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mar ke bhi mar na sake - 25th March 2003, 05:49 AM

hi everyone! how r u all doing ?
hope good. kafi din ho gaye kuch post karke, to socha ke kuch post karu, umeed hai ke aap sab ko pasand aaye ga.

aaj kalam saath nahi de rahi,
jaise ji kar bhi zindagi saath nahi de rahi

hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake,
tumhe chah kar bhi tumhe pa na sake

zindagi mein khushi ki shayad kami hai,
paimane se shayad sharab ki kami hai.

hum to mar ke bhi tumhe bhoolenge nahi,
mar ne ke baad jine ke khwahish karenge nahi.

jaam se sharab pi kar bhi, pyaas khatm na hue kisi ki bhi,
pyaar karne walo ki, intezaar ki raat khatm na hue kabhi..

hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake,
tumse pyaar karke tumhe kabhi bata na sake.


dont frown, u never know whoz falling in love with ur smile :)

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25th March 2003, 06:03 AM

hi riddhi ji, how r u ? hope good, and i'm fine too. bahut hi achaA likhA haI.

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hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake,
tumhe chah kar bhi tumhe pa na sake

jaam se sharab pi kar bhi, pyaas khatm na hue kisi ki bhi,
pyaar karne walo ki, intezaar ki raat khatm na hue kabhi..

hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake,
tumse pyaar karke tumhe kabhi bata na sake.
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i liked these lines a lot. bahut hi khoob!
likhte rahiye
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Riddhi ji - 25th March 2003, 08:21 AM

hi, kaisi hai aap? ji saach hai aapne bahut hi dino baad mehfil sazayee iss liye aane ka bahut shukriya....Riddhi ji bahut hi gehrayee mei present kiya hai. aise hi likhte rehega please
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hiiiiiiiiiiii - 25th March 2003, 10:47 AM

Bahut accha likha hai apne.Likhte rahiyega.
OK BYE.
TAKE CARE.
KEEP SMILING.


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25th March 2003, 10:58 AM

Hi Riddhi ji,

Kaafi der ke baad kuchh post kiya hai aapne..Aapka ye kalaam achha laga.Aur khaas kar ke yeh sheyr bahut pasand aaya..

jaam se sharab pi kar bhi, pyaas khatm na hue kisi ki bhi,
pyaar karne walo ki, intezaar ki raat khatm na hue kabhi

Bahut hi khoobi se sachhai bayaan ki hai aapne in lines mein..

Likhte Rahiye
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25th March 2003, 11:18 AM

Hi Riddhi ji,


Bahut hi khoobi se sachhai bayaan ki hai aapne, Its great

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