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20th February 2006, 01:20 PM
Kal raat mere ander ..
Ek maut hui.
Saamne laash padi thi aur
mai tumhara intzaar kar rahi thi
tum aao to jalti chitaa ke darshan kar lo
par tum nahi aaye..
ab har saans is aag mai muje jalna hoga
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
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Re: tumhare aane tak -
20th February 2006, 01:28 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Kal raat mere ander ..
Ek maut hui.
Saamne laash padi thi aur
mai tumhara intzaar kar rahi thi
tum aao to jalti chitaa ke darshan kar lo
par tum nahi aaye..
ab har saans is aag mai muje jalna hoga
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
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Maa aapko samjhti hoon.. isliye maun hoon...
with love
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Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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20th February 2006, 08:03 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Kal raat mere ander ..
Ek maut hui.
Saamne laash padi thi aur
mai tumhara intzaar kar rahi thi
tum aao to jalti chitaa ke darshan kar lo
par tum nahi aaye..
ab har saans is aag mai muje jalna hoga
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
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Tum Agar Ham Ko Na Milte To Ye Surat Hoti
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20th February 2006, 10:01 PM
meenaji maine lagbhag aapki saari rachnaae padhi hai,
bahut umdaa likhti hain aap.
AAp ki gujrati rachnaa muje bahut achchi lagti hain...
to jaroor se kuch achchi gujrati rachnaa post kijiyegaa...
intezaar rahegaa.
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21st February 2006, 12:11 AM
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Maa aapko samjhti hoon.. isliye maun hoon...
with love
budhu
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priy garima
shukria ka mohtaaj nahi humara rishta aisa tum kahti ho par mai har kadam par rishte ki karach na mil jaaye yahi prathna bhagwaan se karte huae tumhara shukria adaa kar rahi hu
tumhari maa
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21st February 2006, 12:11 AM
Dear di,
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kem chho? aa rachna ma kai samajh na padi, hope you know what i am saying.
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Re: Tumhare aane tak... :)**@};- -
21st February 2006, 12:15 AM
meri shimu,
achha laga tumhara is kadar aana.........
tumhari meena
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21st February 2006, 12:19 AM
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meenaji maine lagbhag aapki saari rachnaae padhi hai,
bahut umdaa likhti hain aap.
AAp ki gujrati rachnaa muje bahut achchi lagti hain...
to jaroor se kuch achchi gujrati rachnaa post kijiyegaa...
intezaar rahegaa.
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jaroor hu gujarati kavita post karish jaldi ...
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Re: tumhare aane tak -
21st February 2006, 12:26 AM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Kal raat mere ander ..
Ek maut hui.
Saamne laash padi thi aur
mai tumhara intzaar kar rahi thi
tum aao to jalti chitaa ke darshan kar lo
par tum nahi aaye..
ab har saans is aag mai muje jalna hoga
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
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Coffee Mitr,
Soch gehri hai... magar dard bhari...
Apan khayal rakhein...
Rohin
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21st February 2006, 12:32 AM
Meena Ji,
jaise rohin ne kaha, soch mey bahut gehrayi hai. waise bahut hi accha likha hai, maalum hai isme special kya hai. Hum aksar zindagi mey yeh bhool jaate hain ki zindagi aur maut ka gehra rishta hai, magar aapne in dona ko aise joda hai jaise sui aur daaga. It's very beautiful.
Destiny is what you beleive in,
Destiny is what you make off,
Be the creator of your destiny,
For all have the force within....
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21st February 2006, 06:23 AM
yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
sach hee nahee hai ye bahut achee tareeke se likha gaya sach hai ye bahut khoob. prateeksha jis nee kee hai woh samjh payega tumher in shabdon ko
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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21st February 2006, 06:42 AM
meena ji
kya kahun ---------------------
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21st February 2006, 08:42 AM
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Dear di,
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kem chho? aa rachna ma kai samajh na padi, hope you know what i am saying.
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priy parul,
tane aa rachna ma shu n samjaayu ae mane pan samaj n padi... afsos chhe ke hu tari waat samji n saki
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21st February 2006, 08:45 AM
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Coffee Mitr,
Soch gehri hai... magar dard bhari...
Apan khayal rakhein...
Rohin
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mere rohin,
waise bhi dekha jaay to jaha gharaai hoti hai khushi aur dard wahi dera daalte hai na.. oosi tarah yaha bhi dard nazar aaya tumko... so nayi baat nahi .
tumhari coffee M
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21st February 2006, 08:47 AM
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Meena Ji,
jaise rohin ne kaha, soch mey bahut gehrayi hai. waise bahut hi accha likha hai, maalum hai isme special kya hai. Hum aksar zindagi mey yeh bhool jaate hain ki zindagi aur maut ka gehra rishta hai, magar aapne in dona ko aise joda hai jaise sui aur daaga. It's very beautiful.
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Balaji Nagarajan,
meri rachna ko is kadar sochne ke liye sarahne ke liye aur fir ek alag soch se milane ke liye tumhari aabhari hu. shukria.
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21st February 2006, 08:48 AM
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yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
sach hee nahee hai ye bahut achee tareeke se likha gaya sach hai ye bahut khoob. prateeksha jis nee kee hai woh samjh payega tumher in shabdon ko
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meri rachna mai jalakti pratiksha ko samajne ke liye shukria.
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21st February 2006, 08:51 AM
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meena ji
kya kahun ---------------------
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priy shrdh,
tumhare is ' kya kahun ' ne poorani achhi yaad dila di . shukria.
ab tumhre ' kya kahun ' ka jawaab ...
khush raho.
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22nd February 2006, 09:04 PM
Yeh kyaa likh diya hai aapne...mujhse kuch kehte nahin banegaa...
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
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Re: tumhare aane tak -
23rd February 2006, 11:00 AM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Kal raat mere ander ..
Ek maut hui.
Saamne laash padi thi aur
mai tumhara intzaar kar rahi thi
tum aao to jalti chitaa ke darshan kar lo
par tum nahi aaye..
ab har saans is aag mai muje jalna hoga
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
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Meena ji
agar ye sirf rachna hei to bohat achi legi , yedi kuch oar hei to kuch keh pana muskil hi hei.
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23rd February 2006, 11:28 AM
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Yeh kyaa likh diya hai aapne...mujhse kuch kehte nahin banegaa...
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shukria ise padhne ke liye .
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Meena ji
agar ye sirf rachna hei to bohat achi legi , yedi kuch oar hei to kuch keh pana muskil hi hei.
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23rd February 2006, 11:56 AM
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
Didu,
Aapki yeh panktiyaan par bus moan hun...
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
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3rd March 2006, 09:51 PM
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kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
Didu,
Aapki yeh panktiyaan par bus moan hun...
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priy shalini,
khush raho
tumhari Didu
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13th November 2007, 03:44 PM
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Kal raat mere ander ..
Ek maut hui.
Saamne laash padi thi aur
mai tumhara intzaar kar rahi thi
tum aao to jalti chitaa ke darshan kar lo
par tum nahi aaye..
ab har saans is aag mai muje jalna hoga
kyunki.. ab jivan bhar
shabd –ghee aur soch ki lakdi
har subah suraj ko sakshi rakh
is chitaa mai daalni hai..
taki yah jwaliit rahe tumhare aane tak
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diii.........kisi ke intjaar mein jo tadap hai jo dard hai woh maiN samaj sakti hoon.....sach mein intjaar jisne kiya hoga....wahi es nazam ko behtar samaj paya hoga.
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