khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ? -
18th October 2014, 08:28 AM
Namaskaar SDC..............
aap sabhi ki nazar ek nyi aur chhoti si koshish ......
umeed hai aap sabhi ko zarur pasNd aayegi.........
meraa makashd kisi ke dil ko thesh pahuNchaanaa nhi hai
balki wo peedaa wyakat karni chahi hai jo us dour se guzar rahi naari ki hoti hai
ye bhaav us naari ke hai jo ye sab sahti hai...
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BaateN har taraf ye aam hoti rahi
maiN wahaN roz badnaam hoti rahi
saraa qasoor mere huSn ka thaa
aur maiN pal pal nilaam hoti rahi
jisne bhi kharidaa usine maslaa mujhe
maiN aaj eski to kal uski gulaam hoti rhi
pyaar ki taraaju meiN na tolaa kisi ne
dil ki hasrateN khaak tamaam hoti rahi
khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ?
badnaam galiyoN meiN subah-shaam hoti rhi....!!
maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!
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aap sabhi ki nazar ek nyi aur chhoti si koshish ......
umeed hai aap sabhi ko zarur pasNd aayegi.........
meraa makashd kisi ke dil ko thesh pahuNchaanaa nhi hai
balki wo peedaa wyakat karni chahi hai jo us dour se guzar rahi naari ki hoti hai
ye bhaav us naari ke hai jo ye sab sahti hai...
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BaateN har taraf ye aam hoti rahi
maiN wahaN roz badnaam hoti rahi
saraa qasoor mere huSn ka thaa
aur maiN pal pal nilaam hoti rahi
jisne bhi kharidaa usine maslaa mujhe
maiN aaj eski to kal uski gulaam hoti rhi
pyaar ki taraaju meiN na tolaa kisi ne
dil ki hasrateN khaak tamaam hoti rahi
khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ?
badnaam galiyoN meiN subah-shaam hoti rhi....!!
Kya baat hai rajeev ji..abhi tak main dekh hi nhi payi aapka ye kalaam...bada achcha laga ki aapne un zazbaton ko bayaan kiya jinke bare me log shayad sochte bhi nahi....
ek alag soch..bahut umda nazm..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
Kya baat hai rajeev ji..abhi tak main dekh hi nhi payi aapka ye kalaam...bada achcha laga ki aapne un zazbaton ko bayaan kiya jinke bare me log shayad sochte bhi nahi....
ek alag soch..bahut umda nazm..
Madhu ji bahut bahut shukriyaa.................
yuN hi aate raheiyegaa....
maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!
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Kia baat hai.. bohat hi sangeen pehlu se ru-ba-ru karaya hai..
lab-o-lehja cheekh cheekh ke faryaad kar raha hai us zulm kii...
wahhh.. kia baat hai.. Hats off...!
you deserved reputation beyond reputation for these awesome thoughts!
Likhty rahiye,,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
aap sabhi ki nazar ek nyi aur chhoti si koshish ......
umeed hai aap sabhi ko zarur pasNd aayegi.........
meraa makashd kisi ke dil ko thesh pahuNchaanaa nhi hai
balki wo peedaa wyakat karni chahi hai jo us dour se guzar rahi naari ki hoti hai
ye bhaav us naari ke hai jo ye sab sahti hai...
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BaateN har taraf ye aam hoti rahi
maiN wahaN roz badnaam hoti rahi
saraa qasoor mere huSn ka thaa
aur maiN pal pal nilaam hoti rahi
jisne bhi kharidaa usine maslaa mujhe
maiN aaj eski to kal uski gulaam hoti rhi
pyaar ki taraaju meiN na tolaa kisi ne
dil ki hasrateN khaak tamaam hoti rahi
khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ?
badnaam galiyoN meiN subah-shaam hoti rhi....!!
Rajeev ji.....aapke kalaam ke liye mere paas koi lafz nahi hai....simply superb !
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
Kia baat hai.. bohat hi sangeen pehlu se ru-ba-ru karaya hai..
lab-o-lehja cheekh cheekh ke faryaad kar raha hai us zulm kii...
wahhh.. kia baat hai.. Hats off...!
you deserved reputation beyond reputation for these awesome thoughts!
Likhty rahiye,,
Regards,
Hassan bhaai..............
bahut bahut shukriyaa........................apnaa sath yuN hi banaaye rakheN..
maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!
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Bahut hi badiyaa...rajeev sahab
kya khub likha hai apne aur bahut hi acchhi soch bhi aapki....
sahi kaha bhi aapne kuch cheejo ko hum dekhteto par mahsoos nahi karte..
aapki kosis tareef-e-kabil hai
mera kya hai main to deewana hu
kya bataoo tumko baare mein apne
mein to khud se hi begaana hu
Bohot khoob rajeev bhai....
Apna dard to koi bhi jafjo me tabdeel kar sakta hai.....
Par aapne aaj un majboir mahilao ke dard ko jubaan di hai....jinka dard koi nahi sunana chahta...
Bahut hi badiyaa...rajeev sahab
kya khub likha hai apne aur bahut hi acchhi soch bhi aapki....
sahi kaha bhi aapne kuch cheejo ko hum dekhteto par mahsoos nahi karte..
aapki kosis tareef-e-kabil hai
Vinay ji bahut bahut shukriyaa...................................
maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!
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Rajeev ji, Namaskar..!
Aapki iss peshkash keliye aapko hazaroN salaam.
Lajawab.. ek ajeeb sa soz hai iss kalaam meiN.
Hats off to you.
Mehfil mein shirkat karte rahiye.
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
Rajeev ji, Namaskar..!
Aapki iss peshkash keliye aapko hazaroN salaam.
Lajawab.. ek ajeeb sa soz hai iss kalaam meiN.
Hats off to you.
Mehfil mein shirkat karte rahiye.
Honsla afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriyaa Shrimaan Sagar Aashna ji...............
maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!
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