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Maa - 25th August 2014, 11:29 AM

Nazar nahi lagti kisiki ab
ke nazar utarne lavi chali gai

ghar pe pahochta hu samay se ab
ke der hone ki chinta karne lavi chali gai

pet bharke khana khata hu me pura ab
ke hathose khana khilane lavi chali gai

khush raheta hu ab me sada
ke mere dukh dekhne vali chali gai

ab to tabiyat bhi nahi bigadati piyush
ke mathe pe hath rakhne lavi chali gai

roj kise jake kahu dosto "kitne din huve"
ke meri maa chali gai
   
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25th August 2014, 01:01 PM

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Nazar nahi lagti kisiki ab
ke nazar utarne lavi chali gai

ghar pe pahochta hu samay se ab
ke der hone ki chinta karne lavi chali gai

pet bharke khana khata hu me pura ab
ke hathose khana khilane lavi chali gai

khush raheta hu ab me sada
ke mere dukh dekhne vali chali gai

ab to tabiyat bhi nahi bigadati piyush
ke mathe pe hath rakhne lavi chali gai

roj kise jake kahu dosto "kitne din huve"
ke meri maa chali gai

Piyush ji.... awwwal to aapka istaqbaal karte hain shayri ki mahfil me....

baad iske jo dard aapne bayan kiyaa hai uskii bharpaai koi bhi alfaaz nahi kar sakte.... ye ehsaas hi kaafi hai us dard se rubaroo hone ke liye... main aapko dil se duaa detaa hoon ke aap aur bhi ehsaas hamaare saath baantre rahen aur aapke dil ko sukoon pahoche..

aate rahiyega,, likhte rahiye

Shaad....


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25th August 2014, 01:08 PM

piyush g maine pehle bhi ispe reply kiya tha....par aaj fir se pada to reply kiye bina reh nahn paya,..kyonki meri condition se bahut match karti hai aapki kavita...



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25th August 2014, 11:14 PM

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Nazar nahi lagti kisiki ab
ke nazar utarne lavi chali gai

ghar pe pahochta hu samay se ab
ke der hone ki chinta karne lavi chali gai

pet bharke khana khata hu me pura ab
ke hathose khana khilane lavi chali gai

khush raheta hu ab me sada
ke mere dukh dekhne vali chali gai

ab to tabiyat bhi nahi bigadati piyush
ke mathe pe hath rakhne lavi chali gai

roj kise jake kahu dosto "kitne din huve"
ke meri maa chali gai


speechless...............................!!


god bless u


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25th August 2014, 11:18 PM

ab to tabiyat bhi nahi bigadati piyush
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waaaaaaaaaaaH!........


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Apka dard mere dil ko chuu gaya, padhte hi aankheiN nam hogai...bahot khoob nazm likhi hai aapne.....dilse dheron daad

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