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saloni
 
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27th February 2007, 12:29 PM
Dil ki har dhadkan maine basa rakha haine tumko Apni in akho maine chupa rakhan haine tumko.... Har sash mai bass eak name hai tera Har ahat par kawal ehshash hai tera...... Buss eak barr tu bhi ikrar karta........ Tera haotho par bhi hota name "mera" aapki dost.....saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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27th February 2007, 11:04 PM
bhot khub
hamari daad kabul kijiye saloni ji yuhi likhite rehigha sach me jo likha ahi apne dil ko shu ghya khush rehna Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain Roo Roo Kar Us Ki Yaad May Soona Acha Lagta Hay jann raj
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saloni
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28th February 2007, 12:06 PM
shukriya aapna humari shayri padhi
bass yohi sath data rahiyaga ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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28th February 2007, 12:20 PM
wah saloni ji wah
kya baat kahi hai aapne apni is rachna mein dil ki har dhadkan mein basa rakha hai tujko, apni in aankho mein chhupa rakha hai tujko, wah dost wah saloni ji aapko sayad pehli baar padh raha hu aur aapki ye pehli hi rachna ne hamare dil ko chhua hai asha rakhta hu ki aap aage bhi ese hi likhte rahenge aur ese hi hamari mehfil mein ujala karte rahenge ese hi likhte rehna milte rehna aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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saloni
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28th February 2007, 02:16 PM
shukriya merul ji...
aap jasa acha shayarr na meri shayri padhi aur pasand ki issa huma bahut khusi hui. buss aap ka sath raha to hum aur acha likhaga...... aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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28th February 2007, 11:46 PM
saloni ji namskaar
ash'aar bahot achhe haiN bas thoRa typing meiN dhyaan rakheN.. aap isse bhi achha liKh sakti hai... apna khayal rakheN aur khusH raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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1st March 2007, 12:23 PM
dhaval ji bahut acha laga yan janka ki apko humari shayri passand aye.
bass asa hi hamara sath data rahiyaga. aur rahi bat aurr acha likhna ki to zarrur kyo nahi ........aapka sath raha to yakinan hum aur acha likhaga. aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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2nd March 2007, 05:19 AM
apne dil me kisi ko yuN basaaya na karo,
khud ko is kadar tum rulaaya na karo. rote haiN saath tumhare dost bhi, unki soch khud ko yun na tadpaaya karo....! bas yahi jawaab soojha saloni ji, aapko padhne ke baad, maafi chahunga agar kahin kuch galat keh gaya hun ya aapki kisi feeling ko theNs pahuNcha gaya huN...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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saloni
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2nd March 2007, 02:23 PM
lucky jii,
kasa hai aap?bahut dino bad jawab aya aapka. aur rahi bat bhawna ko thash pahuchna ki to dosto ka bat sa hum naraj nahi hota.kyoki inn dosto na hi to sath nibhaya hai.shukriya aap yaha aya aur humari shayri padhi. aab iss dard ko chupau kasa aa mera dost tumko ya dard batayo kasa aapki dost~saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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5th March 2007, 02:11 PM
hi saloni ji
how r u? sukhriya ki aapko hamara javab pasand aaya aur aap esa kyu kehte hai ki aapka sath raha to.... sath to hum yuhi nibhate rahenge, aur aap yuhi hamari mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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