...meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi~

mann_chand · **...meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi~ -** 20th February 2010, 05:05 AM

SDC meiN sabhi DostoN ko mera Aadaab!!!

aaj kuch alag likhNe ki koshish ki haiN, phoolon ko dekh kar likhNe ka mann hua so ..aur aap sab saamne hazir hai ek aur koshish....aacha / buraa yeh to aap baatayega.... aapki rayee ka iNtezaaar rahega ....

Take care

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meiN hu diloN ki RaaNi
meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi

mausaam-e-bahar ho
yeh fir barsata paaNi

meiN hu mohabaat ki NishaaNi
khushi baat toh, haiN anjaaNi

aaj hu aur kal ka kya kahu
kuch lamhoN ki meri jawaaNi

Mohabaat ki tarah masoom hu
Phool hu, har pyaar ki zubaaNi

kya soch kar jo likh diya "deep"
ghazal mein ho gayi jaise rawaaNi

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Parul · 20th February 2010, 07:58 AM

hi didi,
kaise ho? phoulon si feelings bahut khubsurti se bayaan ki hai aap ne, bahot khoob. daad kubul kijiyega... likhte rahiye.tc

Parul

naresh_mehra110 · 20th February 2010, 08:52 AM

Mohabaat ki tarah masoom hu
Phool hu, har pyaar ki zubaaNi

yeh khayal bahut khubi se adaa kiya aapne...

Bahut naram aur khubsurat ehsaas piroye hai aapne mandeep Ji .....ek umdaa peshkash ko dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen..
duaaon ke saath...

vikramjethi · 20th February 2010, 04:40 PM

mandeep jii....SSA,

aapne alag hi nahi balki behad khoobsurat likha hai....
maza aa gaya padh kar.....
daad qubuul kijiye...

aapka dost,
vikram...

ISHK EK IBADAT · 20th February 2010, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mann_chand

SDC meiN sabhi DostoN ko mera Aadaab!!!

aaj kuch alag likhNe ki koshish ki haiN, phoolon ko dekh kar likhNe ka mann hua so ..aur aap sab saamne hazir hai ek aur koshish....aacha / buraa yeh to aap baatayega.... aapki rayee ka iNtezaaar rahega ....

Take care

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meiN hu diloN ki RaaNi
meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi

mausaam-e-bahar ho
yeh fir barsata paaNi

meiN hu mohabaat ki NishaaNi
khushi baat toh, haiN anjaaNi

aaj hu aur kal ka kya kahu
kuch lamhoN ki meri jawaaNi

Mohabaat ki tarah masoom hu
Phool hu, har pyaar ki zubaaNi

kya soch kar jo likh diya "deep"
ghazal mein ho gayi jaise rawaaNi

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mandeep jee
radhe radhe

bahut hi sundar koshish...dil se daad hazir hai...aise hi likhti rahen
(rep++++)

Harash Mahajan · 21st February 2010, 01:22 PM

Mandeep Kaur ji pehskerda tamaam kalaam behadd hi khoobsoorat hai..mujhe bahoot hi pasand aya..sach meiN aapne kutchh alag sa likhne ki koshish kee hai............daad qabool farmaayeiN….

Harash

kwahish · 21st February 2010, 04:21 PM

Mandeep Jee Aadaab!

Kafi achcha likha hai, sher ke ahsaas achche hai koshish jari rakhiye,
Bahut asardaar likhane lagengi aap..... Is gazal ki baat kahuN to kafi kachcha pan hai har sher mein......

Khush rhaiye,
Khuda Hafez......

Radhika_2 · 22nd February 2010, 09:23 AM

Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas likha Mandeep Jee.

kya soch kar jo likh diya "deep"
ghazal mein ho gayi jaise rawaaNi

daad.

sunita thakur · 21st May 2015, 10:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mann_chand

SDC meiN sabhi DostoN ko mera Aadaab!!!

aaj kuch alag likhNe ki koshish ki haiN, phoolon ko dekh kar likhNe ka mann hua so ..aur aap sab saamne hazir hai ek aur koshish....aacha / buraa yeh to aap baatayega.... aapki rayee ka iNtezaaar rahega ....

Take care

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meiN hu diloN ki RaaNi
meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi

mausaam-e-bahar ho
yeh fir barsata paaNi

meiN hu mohabaat ki NishaaNi
khushi baat toh, haiN anjaaNi

aaj hu aur kal ka kya kahu
kuch lamhoN ki meri jawaaNi

Mohabaat ki tarah masoom hu
Phool hu, har pyaar ki zubaaNi

kya soch kar jo likh diya "deep"
ghazal mein ho gayi jaise rawaaNi

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Meri Pyri Manno...bahut pyare pyare ehsaas hai...bas maiN hi deri se aaye padne ke liye...SDC par aapki kami hai...!

pyar ke saath
dii

Hassan · 21st May 2015, 03:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mann_chand

SDC meiN sabhi DostoN ko mera Aadaab!!!

aaj kuch alag likhNe ki koshish ki haiN, phoolon ko dekh kar likhNe ka mann hua so ..aur aap sab saamne hazir hai ek aur koshish....aacha / buraa yeh to aap baatayega.... aapki rayee ka iNtezaaar rahega ....

Take care

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meiN hu diloN ki RaaNi
meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi

mausaam-e-bahar ho
yeh fir barsata paaNi

meiN hu mohabaat ki NishaaNi
khushi baat toh, haiN anjaaNi

aaj hu aur kal ka kya kahu
kuch lamhoN ki meri jawaaNi

Mohabaat ki tarah masoom hu
Phool hu, har pyaar ki zubaaNi

kya soch kar jo likh diya "deep"
ghazal mein ho gayi jaise rawaaNi

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Mandeep jee ...

Kafi pehly aap ki likhi hui yeh ghazal bohat hi asar-daar hy!

daad qabool kejiye ...

meHfil meiN aap ki wapisi ka intezaar rahy ga ..

duaooN ky saath ijazat,

Madhu 14 · 1st July 2017, 11:14 AM

. meiN hu diloN ki RaaNi
meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi

Waahh!!!
Mandeep ji....Sdc ki taraf se aapko janmdin ki hardik badhaiyaan.....asha karti hun aapki Kalam Aaj bhi aapke ehsaas kagaz pe utar rahi hogi.....unhe hamare saath bhi sajha karne aaiyega phir se....

Intzaar rahega..

Dher sari duaon ke sath....
Apki Madhu.

akant · **good -** 17th July 2017, 01:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mann_chand

SDC meiN sabhi DostoN ko mera Aadaab!!!

aaj kuch alag likhNe ki koshish ki haiN, phoolon ko dekh kar likhNe ka mann hua so ..aur aap sab saamne hazir hai ek aur koshish....aacha / buraa yeh to aap baatayega.... aapki rayee ka iNtezaaar rahega ....

Take care

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meiN hu diloN ki RaaNi
meri zindagi uNkahi kahaaNi

mausaam-e-bahar ho
yeh fir barsata paaNi

meiN hu mohabaat ki NishaaNi
khushi baat toh, haiN anjaaNi

aaj hu aur kal ka kya kahu
kuch lamhoN ki meri jawaaNi

Mohabaat ki tarah masoom hu
Phool hu, har pyaar ki zubaaNi

kya soch kar jo likh diya "deep"
ghazal mein ho gayi jaise rawaaNi

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bahut hi behatrin koshis hai aapki.. kahi kahi thoda sa bhatkaav ho gaya hai.. lekin phir bhi sweekar kiya ja sakata hai.. likhate likhate hi shabdo ki pkada aur unke prayog me nikhaar aata hai... so keep writing..

Akant...