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Bin huye madhosh meri koyiN Raat Dhalti nahi -
7th November 2009, 03:52 PM
Hello to all..... Yeh instantly likhi huyi gazal hai mahez 15 mein mein..... agar koi correction lage to kar lijiyenga...  Teri yaadoN ke charagoN se shammaye jalti nahi Ab Bin huye madhosh meri koyiN Raat Dhalti nahi Har shaam tera anchal bulane lagata hai mujhe Tere ghar ki koiyiN raah mere dar se nikalti nahi Bewafa tune mujhe chor diya maikashi ki rah par Bin tera naam liye magar Saans meri chalti nahi Humne ki kayiN tarmeen zindagi mein gaur talab jaane kyuN maikhari ki ek yeh aadat badalti nahi Dasti thi tanhai mujhe har paher har pal hi mujhe Ab na kisi ki bhi gair maujudgii mujhe khalti nahi NasheN ne meri nigahoN mein aisa asar kar dala Koi Kwahish koi khushfahmi nazar mein palti nahi 
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7th November 2009, 05:16 PM
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Kaise haiN aap? Mujhe aap ki yeh mehaj 15 minute ki koshish bahut khoob lagee. Aise hi likhte rahiye...... Khuda hafiz, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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8th November 2009, 03:16 PM
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Thanks for comment..... actualy kal younhi is bazam mein baithe baithe koi khayal ban gaya so fatafat likh diya...... waise bahut khamiyaN hai is mein jo ab nazar aa rahi hai.... Aate rahiye... Khush rahiye... Khuda Hafez..
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12th November 2009, 03:39 PM
This gazal is in under process......
Aye saki mujhe koi paimaana na dikhao Dag maga rahe hain kadam aur na pilao Gir na paduN main teri madhoshi meiN Tum is tarha se nashili nigaheN na milao Karta hun har sham main naam tumhare Kuch aisi hi yari sanam tum bhi Nibhaao Barsaao kuch aise jazbaatoN ke saagar Mere mudaton ki tishnagi ko aaj bujhao
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15th November 2009, 06:52 PM
Zindagi ke sawalon ka jawab dhoondta hoon,
dard ko kam kar sake wo sharab dhoondta hoon, waqt ke haathon majboor ek shaksh hoon main, jo jeene ka de bahana wo kitaab dhoondta hoon main |
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15th November 2009, 06:55 PM
Jaam se kabhi itni nafrat naa karo,
Ki peena chaho to kabhi pee na sako. Kisi ko bhi itna pyar na karo, Ki bichad kar jeena chaho to jee na sako. |
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15th November 2009, 07:00 PM
Kaisi thi woh raat kuch keh sakta nahi main
Chahoon kehna to bayan kar sakta nahi mai, Dulhan ban ke meri jab woh bahoon main aayee thi Sej saji thi phoolon ki par us ne mehkai thi, Ghunghat mein ik chand tha aur sirf tanhai thi Awaaz dil ke dhadak ne ki bhi phir zor se aayee thi, Pyar se jo maine ghunghat chand par se hataya tha Pyar ka rang bhi utarkar uske chehre par aya tha, Bahoon mein le kar usko phir laboo ki lali churai thi Us sard raat mein saanse bhi shola ban kar takrai thi, Tika,bindi,kangna, payal sabne shor machaya tha Jab uske shokh badan ko maine haath lagaya tha, Doob gaye the hum dono us dehekti pyar ki aag mein Tod diya tha hum ne kaliyo ko uske pyar ke baag mein, Kya batlaaye ab hum, woh raat kis kadar nirali thi Hamare suhag ki woh raat,jo itni matwali thi……............. ya mere dost likel hai aus ki shaddi k baad jub mele tha |
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17th November 2009, 01:08 AM
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yun hi dastak denen chalaa aayaa  15 minute ke liye kaafi achacha lagaa mujhko किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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21st March 2010, 02:53 PM
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Thanks for a nice reply......
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24th March 2010, 11:50 PM
Bohat khoob Khwaish saheb...........waise 15 minute me yeh kamaal karne ki kabiliyat to sirf ek hi cheeze de sakti hai. hahahhaha
Sach bohat khoob peshkash...... Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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25th March 2010, 02:17 PM
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Sajid Bhai sahin hai per, main sharab ke Nashe mein na raha bhi to nashe mein rahta hun......... Kabhi Gum ke kabhi dard ke.... Insab ka nasha bhi bada dilkash hota hai..... Thanks for appriciate.. Take care, Khuda Hafez....
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25th March 2010, 03:29 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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3rd April 2010, 12:25 AM
sameer bhai, kya baat hai bahut hi khub....15 minute me gazal likh karke aapne to izzat baksh di hum sharabiyon ko aur kahte hain ke jahan sharab ho wahan mazak na ho aisa to mumkin nahi na.............. to lijiye................ tere jane ka gum aaram se seh gaye hum ab to bas tere aane ki fikkar sata rahi hai  tu mane ya na mane, sharab is dar se mujhe piye ja rahi hai...... koi galti ho gayi ho to nadan samajh kar maaf kar dijiyega.......... apka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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3rd April 2010, 12:12 PM
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ye afeeem Ghanja ki bachpan wali laaat teri kabhi nahi jayegi hahaha  |
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3rd April 2010, 01:27 PM
Secret Bhai......... Apna naam secret hi rakhiyenga...
Thanks for your apreciation......... Haan mainkuch mehfil ke liye kahne ki bahut kwahish rakhta tha isliye ek din baithe baithe yahan hi yeh Gazal kah dii.... Jee hasi mazak to zindagi ka hissa hia jo hona bhi chahiye.... Aate rhaiye, Khush rhaiye, Khuda Hafez......... Quote:
Thanks Rajendra Bhai......... Quote:
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Abey Dhkaan tere liye to ek sher zubaan per aa gaya......... Sun.. Muddayi lakh bura chahe to kya hota hai Wohi hota hai jo manzure khuda hota hai Aur aisi koi laat nahi jo badli nahi jaa sakti bus badalne wala chahiye... 
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3rd April 2010, 01:43 PM
Look who is talking................... A dil jala.....hahaha
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3rd April 2010, 01:47 PM
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tumhare saath aisa hua jankar dukh hua, So sad... Aur tere mashooq ke bachoN ko bolna bhi aa gaya.... fir to Baqz teri umar kam se kam 40-45 ki to hongi hi hai naa.....
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4th April 2010, 11:05 AM
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recently i've read somwhere you gonna move ur arse from here but you being a dingy character never gonna relieve the souls in here. Waise bhi for many you are like Pain in the rear end... In simple language "Hata Saawan ki ghaata" i will not give undue importance to your faltoo threads..... |
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4th April 2010, 02:00 PM
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Isliye tum padhte hi bhag gaye the kal.....http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i1...ley-faces6.gif Wel dude I also don't wana your faltoo comment on my post..... ..
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4th April 2010, 04:46 PM
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tahe dil se daad hazir hai.......qubuul karen.... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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