2004, 12:40 PM
Oye Veeru!
Ab nazm hi itni pyaari thi..apne rang me gar koi rang mile to har shay aur bhi rangeen ho jaati hai.. and What do mean jawaani YAAD aa gayi?? Tum Brits ke saath reh reh kar waqt se pehle booRe ho gaye hoge.. Hum to mast doston ke saath reh kar forever young rahenge.. Haye, agar tum likhte to kya baat thi! Zara apni shayraana haddiyon par zara zor do.. aur kuchh arz kar hi do!.. |
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22nd June 2004, 03:05 PM
Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ?
Jab bhi aaine maie dekhti hu Saamne nazar aate tum ho Meri aankhe ro padti hai to.. Aanshu pite nazar aate tum ho fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Ji kare tumhara chehra mere hathh maie ho Yah ahesaas kyun karate nahi ho Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? di dil ko chhu gai ye bhi. laga dil ki awaaj ko sun apne ye baatein kah di hai. bhut hi sachi aur achi rachana dil ke kareeb sakhiiii with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Re: maie dharti tum aashmaan -
22nd June 2004, 05:11 PM
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Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho? Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho? Great...I Loved it...waise bhi aapko maine pm kardiya tha...aapne padha tou hai...anyway...Umeed karti houn aap theek honge. Dilki gehraion se shukriya kubool kijiyega...kyun ke aapne dilki baat jo kehdiya hai.......(As because you know) Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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23rd June 2004, 07:27 AM
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yaha reply karna nahi ban pa raha thha kyun ki ... tumne jo muje saraha hai.... ooska koi reply ho hi nahi sakta. shukria adaa karne ka to waise bhi hum dono ke bich chalaan nahi hai... hota tab bhi kar nahi paati...... waise bhi yah rachna ... tumhare kahne se yaha par hai... tumhara muje diya gaya hauslaa humesha yaad rahega. jitna bhi aaj kahu... kam pad rahe hai labz... meena. |
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23rd June 2004, 07:31 AM
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hahahahahahahahhaha meri nanuuu..... sabr karo....... jab tum apni beti ki shadi karogi tab tum bhi mahesoos kar logi.. lol par sirf romance ok... jis maie koi dard na ho.... humesha khush raho. tumhari diidiiii |
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23rd June 2004, 07:40 AM
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mitr, chalo aa bahane pan tamari rachna wanchwa madi...... meena |
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23rd June 2004, 07:50 AM
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nawaab, tumhari taarif sar aankho par.... meena |
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23rd June 2004, 07:57 AM
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haan.... ab socha ke dard to mujse pare hatne waala nahi to isi se pyaar kar lu. lol pyaar karna fitarat ban gayi hai. fir khushi ho ya ghum. Bikhra pada hai tere hi ghar me tera wojood Bekaar mehfiloN me tujhe dhooNdta hooN mai gr8..... tumhari meena |
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meri paras, tumhe rachna pasand aayi.... shukria. a re... koi mazra hai hi nahi to kya soonaau.... yah to yunhi ...... khwaab palko se ootar aaya lol jhuum kar kaalii kaalii ghaTaa jab uThii raat apanii to karavaT badalate kaTii kuchh to mausam ne bechain rakkhaa hame.n kuchh teraa yaad aanaa Gazab ho gayaa waah.... is se parichit karwaane ka shukria. meena |
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23rd June 2004, 08:06 AM
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aapka bahottt shukriaa.... aap dost jab taarif karte hai to bas rachna maie jaan aa jaati hai. tumhaare yakeen par muje bhi yakeen ho chala hai.. lol aapki duwaa humesha rang laati hai. koi shak nahi. aapki dost meena |
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23rd June 2004, 08:08 AM
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mere varinder, tum bhi na... to tum bhi foram ke sathh ho gaye? oosne to apni sab frs ko bhi ja kar bata diya ke pata nahi maa ko kya ho gaya hai. lol offo......... tum or budhhae? tabhi to itna khurch huae ja raha hai..... pahlaey mobile, fir ghadi, belt, shirts.. yaha tak ki studies ka wakt bhi.... sab kuchh kurbaan kiye ja rahe hai janaab..... haan..... aise hi budhhe raho... n jaane jawaan ban jaao to kya ho oon ladkiyon ka.... jab aaj yah haal hai. waise muje or banno ko jeete raho kahne waale khud n jaane kitno ko ghayal karte ho..... or fir malam patti bhi khud.... waah yah achha tarika hai . aao... dard lo or dawa bhi mujse lo. tum bhi jeete raho yunhi.. lol khush raho. tumhari meena |
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23rd June 2004, 08:20 AM
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sakhi, tumhare dil ke kareeb rahi yah rchna to or kya chahiye..... shukria........ tumhari di |
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24th June 2004, 09:30 AM
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ty . tumhara pm mila or muje achha bhi laga. tum yunhi ummid karti ho ke maie thhik hu ya fir yah racha padhh kar soch rahi ho? lol hahahah majaak ki. haan maie thhik hu. tum apna khayal rakha karo.Dilki gehraion se shukriya kubool kiya hai. par shimul.... ek baat k liye maafi chahti hu... tumne maanga oos se pahlaey hi maie yah rachna kisi or ke naam kar chooki hu. ab is par mera bas nahi . khush raho. meena |
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Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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24th June 2004, 04:35 PM
Dear Meena
its really very nice... i won't belive that a person can write this kind of dipness of their heart... bahot hi achcha laga, jese kuch had tak jo me sochti rahi aapne alfazo me bayan kiya he, bas likhte rahiye.. hum to u apni jindgi se mile ajnabi jese ajnabi se mile Naaz  Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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24th June 2004, 06:16 PM
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meri shimul, tumne oos wakt bhi kaha thha ke tum majaak kar rahi ho... muje pata hai... par hum dost to aise hai na.... k majaak to kya sapne maie bhi kuchh kah de to poora karne ko ji chahe.... khush raho. |
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pahlaey to tahe dil se shukria... jo tumne is rachna ko pasand kiya. rahi baat dil ki gahraai ki...... to mera maan na hai ke dil hai hi aisa ..... iski gahraai ka andaja koi nahi laga paata ke yah kitna chah sakta hai... bayaan kar sakta hai. bas... ise samajne k liye ek or dil hona chahiye..... ek baar or shukria. tc |
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25th June 2004, 12:03 PM
Kya kahe kya na kahe ye kaisi muskil haye
koi to bata de iska ha-l o mere bhai ab me kya kahu is par muje to samaj nahi aa raha...  Vir ko apni budhi haddio ki fikr hai....muje to lagta hai me jawani me hi budhi ho gayee hu...i mean i feel ki kabhi kabhi thoda bahot romentic hone me bhi maja aata hai..nahi? ...lol me bhi sochti hu ekad poetry 'ishqi' ban kar dal du..wad u think well, bahot khubsurat rachna hai... aise hi likhte rahiyega jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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25th June 2004, 12:22 PM
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meri sanam, vir ke naatak to maie jaanti hu khub...... par tum bhi agar kaho ke tum apni is jawani maie khud ko budhi samajti ho... to ab DDD kya kahe? or wat do u mean.... kabhi kabhi... ? or thhoda romentic ? yaar poori romentic ho jaoa na... ab is maie kanjoosi na karna...... tumhare 'isqi' ban ne ka khayaal, isi pal se mere sathh saans le raha hai. jyada intzaar nahi karwaaogi..... yakin hai. tumhari DDD |
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Kya baat hain... Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? hmmmm. bahut achha likha hain aap ne.  bahut achha lagi aap ki yeh kavita. har shabd se pyar ubhar raha hain... jaan tum mujhse door kyun ho?... he he he. bahot khoob dd. do take care of yourself and have a nice day! |
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23rd February 2006, 12:33 PM
Didi,
In lafzon me chhupi tadap maine mehsoos kar sakta hoon.... Aapke ehsaas aapke lafozn me bolte hain... bahut hi khoobusrat likha hai.... Likhti rahiye... apna khayaal rakhiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd February 2006, 12:43 PM
Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ?
Jab bhi aaine maie dekhti hu Saamne nazar aate tum ho Meri aankhe ro padti hai to.. Aanshu pite nazar aate tum ho fir bhi kaho na...... Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Ji kare tumhara chehra mere hathh maie ho Yah ahesaas kyun karate nahi ho Tumhaare paas hi hu ‘jaanu’ Yah kah kar maan bahlaate kyun ho Jaan! tum mujse door kyun ho ? Maie dharti tum aashmaan kyun ho? Didu, Aapke bhaav ko shabdon mein bhehta hua dekh sakte hain is rachna mein... sach dil ko chu gayee apki yeh rachna ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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23rd February 2006, 01:32 PM
meena ji
hmm dard mai pyar aur pyar mai dard ka sangam itni sarlata se sirf aap hi kar sakti hain aapki is kavita par mera salam kabul karen shrdh 
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23rd February 2006, 02:22 PM
Meenaji,
sundar rachnaa hain..... aapke liye kuch likh rahi hoon. naa jaane kya hui khataa jo rooth baithe ho, na bolte ho faqat sir jhukaayen baithe ho yeh baywafaai nahin hain to ise kya samjhein rahte ho jis dil mein usi ko dukhaayen baithe ho.......... upar ki baat mein apni taraf se unke liye likh rahi hoon jinke liye aapne apni yeh rachnaa likhi hain.. |
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Re: Re: maie dharti tum aashmaan -
3rd March 2006, 09:33 PM
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priy parul, aabhaardi |
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3rd March 2006, 09:35 PM
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mere pulkit, shukria. tumhari di |
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