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TeRaA DiL MeRaA GhAr HaI.............!! -
13th November 2005, 08:40 AM
jab jab janeman tumhe mera khyaal ayega
zindagi pay tumhe tab behad pyaar ayega chalte chalte jab waqt kuch thair sa jayega muskurate hoton pe tere mera naam ayega jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega har subah jab sooraj khidkipe jagmagayega uski kirno se tumhara man cham chamayega raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega kitna khoobsurat woh manzar nazar aayega teraa yeh pyar ka ghar mera ghar kehlayega mere yaar us khuda ka dil bhi machal jayega jab meraa naam tere naam say judh jayega Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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13th November 2005, 12:09 PM
hi didi....
nice one....... jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega keep writing.....take care...bye... bhupendra |
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Hi -
13th November 2005, 10:49 PM
Farhana ji aaj kal aap ishq vishq par likh rahi hai jankar Behad acha laga Aap ki shayri hamein bohat achi lagi "Ek pyaara sa aashiya hum tum banayenge Hum dono ki khushiyo se usko sajayenge Saath rehenge milkar hum dono Mohabbat ki hum ek nayi duniya basayenge...." kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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13th November 2005, 11:52 PM
hi ballu....glad u liked...aajkal thoda romance pe likhne ki koshish karrahi hoon......
 for a changeSubha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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13th November 2005, 11:54 PM
hmm diggaj...kaise ho dear?
mujhe khushi hai jaanke ki tumhe mere shayr-o-shayri pasand arahi hai...hamesha dard pe likhti hoon isliye kuch ishq pe bhi likkh doon socha..... aise hi aate rehna. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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14th November 2005, 06:18 PM
Hi Farzana you have Beautiful Written your part, i just tried to reply it in same form as you thought.
jab jab janeman tumhe mera khyaal ayega zindagi pay tumhe tab behad pyaar ayega chalte chalte jab waqt kuch thair sa jayega muskurate hoton pe tere mera naam ayega jhoom ke jab kabhi baadal pyaar barsayega is zameen ka jism sharmaake simat jayega har subah jab sooraj khidkipe jagmagayega uski kirno se tumhara man cham chamayega raat ke aanchal me chaand jab tim timayega teri baahon mein mera saaya simat aayega kitna khoobsurat woh manzar nazar aayega teraa yeh pyar ka ghar mera ghar kehlayega mere yaar us khuda ka dil bhi machal jayega jab meraa naam tere naam say judh jayega Teri Nigaho Mein Meri Tasveer Nazar Ayegi Tanha Mann Aiyene Mein Dekh Tu Muskuraigi Baho Mein Bhar Lene Ki Kasis Tujhe Tadpayegi Teri Ye Reshmi Zulfe Jab Jab Lahrayegi Is Dewane Ka Mann Machle Ga Aur Tu Sharmaiyegi Intezar Hai Mujhe Us Raat Ka Jab Tu Ayegi Payal Ki Aur Chudiyo ki Khahanahat Se Mujhe Uthaygi Agosh Mein Bhar Ke Tu Mujse Yeh Iltiza Karjayegi Raha Nahi Jata Ab Tanha Kab Teri Dulhan Bun aongi Tere Is Sune Ghar Ko Main Chand Taro Se Sajaongi Mujhe Mere Babul Ka Mahel Acha Nahi lagta Chodaongi Tere Saat Ji Virane Mein Kai Gul Khilaongi Khuwab Kiya Haqeekat Mein Tu Mujhe Mil Jayegi Aisa Rista Ho Ga Hamara Tumse Ki Yeh Duniya Jal Jayegi Wafa Ki Kitabo Mein Apne Kisse Chapjayegi Ithihas Ekk Bar Phir Hume Dekh Laila Majnu Kahjayegi Kaisey Kahdey Ki Yeh Dil Deewana Nahi Hai Tanha Hai Magar Awara Nahi Hai |
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14th November 2005, 09:54 PM
hmmm hi there waseem....glad u liked my kalaam...aur haan tumne bhi bahaut accha likkha hai....
yuhin likhte raho aur meri post pe aate rehna...take care....byeeeeee Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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14th November 2005, 09:58 PM
Beautiful creation farhana!
Interesting.......! parh ke bahut achha laga.... take care & keep writting. Your friend, Parul. |
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14th November 2005, 10:40 PM
hmmm im glad to know that you liked the poem.....
take care sweets....muaahh.bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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15th November 2005, 11:57 AM
nice one
Happy Tuesday ~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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hello farha wonder ful |
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hello farha wonder ful -
15th November 2005, 09:27 PM
hi farha lovely tera dil mera ghar hai............... title hi khubsurat hai aur uske ghar ki cheeze bhi behat lovely hai toooooo gud lovely expressed ............... u have decorated his home in gud manner i think u r architecture of hearts any ways i feel gud by readin ur stuff ........ likte rehna aise hi ........ main padta rahunga waise hiiiiiiii ...
any ways bye for now .. take care ur frind faiq............ *AS A MATTER OF FACT I WILL SAY ON THE FACE "* |
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15th November 2005, 10:31 PM
hi abhishek...how r u?...
m glad u liked the poem.... take care. bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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15th November 2005, 10:32 PM
hello faiq...how r u doin...jaanke khushi horahi hai ki aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya aur aapne ise tareef ke kabil samjha...
yuhin aage bhi apni pasand napasand batate rehna.. take care bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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Re: TeRaA DiL MeRaA GhAr HaI.............!! |
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Re: TeRaA DiL MeRaA GhAr HaI.............!! -
22nd November 2005, 05:35 AM
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oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh......CUTO!!!! really nicely written farhana....romantic!! aise hi likhti raho take care bye warda »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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23rd November 2005, 09:13 PM
hmmm for the first time i guess ur replying to my kalaamssss(not including the songs n stuff)
 well i thot that may u dont like any but at last sumthing u liked dear...keep coming sweets...take care...bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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goodluck |
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goodluck -
24th November 2005, 06:09 PM
kya baath hain..khoob kahee farhana jiii aapnay!
likhtay rahe ye Imran Ghori +91 98855 37020 |
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25th November 2005, 09:48 AM
farhana ji mujhe ye animation chahiye aapne kaise lagaya plz batadijiye
~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~
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28th November 2005, 11:49 PM
hi sohail...m glad u liked it.....thanks for coming dear...take care...bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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plesure is all mine |
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plesure is all mine -
29th November 2005, 12:49 PM
plesure is all mine
regards Imran Ghori +91 98855 37020 |
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29th November 2005, 02:39 PM
Very touchy, and u have expressed ur feelings very nicely
liked it very very very much good keep it up take care |
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29th November 2005, 10:30 PM
dear star.....im glad u liked my kalaam...keep coming dear...take care..bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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30th November 2005, 07:00 PM
dear farhana
bahut khoobsurtii se likha hai aapne ...bas ese hi likhte raho ... aur it is simply heart touching ... take a gud care of urslef ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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30th November 2005, 09:25 PM
dear mandeep...tumhe apni post pe bahaut khushi horahi hai warna rarely tum nazar aati mere kalaamon pe....khair tum aayi jaanke khushi hui aur tareef bhi ki isse aur zyada khushi hui...aati rehna....
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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30th November 2005, 09:57 PM
priy farhana,
jab jab janeman tumhe mera khyaal ayega zindagi pay tumhe tab behad pyaar ayega khubsurat bayaani... di |
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1st December 2005, 09:14 PM
hi meena d.....apko apni post pe dekhke bahaut khuhsi horahi hai.....aapko kalaam pasand aaya jaanke khuhsi hui....aise hi aati rahiyega....take care
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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