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aapke dil mein - 9th December 2006, 03:25 PM


Hum aapke dil mein aana chahte hai,
Aapse pyar ka nazrana chahte hai,
Aap chahte hai kisi aur ko yeh jaante hai hum,
PHIR BHI,
Apni taqdeeer ko aazmana chahte hai !!!

tum jo kehte the ke rone se na badlenge naseeb,
umar bhar is baat ne humko rone na diya !!!
   
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9th December 2006, 04:59 PM
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Hum aapke dil mein aana chahte hai,
Aapse pyar ka nazrana chahte hai,
Aap chahte hai kisi aur ko yeh jaante hai hum,
PHIR BHI,
Apni taqdeeer ko aazmana chahte hai !!!

ruchika ji namskaar

achha laga aapko padh ke ummid hai aap age bhi apni likhi hui peshkas ke zariye is mehfil ko sajayengi

khus rahiye

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10th December 2006, 01:10 AM
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Hum aapke dil mein aana chahte hai,
Aapse pyar ka nazrana chahte hai,
Aap chahte hai kisi aur ko yeh jaante hai hum,
PHIR BHI,
Apni taqdeeer ko aazmana chahte hai !!!
Aap ki yaha anokhi si shayri par nazar padte hi labhon par muskaan chaa gayi...! Acha lagaa parh kar...!

Younhi likhte rahiyega

Take care


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Post 10th December 2006, 08:44 PM
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Hum aapke dil mein aana chahte hai,
Aapse pyar ka nazrana chahte hai,
Aap chahte hai kisi aur ko yeh jaante hai hum,
PHIR BHI,
Apni taqdeeer ko aazmana chahte hai !!!

Hello ruchika ji, Aap ne achaa likha hai bhaot hi or khaas kar ye ki apni taqdeer ko aazmana chahte hai
Aap yu hi likhte rahe mujhe intezaar rahega,

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u have written an optimistic view of Love. its nice for all to try once to get his or her love
   
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ruchika ji namskaar

achha laga aapko padh ke ummid hai aap age bhi apni likhi hui peshkas ke zariye is mehfil ko sajayengi

khus rahiye

aapka dost
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u have written an optimistic view of Love. its nice for all to try once to get his or her love
hi karan,
ya i personally believe tht i should atleast try once to get his or her love....
rest is all in the hands of god.

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Hello ruchika ji, Aap ne achaa likha hai bhaot hi or khaas kar ye ki apni taqdeer ko aazmana chahte hai
Aap yu hi likhte rahe mujhe intezaar rahega,

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10th December 2006, 10:49 PM
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Aap ki yaha anokhi si shayri par nazar padte hi labhon par muskaan chaa gayi...! Acha lagaa parh kar...!

Younhi likhte rahiyega

Take care
thanks for ur compliments........
gar aap logo ka yunhi saath raha to jaroor likhenge.
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11th December 2006, 02:44 AM
hi ruchika ji aap ne bahoot bahoot achh likha hai, aise hi likhte rahiya keep it up
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Gud Work - 11th December 2006, 08:13 AM
Tuj main 1 baat sab se nirali hai
tumhari shayri main dard hai jo jhalkta hai

keep it up
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11th December 2006, 11:46 PM
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hi ruchika ji aap ne bahoot bahoot achh likha hai, aise hi likhte rahiya keep it up
bye...take care
bahut hi shukriya sandhyaji meri honsla afjaayee ke liye....hum uhi likhte rahenge aap uhi padhte rahiye ga....
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Tuj main 1 baat sab se nirali hai
tumhari shayri main dard hai jo jhalkta hai

keep it up
ur new shyri lover Bazz
thank u bazz ji....
aisa lag raha hai aap bhi dard e dil ke shikar hai......

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wah ji wah - 14th December 2006, 11:33 AM
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Hum aapke dil mein aana chahte hai,
Aapse pyar ka nazrana chahte hai,
Aap chahte hai kisi aur ko yeh jaante hai hum,
PHIR BHI,
Apni taqdeeer ko aazmana chahte hai !!!
ruchika ji ko raj ka salaam......aapko aksar maine apni post par dekha hai....aaj hum aapki post par shirkat farma rahe hain....aapka khyaal hee itna purasar hai ki hum aane ko majboor ho gaye.....dil ki dharkano se nikle huye is khyaal ko raj ka salaam....meri daad hazir hai.....yu hee likhti rahiye......take care.......raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Aap ki yaha anokhi si shayri par nazar padte hi labhon par muskaan chaa gayi...! Acha lagaa parh kar...!

Younhi likhte rahiyega

Take care
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ruchika ji ko raj ka salaam......aapko aksar maine apni post par dekha hai....aaj hum aapki post par shirkat farma rahe hain....aapka khyaal hee itna purasar hai ki hum aane ko majboor ho gaye.....dil ki dharkano se nikle huye is khyaal ko raj ka salaam....meri daad hazir hai.....yu hee likhti rahiye......take care.......raj.......

bahut hi shukriya raj ji hamari post par shirkat farmane ke liye,,,,aapke jaisae umda shayar se daad pakar bahut hi aacha lag raha hai.
thx again.
bye n take care.

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Thumbs up To ruchika - 18th December 2006, 02:22 PM
DERI SE PADHA HAI PAR AAJ SIRF AAPKI IS RACHNA NE AANKHON KO HI NAHI DIL KO BHI CHHUA HAI


LOG KAHTE HAIN WAH, KOI ISE AAPKI KALA KAHTA HAI
HUM JANTE HAI KI KAHI AAPKA DIL AAJ FIR SE DUKHA HAI
JAB JAB BHI AAPKI KOI RACHNA AANKHO SE GUJARI HAI
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Smile Subhchintak Dost - 19th December 2006, 09:01 PM
Hello Ruchika ji,
Aaj maine Bahut din baad shayri.com khola or aapkee Gazal pari... Aapne bahut hi achaa likha hai ki apni taqdeer ko aazmana chahte hain bahut hi achaa laga..........
Aap yun hi likte rahe mujhe intezaar rahegaaa

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dil ko is kadar aazmaayaa na karo,
sab jaante hue bhi tum,
khud ko kam se kam is kadar tadpaaya na karo...!


small nice n cute...!

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